From Reality************

Newbie, new book, please give me five-star praise [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

I'm a little worried that the protagonist will tell me the wrong choice. I think the punishment of being turned into a velvet ball is more uncomfortable for me than letting the protagonist die. The protagonist can only be my (crossed out) heroine, but I like the plot very much. I just discovered that I have read all the author's books. I finished the first one and half of the second one [Eating Melon]

Love it, love it, there are many cars and cars, Lily

A bunch of useful cells make up a useless me [face covering]

Ye Xingyi = Qu Liyan, Felice = Ying Wen, Bai Weiwei = Tong Yao. The plot is all about harem Lily [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] The author has been doing this for a long time and copied himself [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

Hey, it's me again, I'll give you five stars as per the old rules.

Support Baihewen. I have read all three books. The scene in one or three books where a woman disguises herself as a man is really not very good. The second one where she travels through the game world and becomes an NPC to issue mission settings to the players is good.

The author should be a newcomer, and his writing style feels relatively immature compared to other authors. Some places feel like they lack details and are rather blunt, while others are weird. For example, the girl next door that Gemini wrote at the beginning was identified by the protagonist as a yandere just because she said she likes cats... But after all, people mature slowly, and I hope the author can write better and better [Sending my heart] And... Drive less, it's easier to run out of books [face covering]

I feel that the author has also worked very hard to improve the plot. It is very hard to say that at least 5 stars is my lower limit (personal opinion). I read it for almost a week from the beginning to the end. I feel my heartbeat is also jumping. I also think about the places I have experienced. It is the first time I read a book on this type of subject and it is indeed more attractive to me [Thinking] As for the plot, I really can't tell what story is being told at the beginning, but it still kept my appetite. Of course, as the author said, the ending was a bit rushed, but it felt good. I think it was difficult to write the ending well. There is a passage that I think is very good: a man was walking by the river, which was prose, but when the man suddenly fell into the water, it became a novel. How did he fall in? Why did you fall in? What will be the reaction after falling? I think these are the opportunities to write novels. Of course, I don't think I can guess the author's thoughts regarding the character settings. Maybe it's due to interest, or is it for other reasons? I can't guess these, but in the process of character creation, some details are very important. Maybe the requirements for decimals are still a bit high, after all, I am not writing prose, but there are indeed many applications of details in novels. I think the author's description of the characters seems to tell the whole story from the author's perspective, and there are many plots happening at the same time. I think he did a very good job in this. I think it might be better if there were more hints. Maybe my knowledge is very short-sighted and I have misunderstood or misunderstood the author's meaning, but this is probably what I want to express. Also, author, why did you name yourself Pigeon King? I don't think you are a pigeon either! ? I'm looking forward to the author's next work! ! !

... How should I put it? I never thought that the book that turned into a fantasy loli would be yours. I found it very interesting and collected it. It's a pity that I didn't finish it in the end. Just look at 4 pictures. (Maybe a lot. Anyway, I don't remember it.) This book is also quite good. There is a section in the middle where two girls... I won't talk about it. Everyone who knows knows. It's that part about them that I find unacceptable. (Maybe. Who knows?) Then go back to the previous book. I found out that the author is actually you. I am also planning to continue reading this book. Come on! [Praise]

It's good-looking, but it's full of philosophy [laughing evilly] (Philosophy is yellow)

How can I put it, the front looks very good, but the harem in the back is a bit unacceptable. Maybe I watched too much one-on-one. Anyway, I highly recommend it. Anyway, it looks good, but it is a little too changed. For details, please see Chapter 117 - Courtesy Reciprocity

It's really nice and astringent. Let me tell you quietly, the holy water is sweet [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Depending on how long I last, there's nothing to say. It's over, I'll give you a penalty for being sloppy★ [laughing evilly]

(ಡωಡ) Very pretty▬▬▬▬.◙.▬▬▬▬ ▂▄▄▓▄▄▂ ◢◤ █▀▀████▄▄▄▄▄◢◤ █Xiao Group's special aircraft▀▀▀▀╬ ◥███████◤ ══╩══╩════I send straight ▬▬▬▬.◙.▬▬▬▬ ▂▄▄▓▄▄▂ ◢◤ █▀▀████▄▄▄▄▄◢◤ █Do you want to invite me to dinner? ▀▀▀▀╬ ◥███████◤ ══╩══╩════I have enough ammunition to shoot down all your planes ●███▄▄▄▄▄▄●●●●●●●●● ▄▅██████▅▄▃▂ ██████████████ ◥⊙▲⊙▲⊙▲⊙▲⊙▲⊙▲◤The plane will pick you up. The plane will pick you up. Author hurry up and thank me! I sent you several typos and corrected them ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა

I've read Chapter 8 so far, and I feel pretty good about it, but the options always appear, which makes me uninteresting. I'd say it's free, but it's the author who takes the place. As an author, you should know that what you create should be a living character, not a controlled puppet. I suggest you add more thinking about the protagonist. If you look at other books, the system has run away, and it's all up to the protagonist himself.

Very good, just like what a brother said before: Escape from the laboratory and become a butter heroine [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Awesome, what would happen if it were replaced by comics?

The book is very good. Come on, come on, come on...

Emmm... Although the plot of this book is not very good, the reason why I gave it five stars is because the car is fast [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] After all, who doesn't like all kinds of weird and astringent stories?

If I remember correctly, before I reviewed it, it was around six o'clock, and after I reviewed it, it was 7.0

Notice what the little loli is holding on the cover? [Laughing]

Escape from the laboratory and become a butter heroine.

Put the bread in it and fry it, and it will turn into butter toast directly.

How should I put it, the ending... Was okay, pretty good [laughs]

Before I knew it, it was over

Lemon fruit on lemon tree You and me under the lemon tree You and I eat lemon fruit together Lemon will kill you and me I'm going to die of acid, but at the same time this book is also very good to read, but Wang Ke is a bit miserable

Overall, this novel was well written. Of course, this is my personal feeling. How exactly? Just go and see for yourselves. [Top post][Top post][Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile]

Very nice - 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111 Author please update quickly

It's very interesting and a satisfying lily novel [shy]