Swallowing*****

I hope I can write a good book

Don't have bad peach blossoms, it's best to have a single heroine

Finally I saw a good swallowing fanfic, give it a 👍 Make some suggestions (I hope the author can see them) One problem is that the reward system written by the author feels very confusing. The author may have forgotten what he wrote about some of the rewards. There are too many. Since it is a sign-in system, you can save up for several months or a year to sign in. This way, it will not be too complicated and it will not be too uncomfortable for people to watch. Moreover, the protagonist is now much ahead of the original protagonist. I feel I feel that the rewards given are too many. I hope that the author will digest the rewards that have been given in the next few pictures. After giving reasonable rewards to the protagonist, it is power. Building power in the early stage without strength will make people guess the source of those things. Second, it will be too troublesome. When the protagonist and Luo Feng reach the advanced God of War or planet level, it will not be good for the two of them to build a power. The above are purely personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like them

Come on, doesn't everything come from scratch? Work hard Trust you.

As long as you keep updating, as long as you don't enter the palace, you will definitely be able to do it🔥[sneaky laugh][sneaky smile][sneaky smile][sneaky smile][sneaky smile]

In terms of the overall quality of Tomato, this book can be rated above 9.5 Points. Of course, this does not mean how good this book is, but it means that after reading a lot of Tomato books (referring to the magic drama), I saw a person with a clear face, and I couldn't help but give it a five-star praise [Chigua]

It looks good so far

Is this book also going to be crazy? In the past few days, several books written about devouring are gone! ! !

Come on! It's not easy to see the book that I devoured

Good job, author, the writing is quite good.

It's good to read. It's one of the few Devouring Starry Sky fanfics on Tomato. Although the author said it's his first time writing a novel, it's already very good to read. I recommend [Learn] ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩

Can you update more? [Laughing and crying] [covering face] I feel like it's not enough [thinking]

Why did it end suddenly [crying][crying][crying]

@ Come on, let's watch together

Come on, work hard, hurry up and write

Author: I said I was going to be driven crazy

I think it's pretty cool, come on💪

This is really a good book. I highly recommend it. The plot is rich and fits the plot of the original work. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it😄😄

The writing is good and I like it. Five stars, cheers for the author. 💪️

Not bad. Come on, author.

Not bad, almost the same as the original text

Very good, good luck to the author.

You are generous, come on,

Why did it end suddenly [what]

I hope it doesn't end badly in the end - gives great hope

Come on, this devouring novel is quite good, but it's too torturous to update every few days.

You can add oil to dry it, but you can't stop grinding.

Yes, another genre I like. Goodbye brothers.