[Short story I has been completed] [Mom-type boyfriend vs. Hot-tongued girl] [1v1+road story+healing+two-way redemption+weird daily life]
The summer when I was seventeen years old was always filled with heat, boredom, and the energy of having nowhere to go.
Li You ran away from the hospital at Bai Yuye and embarked on a journey without a destination.
Buses, train stations, breakfast shops, oil paintings.
When she came outside, she suddenly realized that the world was so lovely, and at that moment she made up her mind.
She wanted to take a look and see the beautiful seaside at the end of the world.
On the way she met a young man.
Under the high wall, the young man's thin body seemed to be blown by the wind.
Li Youbai sat on the wall, lowered his head, and reached out to him, "Come up."
At that moment, the boy's eyes flashed, hiding deep feelings that she couldn't understand.
Behind the young man was a raging fire, but in front of him was a small white hand that could be grasped.
At that moment, he also made up his mind, and he was so firm that he took it without retreating.
From inside the wall to outside the wall, from under the bridge to the river to the seaside.
This time a bold girl meets a reserved and world-weary boy.
Reader comments
I really like this story. The two people redeem each other. Although the story is very short, the character traits of the characters in it are well shaped. Grandma Luo in it is also a person who impressed me deeply. Although she is not forgiving, she really likes Yuzi and You An. Everyone in this story seems to have their own story. The author's writing style is great. It is also very good, it is the kind of simple but touching text. The pasts of Yuzi and You An are very distressing, but fortunately they met each other, they redeemed each other and finally had a family of their own. Although the author did not write much about their future lives, I believe that they will live happily in their own world. This is the first time I have written such a long review, because only in this way can I express my love for this book. It is really super beautiful. I really love this book [love]! Finally, I look forward to the author's next book, and I also wish the author a great success in his book 🔥 Give the author my heartfelt thanks (∩.˙ω˙.)⊃━♥°.*˙.
This book is really good to read. Although you may not understand it when you first read it, it will be better if you read a few more chapters. The author's writing style is also very good. Of course, the whole novel is also very real and touching. There are also distinct characters. "Grandma Luo" is that The "old woman" only ordered "Li Youbai" and "You An" to work at first, but later "Grandma Luo" regarded them as her own children. Unfortunately, "Grandma Luo" passed away later, and "Li Youbai" and "You An" also left. There are also two girls who insist on staying together regardless of other people's opinions. Finally, "You An" and "Li Youbai" got together, and "Li Youbai" said to "You An": "Let's find a home." That is to say, the writing style of the whole film is very good and exciting, and it is really good to watch. However, there are a few flaws. The extra chapter only talks about the experience of "Li Youbai", but the male and female protagonists are also very sweet. I really recommend it. It is very beautiful and it is not a loss to invest in. I firmly believe that this book will be popular one day. (I hope the author can also write about more happy lives of "Li Youbai" and "You An" after they get married, thank you!!!) [Top post]
I still like this book very much, and I like people with a character like You An
Although it is short, the plot is compact and real, and it is really impeccable. Both Yuan and Yuzi are so heartbreaking that they almost cry. They rely on each other and save each other. I won't allow anyone who hasn't read this treasure book to [go crazy] to make me angry! ! !
You An is innocent, taciturn, firm and loyal, while Yuzi is bold, enthusiastic, straightforward and straightforward. On the journey to find the sea, two people with completely different personalities accommodated each other and ran in both directions. Stories must end, but not everyone has an ending. The story of You An and You Zi is over, but the beautiful life of You An and You Zi has just begun.
(I really like this book. The ending is so fitting that I will never forget it~[Love]
It's a very short novel, and I finished it in about an hour, but it was really healing and beautiful. The two people met in surprise, slowly healed, and accompanied each other. From the beginning of distrust, to the end of finding a home together; from the beginning of one person being covered in mud, to the end of two people looking forward to the future together; from the beginning of one person being ridiculed and scolded and falling into the mud, to the end of a group of teenagers running towards the seaside towards the future. Although the story is short, the two of them have seen and experienced a lot along the way. They ran away from each other, dreamed of the sea on paper, met in the smell of gunpowder, helped him rekindle hope, met the best old lady, robbed a car and fled, couples who met at first sight, domestic violence couples, family members who met secretly, met similar friends... They saw, met, grew through experience, supported each other, accompanied each other, their stories are to be continued...
