Fantasy World: The Shadow Legion from the Start

The Holy Mother talks a lot. She talks like a primary school student. She is childish and confused.

The family should be destroyed first at the beginning. Otherwise, how can we stand up to the system? Where is the ninja group that I gave you?

The author's writing style is not very good. The main reason for giving five stars is for the content of Wei Wu's legacy, which is either about old women or on the road to saving women, or the kind of people who tell the truth without asking for anything in return. Moreover, the author's writing style cannot keep up.

The Holy Mother was bullied by her own family and didn't even dare to fart. If she could kill decisively, she would definitely look good.

The character of the protagonist is hard to describe in one sentence. As a time traveler, he is bullied like a dog by his family, but he just sighs in his heart that he is disappointed in his family!

Judging from the writing, the author should be a novice, so I won't criticize you. First of all, your protagonist's personality is not up to standard, and the world view is also not up to standard. The story is old-fashioned.

Give me some support, give me some encouragement

Or don't be a hero and save the beauty all the time. I'm tired of seeing this

The description is poor and the writing is poor. 🍉

It's so bad that you can't even use your brain when writing a novel?