Pure Desire

Personal opinion, don't spray if you don't like it The beginning is more attractive. The strong female protagonist is also my favorite type. I fell in love right away. However, the setting of the male protagonist is obviously not very good. The introduction talks about Shuang Jie, but the article contains constant gossip. The contradiction is more prominent. There is also the male protagonist's speech problem at the beginning. No matter what the heroine does, he always says that she is coquettish, but there is some doting in the words. First of all, coquettish is a derogatory term. I don't think it can be put together with my love for the heroine. It is a contradiction. Next is the problem of plot setting. The clues in the whole article are very confusing. At the beginning, it is said that the male protagonist hates the female protagonist. Finally, it is said that the male protagonist has been secretly in love with the female protagonist for many years. This is contradictory. There is also the development of the plot. The male protagonist and the female protagonist quarrel and there is almost no reconciliation process, which makes people feel baffled. There are many such problems throughout the article. I hope it can be improved. Secondly, the description of the characters is not clear. It is difficult to see the image of the characters in the image described by the author. The appearance of some supporting characters does not need to be very abrupt. In the end, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is almost invisible, as if they fell in love after doing it once (there is also a description of the male protagonist searching for what to do for the first time later in the article. It is a contradiction. However, the advantages of this article are also obvious. For example, the plot is more attractive, the story is not procrastinating, and it makes people want to read on. It took me more than 2 hours to read this book. It is relatively rough. If there are any inappropriate points above, please point them out. I also hope that the author can see my suggestions and bring you better works. Thank you!

This is the second book I have read in its entirety. It is really good. I am one of those people who has a sense of freshness. I stop reading a book after reading a few chapters. But I have finished reading this book, which shows that it is really good. Super Universe Invincible is very good. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Wrong, it is the third book ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

This book is really, really, really good to read. The genre of this book is different from others. How can I put it, I just finished reading it and felt it wasn't enough. Give it a try. If it looks good, add it to your bookshelf. If it doesn't, just slide it away.

The content is pretty good, the pace is fast, and it doesn't drag on. There is no messy mistress to cause trouble. The heroine has a very sassy character. Although she is emboldened because of her background, she still decisively fights back against foreign invaders. Like. The interaction between the two people is as sweet as that of enemies.

A sober and reserved girl vs. A harsh and talkative young master On the first day of their wedding, he didn't come back, so the heroine came to catch him on the order of his grandfather. She was wearing a classical cheongsam, and her elegant and elegant temperament was incompatible with the luxurious atmosphere here. Who is Chu Run? There is a famous second-generation ancestor in the circle, a senior palace-level playboy. There are thousands of girls around me, and they will always be twenty-two. She threatened him, but he was happy with it Chasing Wife Crematorium + Marriage First, Love Later 😎

Although some parts are not clearly written, it is quite interesting. It is also not written whether Jiang Jingrui will come back after their children are born. I still want to watch the extras. There are too few. Please update 😳

It's so damn good, I read it in one sitting, thumbs up for the author

It's really super good, but when I read this book, I still felt a little angry. The male protagonist is really a bit scumbag, but the whole book really surprised me. It's so beautiful, and I think Gu Zhifei is a bit uneasy, as if I gave him a match😭😭😭Finally, I hope the author can publish a new book soon

It's really, really super good-looking. Although the male protagonist is a bit slutty, the rest is pretty good. The female protagonist is so difficult. She has been suffering from PTSD and depression and is still distressed. But she met her good medicine.

Hui Chang is very good-looking, but I feel like the number of words is a bit short. It would be nice if there were more. It's really not enough.