It's been a long, long time since I read Tomato. I've seen such a well-written work. After reading a great article and novel, I feel really refreshed.
I don't know if the author still writes books, I don't know if I still read and write books on this website, and I don't know if I can see this book review. This novel is really my favorite short story among romance novels. It is very warm and healing. I have read this novel 4 times in the past six months. I like Yuzi very much and I like Yuan very much. Every time I read it, I click on the author's homepage to see if any new books have been released. I am looking forward to it but a little afraid of you. I won't write a book in the future, or will I write a book on another website? I really want to see more works from you, the author. This is the first time I have come across this kind of road story. It is really well written. I like Yuzi and envy her for finding Yu An. I believe in love every time I read it. My only relationship has a beginning and an end. It's so sad that I really don't believe there is love in the world. After reading this book, I really want to meet my own Yu An. I really hope to see more of the author's works become popular in the future.
I swear here that if I have money in the future, I will make this novel into a movie.
Finally, I hope everyone can find their own Yuan.
This is my first time reading this type of article, wow! It's really good to watch. I like this kind of short story very much. The love line between Yuan and Yuzi is also very good. They redeem each other. It's really good. I can read it in half a day.
It looks good with your eyes wide open. There is no system or anything else. Why is it so good-looking? This is what a truly good author is, an awesome author, and a good writer, that's all I can say. [Cry]
I really like this kind of thing, very brave, very much like me in the dream, hahaha, I do a lot of things in my dreams that I can't do now.
It's so good! The plot is quite good. My aunt laughed the whole time I watched it. Some parts were quite touching, which was quite healing. [Love][Sending Hearts]
This book is really good
Listening to the color of youth, I really feel like reading this article. Li Youbai and You An really redeem each other. I still feel uncomfortable after seeing the ending, but Yuzi and the weirdo will definitely live a happy life. Of course, the most uneasy one is Luo Chunhua. The old woman is really good. I will really cry after reading this.
It's a very interesting book. The escaped crazy girl and the little fool finally have a home of their own.
2022.12.4
At their destination, the seaside
I feel sorry for them, the content is great
I really, really love grapefruit
Li Youbai and Zhou Youan yyds from behind!
It's such a pity that old woman
I like it very much [crying] [crying] Youzi and You An can be said to be two-way redemption. You An's experience is very distressing, and so does Yuzi, but the two of them must be happy in the future. Grandma Luo is really good at crying [crying] [crying] There are two girls who can also be together [crying] and a group of students behind me. I also want to go to the beach in the early morning [crying] I think it is very healing. I really like it [crying] [crying]
Two weak souls rely on each other. Although they are weak but not fragile, they are frank and sincere, attracting each other, rushing towards their own future passionately, and having a home that belongs to both of them.
They are really super brave
The male protagonist is the image of a silly boyfriend in my heart. The plot is very interesting and makes our minds run wild.
I really didn't understand it at the beginning, but after reading the comments in the comment area, I insisted on reading again. The more I saw some parts in the back, it would be inexplicable and frustrating. Especially at the end, Li Youbai said to You An: Weird, let's find a home. I felt that this sentence made me cry [cry][cry][cry][cry]
"Poke" [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
If given the chance I hope this book will be on my bookshelf
It's really impressive. I won't say much more about whether the author has considered making this book a physical book. I really want to think about it.
It's great, maybe it's the light of redemption for the two of them in the depressing atmosphere.
A small shortcoming is that the later plot is a bit rushed, and the content of the city, college entrance examination, truth-telling, etc. Is not in line with the style of the previous old generation. At the same time, the male and female protagonists have not explained their education status, but they naturally accepted the student status of their peers, which is somewhat lacking in logic.
The overall flaws are not hidden, but there are still some regrets.
I really like road stories, and I also like this book!
The title of the book reminds me of a song "Summer Night Defection". Summer Night Defection takes advantage of the youth to announce to the world, marking the footnote of youth... It is quite suitable for this book. It is beautiful! ! ! ! !
Since then, the boy has his salvation, and the girl has a weirdo who protects her. They belong to each other and have a place called home. Welcome you to join hands in this beautiful world.
The right person will eventually meet, please allow me to be your summer
Redeem each other, look good. The author will publish a physical book in the future, so remember to give it a thumbs up and want to buy it.
It's really healing. The hero's father really loves it. I finished it in one night.
