Starting in Tokyo: Black and White Takes All

^ - ^Have a bubble! Qingchuan's setting: Due to plot considerations, the identity of the protagonist will be somewhat doubtful at first, but it is clear that he is a ghoul! System: I am a fan of the same genre, so I chose to weaken the system and use it only as a support! Hostess: It must be me, Aite Woodchuck! Hmm... As for the others, the author is not good at it, so I can only write slowly. If you have any questions, you can discuss it in the book review, or leave a message below. Although I am driving screws every day, I will read the comments. Thank you all for your support! Supplement: It has been promoted recently, and many people said that I copied the original work. I was stunned, and some said why not kill that so-and-so [face covering]! This book is divided into three volumes: Tokyo-attack, Berlin-jing, ירושלים-cut, and then there are extra chapters! Although I may not write well, I think this idea is very good! The author is a working-class person who doesn't need to write online to support his family. Of course, if he can make extra money, that would be great; Therefore, I also hope that everyone will be merciful. I am doing it more for hobby and sharing. There is no need to be tit-for-tat. If you like it, just read on. If you don't like it, just change it. Of course, since you are here to write, right, you should have requirements for me. However, I am doing my best and not selling my body.

Not bad, but too little. I recommend updating 10,000 times a day [Like]

Get started with five stars|･ω･｀)

Weakness is the original sin. Human nature is bloodthirsty.

Actually, I don't want Mato to die. Even if he kills someone else's whole family, he's just a ghoul, not a human being.

It's okay, although some details are not rigorous, but it's not bad. The previous plot is basically the same as the original drama, and the protagonist rarely participates. Later, the author may have woken up and slowly reduced the plot of the original drama. Kaneki's role also gradually decreased, and the protagonist became more like a protagonist. The author also came up with more and more ideas, which is very good. Speaking of which, this is the first time I wrote Takashou Arima as the villain boss. , And finally the origin of the ghoul, but the story is a bit sadistic, and the last few chapters are a bit rushed and sloppy. It would be better to write a few more chapters to refine the plot, oh! The author's setting of the protagonist and world view is also very novel and interesting to watch.

The author's writing style is quite good. He gives a complete and brief summary of the plot. It is very consistent with the original work. The description of the characters in the original work is also very consistent. I hope that writing fan fiction can make some changes. Most readers read fan fiction just to see some different stories that happened in the original story line and fill in some regrettable endings. The vernacular is: there is no difference from the original work. What happened in the original work happened completely here, and the development of the story line was interspersed in the middle. The author expressed it completely. The author expressed the plot, but there was no innovation. Those who knew the plot had no desire to read it, and those who did not know it did not understand it clearly. I would recommend this book to the ten people around me.

Emm, except for the slow update of Teemo, this book is very good and the characters are very fleshed out. I haven't written a book review for a long time because the score is already high and there is no need. This book has a rating of 7.3. I don't understand it a bit. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Author, if you have time, you can write about the background stories and some settings of GFG and the Chinese Ghoul Organization. Even if you mention it, it would be better, because some people who only watch anime and not comics don't know some settings at all. If you can mention it a little bit, the whole plot may be clearer, and there won't be so many people who say they can't understand it.

It fills in many of my regrets. It may be a little close to the original novel, but I think it is necessary. If Hinami and Kaneki had not experienced the first things in their journey, it might have been a really cool novel. By the way, I really like the fact that the heroine is Aite.

The timelines are all wrong. I encountered West End first. Dongxiang forces Jinmu to eat meat. Then I worked in a cafe.

It satisfies a lot of regrets, especially for Sister Quan. Although there is no Ga in the manga at the end, I really feel sorry for being controlled with a cross in the first few chapters. Don't use Sister Quan's sword. Author, come on, it's very interesting.

It's good-looking, but it's so young, don't be a eunuch!

The protagonist's role is useless, and his main achievement is borderline ob, killing minions.

The author is too short

I have only seen about 60 of them so far. To put it bluntly, in Japanese comics, as long as the characters are well established and the dialogues do not use various Chinese dialects, it will be fine. Many works like to show off dialects, which is very dramatic. . . This will do

Hey hey [laughing evilly], Aite and he feel like they are enemies on a narrow road [send heartfelt] [send heartfelt], great [blowing kiss] I give 101 points for this awesome show, one more point won't make you proud!

Really beautiful It's so cool to read it all in one sittingヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ"

Well, this one is written well, I can't say it's the best, but among the tomato novels, most of the ginseng novels should be considered good. Those are the good ones. I would say they are complete. There is nothing particularly unreasonable in the writing. This one is considered good. It has hundreds of pages and is well written. However, I did not include the discontinued ones. After all, they were discontinued.

Come on, author, there are not many people writing about ghouls, and even fewer if the content and text are good, so you must keep writing. [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

The plot has not been changed, and the addition of the system is the same as that without it. However, it did not change the disgusting character. Instead, it made me watch the game from the perspective of the male protagonist. The most annoying thing for me is that the timeline does not match up. I hope the author can work hard. This type of book is rare and it will be good if you grasp it well!

Come on, mad, when will the rating have to be 5 characters long? Woohoo, hurry up and come back after moving the bricks.

Come on, author, as long as you are not in charge, keep pursuing me

The writing is pretty good, good luck to the author. I just don't know why. I feel like the protagonist has no sense of presence in the front, but the writing in the back is pretty good.

The author's writing is wonderful [like][like][like]

I watched all of Tokyo Ghoul except for the first season in one go, and I still want to find some fan fiction to read. It's very good. Although the word count is short, it still feels like a dessert after a meal.

Yes, the short story is better, but there will still be an optimal solution, and the setting of the God of War value can be clearer.

This is a good book. I hope the author can make up for the regrets left by the original work. Thank you [love] [blowing kiss]

It should be more like this soon, otherwise I will become black - 1000-7=? 😏

I am a little reader, blah blah blah! Give it five stars, feel good, blah blah blah! I love reading and feel good