In Swallowed Star, Luo Feng and I Become Brothers
在吞噬我和罗峰做兄弟
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 80k Words
- Genre
- –
- Subgenre
- –
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
43Chapters
3Reads
6.3Score
1Listens
103.6kReads · all time
In booklists 9
Swallowed Star Is No Longer a Masterpiece? Prove Me Wrong
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Reader comments 28
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I hope I can write a good book
Don't have bad peach blossoms, it's best to have a single heroine
Finally I saw a good swallowing fanfic, give it a 👍 Make some suggestions (I hope the author can see them) One problem is that the reward system written by the author feels very confusing. The author may have forgotten what he wrote about some of the rewards. There are too many. Since it is a sign-in system, you can save up for several months or a year to sign in. This way, it will not be too complicated and it will not be too uncomfortable for people to watch. Moreover, the protagonist is now much ahead of the original protagonist. I feel I feel that the rewards given are too many. I hope that the author will digest the rewards that have been given in the next few pictures. After giving reasonable rewards to the protagonist, it is power. Building power in the early stage without strength will make people guess the source of those things. Second, it will be too troublesome. When the protagonist and Luo Feng reach the advanced God of War or planet level, it will not be good for the two of them to build a power. The above are purely personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like them
Come on, doesn't everything come from scratch? Work hard Trust you.
In terms of the overall quality of Tomato, this book can be rated above 9.5 Points. Of course, this does not mean how good this book is, but it means that after reading a lot of Tomato books (referring to the magic drama), I saw a person with a clear face, and I couldn't help but give it a five-star praise [Chigua]
As long as you keep updating, as long as you don't enter the palace, you will definitely be able to do it🔥[sneaky laugh][sneaky smile][sneaky smile][sneaky smile][sneaky smile]
It looks good so far
Is this book also going to be crazy? In the past few days, several books written about devouring are gone!!!
Good job, author, the writing is quite good.
Come on! It's not easy to see the book that I devoured