Summer Defection, the content is the same as the title of the book. The whole text feels very free. It is the way of love that I yearn for. It is different from the content of previous novels. It is really good.
👋🏻2023.9.27
It was the first time I read this kind of article. The subject matter was niche. I couldn't read it at first (because I had never read this type of article). Then I kept reading. I accidentally finished it and I was quite reluctant to let it go.
The two-way redemption of the male and female protagonists and the collision of two weak souls. I think the author wrote it very well! Especially the male protagonist is shy and blushing. I really like it hahaha! Like a little daughter-in-law
This is true two-way salvation
Beautiful, very healing [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
I really like this story. The two people redeem each other. Although the story is very short, the character traits of the characters in it are well shaped. Grandma Luo in it is also a person who impressed me deeply. Although she is not forgiving, she really likes Yuzi and You An. Everyone in this story seems to have their own story. The author's writing style is great. It is also very good, it is the kind of simple but touching text. The pasts of Yuzi and You An are very distressing, but fortunately they met each other, they redeemed each other and finally had a family of their own. Although the author did not write much about their future lives, I believe that they will live happily in their own world. This is the first time I have written such a long review, because only in this way can I express my love for this book. It is really super beautiful. I really love this book [love]! Finally, I look forward to the author's next book, and I also wish the author a great success in his book 🔥 Give the author my heartfelt thanks (∩.˙ω˙.)⊃━♥°.*˙.
This book is really good to read. Although you may not understand it when you first read it, it will be better if you read a few more chapters. The author's writing style is also very good. Of course, the whole novel is also very real and touching. There are also distinct characters. "Grandma Luo" is that The "old woman" only ordered "Li Youbai" and "You An" to work at first, but later "Grandma Luo" regarded them as her own children. Unfortunately, "Grandma Luo" passed away later, and "Li Youbai" and "You An" also left. There are also two girls who insist on staying together regardless of other people's opinions. Finally, "You An" and "Li Youbai" got together, and "Li Youbai" said to "You An": "Let's find a home." That is to say, the writing style of the whole film is very good and exciting, and it is really good to watch. However, there are a few flaws. The extra chapter only talks about the experience of "Li Youbai", but the male and female protagonists are also very sweet. I really recommend it. It is very beautiful and it is not a loss to invest in. I firmly believe that this book will be popular one day. (I hope the author can also write about more happy lives of "Li Youbai" and "You An" after they get married, thank you!!!) [Top post] I still like this book very much, and I like people with a character like You An
Although it is short, the plot is compact and real, and it is really impeccable. Both Yuan and Yuzi are so heartbreaking that they almost cry. They rely on each other and save each other. I won't allow anyone who hasn't read this treasure book to [go crazy] to make me angry! ! ! You An is innocent, taciturn, firm and loyal, while Yuzi is bold, enthusiastic, straightforward and straightforward. On the journey to find the sea, two people with completely different personalities accommodated each other and ran in both directions. Stories must end, but not everyone has an ending. The story of You An and You Zi is over, but the beautiful life of You An and You Zi has just begun. (I really like this book. The ending is so fitting that I will never forget it~[Love]
It's a very short novel, and I finished it in about an hour, but it was really healing and beautiful. The two people met in surprise, slowly healed, and accompanied each other. From the beginning of distrust, to the end of finding a home together; from the beginning of one person being covered in mud, to the end of two people looking forward to the future together; from the beginning of one person being ridiculed and scolded and falling into the mud, to the end of a group of teenagers running towards the seaside towards the future. Although the story is short, the two of them have seen and experienced a lot along the way. They ran away from each other, dreamed of the sea on paper, met in the smell of gunpowder, helped him rekindle hope, met the best old lady, robbed a car and fled, couples who met at first sight, domestic violence couples, family members who met secretly, met similar friends... They saw, met, grew through experience, supported each other, accompanied each other, their stories are to be continued... It's been a long, long time since I read Tomato. I've seen such a well-written work. After reading a great article and novel, I feel really refreshed.
I don't know if the author still writes books, I don't know if I still read and write books on this website, and I don't know if I can see this book review. This novel is really my favorite short story among romance novels. It is very warm and healing. I have read this novel 4 times in the past six months. I like Yuzi very much and I like Yuan very much. Every time I read it, I click on the author's homepage to see if any new books have been released. I am looking forward to it but a little afraid of you. I won't write a book in the future, or will I write a book on another website? I really want to see more works from you, the author. This is the first time I have come across this kind of road story. It is really well written. I like Yuzi and envy her for finding Yu An. I believe in love every time I read it. My only relationship has a beginning and an end. It's so sad that I really don't believe there is love in the world. After reading this book, I really want to meet my own Yu An. I really hope to see more of the author's works become popular in the future. I swear here that if I have money in the future, I will make this novel into a movie. Finally, I hope everyone can find their own Yuan.
