An App That Cannot Travel Through Time Is Not a Good App

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The theme is quite new

Not bad. After reading the article, most readers feel confused because they don't understand why the heroine insists on playing the game and even waits for a year for the update to guide other people's lives. The heroine can't get any benefits at the beginning, but can only gain happiness? It's a bit untenable. The heroine's character is not particularly distinctive. She seems a bit Buddhist? Kind? Also, there is a big gap between the game time and the real time. The heroine has little communication with the game protagonist. There is only one game protagonist for three or four chapters. I don't understand why those people like the heroine so much, and they are even a little paranoid. The relationship transition is not particularly good, but overall, this article is good ~ the newbie is already great! Big cheers for the author! Great writing!

The logic is smooth, the characterization is pretty good, there are no clerical errors, the emotional development of the male and female protagonists is not abrupt, and overall it is pretty good. But because it happens to be the one I like, it's five stars!

The author's writing style is very good, but I wish he could write more plainly and understandably. I have to read some sentences several times before I understand what they mean [laughing and crying] By the way, will there be a male protagonist?

Are there so few people? [What] [What] To be honest, I can't understand the front part. [Laughing][Laughing] However, it looks good.

Who is the male protagonist? What's the hero's name?

It's okay, but it's not very clear and a bit confusing.

I read a few chapters and thought it was quite interesting. Five stars first.