(There is a male lead; the modern-day portion is brief)
One day, a game appeared on Gu Wenxing’s phone. She thought her luck had finally come and that it was finally her turn to transmigrate, but nothing happened.
As time went by, she accepted her fate. She decided to relax and play this cultivation game, where spending money wasn’t an option.
Then one day, while boosting a cultivator’s growth stats
He said, “I want to change my skin color.”
Gu Wenxing: “?”
He continued, “What kind of currency do you use over there? I have beauty pills, body-shaping pills, life-extending pills... Do you need any? I can trade them for something you have.”
Thinking she had nothing to lose, Gu Wenxing said, “I want a beauty pill. What skin color do you want?”
“Dark skin. I’ve been sick of pale skin for a long time.”
Gu Wenxing made the change and gave him dark skin. She thought it was just a one-off glitch, but he really did send her a beauty pill. The crystal-clear pill passed right through the phone screen and appeared beside her.
Gu Wenxing: What the hell, he’s got cheats!
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Not bad. After reading the article, most readers feel confused because they don't understand why the heroine insists on playing the game and even waits for a year for the update to guide other people's lives. The heroine can't get any benefits at the beginning, but can only gain happiness? It's a bit untenable. The heroine's character is not particularly distinctive. She seems a bit Buddhist? Kind? Also, there is a big gap between the game time and the real time. The heroine has little communication with the game protagonist. There is only one game protagonist for three or four chapters. I don't understand why those people like the heroine so much, and they are even a little paranoid. The relationship transition is not particularly good, but overall, this article is good ~ the newbie is already great! Big cheers for the author! Great writing!
The theme is quite new
The logic is smooth, the characterization is pretty good, there are no clerical errors, the emotional development of the male and female protagonists is not abrupt, and overall it is pretty good. But because it happens to be the one I like, it's five stars!
The author's writing style is very good, but I wish he could write more plainly and understandably. I have to read some sentences several times before I understand what they mean 😂 By the way, will there be a male protagonist?
Are there so few people? [What] [What] To be honest, I can't understand the front part. 🤭🤭 However, it looks good.
Who is the male protagonist? What's the hero's name?
I read a few chapters and thought it was quite interesting. Five stars first.
It's okay, but it's not very clear and a bit confusing.