This is my first time reading this type of article, wow! It's really good to watch. I like this kind of short story very much. The love line between Yuan and Yuzi is also very good. They redeem each other. It's really good. I can read it in half a day.
It looks good with your eyes wide open. There is no system or anything else. Why is it so good-looking? This is what a truly good author is, an awesome author, and a good writer, that's all I can say. [Cry]
I really like this kind of thing, very brave, very much like me in the dream, hahaha, I do a lot of things in my dreams that I can't do now.
It's so good! The plot is quite good. My aunt laughed the whole time I watched it. Some parts were quite touching, which was quite healing. [Love][Sending Hearts]
This book is really good
Listening to the color of youth, I really feel like reading this article. Li Youbai and You An really redeem each other. I still feel uncomfortable after seeing the ending, but Yuzi and the weirdo will definitely live a happy life. Of course, the most uneasy one is Luo Chunhua. The old woman is really good. I will really cry after reading this.
It's a very interesting book. The escaped crazy girl and the little fool finally have a home of their own. 2022.12.4 At their destination, the seaside
I feel sorry for them, the content is great
I really, really love grapefruit Li Youbai and Zhou Youan yyds from behind! It's such a pity that old woman
I like it very much [crying] [crying] Youzi and You An can be said to be two-way redemption. You An's experience is very distressing, and so does Yuzi, but the two of them must be happy in the future. Grandma Luo is really good at crying [crying] [crying] There are two girls who can also be together [crying] and a group of students behind me. I also want to go to the beach in the early morning [crying] I think it is very healing. I really like it [crying] [crying]
Two weak souls rely on each other. Although they are weak but not fragile, they are frank and sincere, attracting each other, rushing towards their own future passionately, and having a home that belongs to both of them. They are really super brave
The male protagonist is the image of a silly boyfriend in my heart. The plot is very interesting and makes our minds run wild.
I really didn't understand it at the beginning, but after reading the comments in the comment area, I insisted on reading again. The more I saw some parts in the back, it would be inexplicable and frustrating. Especially at the end, Li Youbai said to You An: Weird, let's find a home. I felt that this sentence made me cry [cry][cry][cry][cry] "Poke" [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
If given the chance I hope this book will be on my bookshelf
It's really impressive. I won't say much more about whether the author has considered making this book a physical book. I really want to think about it.
It's great, maybe it's the light of redemption for the two of them in the depressing atmosphere. A small shortcoming is that the later plot is a bit rushed, and the content of the city, college entrance examination, truth-telling, etc. Is not in line with the style of the previous old generation. At the same time, the male and female protagonists have not explained their education status, but they naturally accepted the student status of their peers, which is somewhat lacking in logic. The overall flaws are not hidden, but there are still some regrets.
I really like road stories, and I also like this book! The title of the book reminds me of a song "Summer Night Defection". Summer Night Defection takes advantage of the youth to announce to the world, marking the footnote of youth... It is quite suitable for this book. It is beautiful! ! ! ! !
Since then, the boy has his salvation, and the girl has a weirdo who protects her. They belong to each other and have a place called home. Welcome you to join hands in this beautiful world.
The right person will eventually meet, please allow me to be your summer
Redeem each other, look good. The author will publish a physical book in the future, so remember to give it a thumbs up and want to buy it.
It's really healing. The hero's father really loves it. I finished it in one night.
Summer Defection, the content is the same as the title of the book. The whole text feels very free. It is the way of love that I yearn for. It is different from the content of previous novels. It is really good.
👋🏻2023.9.27 It was the first time I read this kind of article. The subject matter was niche. I couldn't read it at first (because I had never read this type of article). Then I kept reading. I accidentally finished it and I was quite reluctant to let it go. The two-way redemption of the male and female protagonists and the collision of two weak souls. I think the author wrote it very well! Especially the male protagonist is shy and blushing. I really like it hahaha! Like a little daughter-in-law
This is true two-way salvation
Beautiful, very healing [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]