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Good looking, but missing

Author, let me give you a few suggestions. For example, in terms of soul skills, I think displacement requires apparation. For the eighth or ninth soul skill's large-scale group attack, can Grindelwald's fire shield be used to protect Dumbledore's Vulcan to clear the way? A single-target burst attack is like a heart-breaking attack. The setting of Avada Kedavra is a bit difficult to deal with. Should it be counted as soul damage or mental damage? Let me tell you in advance that I like this novel very much and I just want to know what the ending will be like? I hope there will be a better ending, without a lot of people dying, a happy ending, wouldn't it be nice? Bibi Dong is also quite pitiful. It's all Qian Xunji's fault. Personally, I like Qian Renxue better. You know what I mean! Hey hey hey! But author, have you ever thought about something? In the finale, you must become a god. It is a bit unrealistic to believe in becoming a god. It can only be inherited. Merlin's inheritance is a bit far-fetched. It is not subtle! There will be no problem if you just follow the main storyline in the early stage, but the Killing City area is a problem. Does it have this role? You can't use your soul skills, and your magic wand turns into a small stick. It's a pity that you don't have that role. You have to work harder!

It's very good. It's one of the few good novels about Douluo Dalu that I've read. I hope the author will continue writing it.

Support my brother [laughing]

There is a question. The seventh soul skill, the spirit avatar, can't just be a stick. The protagonist's spirit is the material of the Elder Wand in Harry Potter. The Elder Wand is one of the Three Hallows of Death. I'm very curious about what the spirit avatar will be like.

Can I leave Shrek?

I feel that the author has good literary talent. The descriptions are very graphic and the plot is quite reasonable so far. All in all, it is a very high-quality fanfic. I hope the author will continue to maintain it.

Best I've ever seen! Come on✊

Very beautiful, this kind of fanfic is what I have been looking for [send heart][send heart][send heart]

There is currently a problem. After absorbing a five-thousand-year-old soul ring between the ages of seven and ten, it is not a problem to upgrade to the third level of soul power, that is, directly to level 23, and then to the third level in three years. There are no other problems.

I like the protagonist's personality

The writing is good. It is a rare aboriginal who is not a time traveler. The writing is very good.

Brothers, score points

Come on, come on, come on

It won't be sent, it's been 4 days

It's good to watch, the characters are very distinct, and the supporting roles are wonderful. It's a dream come true.

Happy today is my birthday

The author creates a group of book friends

Not bad, good looking, come on

Looks good but too short You are really short and sharp, but you are so short that it is of no use to you. You are [smile][smile]

Stop pressing. Below 5, the book will be gone within a few minutes.

Wow ~ (Douluo + HP fantasy linkage)

It looks good, I hope the author will work harder

After reading a few chapters, I feel pretty good. I am relatively objective about the characters in the original work, and Goldfinger is relatively new. Although there are some confusing operations, such as "The soul king only needs soul power" and "Wizard Sword Style", but overall it is okay. Six points is a bit too low.

Author, there won't be a harem! Doesn't the protagonist know Douluo Continent?

The resume is very interesting [laughs crookedly]

Don't seal it, don't seal it, don't seal it Press, press, press

Douluo version of Grindelwald.

Press it, fear of being raped [I'm about to cry]

Not bad now, keep up the good work