Fangen

It's pretty good, no nonsense, no mother-in-law, crisp expressions, clear story progression, real plot and thoughtful ideas, [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] the characters are clearly expressed, the author please update more, I don't want to abandon you just two days after reading it.

Not bad, the writing is solid, I can tell he is an experienced author, and the plot design is okay. The good thing about this book is that it is close to reality. Not only the cultivation is growing, but the character of the protagonist is also growing. Unlike the protagonists of some books, it seems that in order to kill decisively, he is born to kill decisively. No matter how old he is or what he has experienced, people always have to be beaten before they know the pain.

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It's really good, the writing is very good, but the updates are a bit slow, please come on!

The author's writing is absolutely solid and first-rate. I read it in one sitting. Overall, it's pretty good. Keep up the good work and give it a nine. Good, finished reading

Can the author reveal that there will be a scene with Ling Qiao later? I feel that the relationship between brother and sister is too cruel. Why should Ling Qiao be written like a white-eyed wolf? The relationship between brother and sister was so good when they were children. Ling Qiao was so cute and cute. But in the end, they turned against each other and died and were turned into corpse demons. It feels like a pity. It's the best. She is talented, beautiful and kind, and quite innocent (although it becomes dark in the later stage...) The plot and fighting scenes are very good, but the protagonist does not have a little emotion. It would be better to add more emotional lines, otherwise the readers will always look tense and tired. I feel that it would be perfect if the brother and sister reconcile in the later stage. It's more painful to see a brother and sister turn against each other until they fight to the death. I sincerely hope that the brother-sister relationship can be reconciled in the future

So far, I've read 53, which is pretty good. This is the first book I've read on Tomato, so don't stretch your legs. I hope the rest of the book will be good, but I'll have to change the rating if I write nonsense.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a high-quality fantasy. The plot is reasonable and the IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are online. I like it!

A good book, the author has great literary talent [like], the story has flesh and blood and soul, and human nature is vividly reflected [like] This book has the flavor of the work of Jin Yong, an old master, and the details are very good. I couldn't help but read 660 chapters for several days and couldn't stop! Hope to update soon~ How come such a wonderful book is only rated 8.0! ! How is this rated? Fortunately, I saw it! Whether it's good or not, you don't need to read too much. You can get a glimpse of it by just reading a few dozen chapters. The author has good literary talent [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] I would like to express my support here and hope that more fellow Taoists can see such excellent works...

This book is really well written, the character of the protagonist is good, and the murderer is not He is indecisive, does not have the heart of the Holy Mother, and cannot walk without seeing a woman. This is the person who cultivates immortality. Whether reading or listening to the novel, the reader can be immersed in the scene. Thanks to the author for writing such a good book.

It's a very nice fantasy fairy tale. It's been a long time since I finished reading it. The logic of the story is very rigorous and the plot has ups and downs. Thank you to the author. After reading it, I was affected both physically and mentally. In the face of difficulties, I will not be arrogant or arrogant, nor shrink back. I will find my true heart and persevere. It may be difficult to imagine that I, a person in my late 40s, can actually be inspired by these simple principles. But it is true that in the process of watching this work, I was gradually taught and influenced by the maturity of the protagonist. Finally, I would like to thank the author again. Thank you for your hard work and contribution to this wonderful work!

The main characters are also written in a relatively fleshed-out way, which is rare!

The beginning is really good, but then it turns into a palace battle drama, a suspense drama, and a drama. Generally speaking, it is very well written. Everyone has their own preferences. In my opinion, it cannot be given 5 stars. I watched about a third of it and couldn't stand it anymore. It is as dull as water.

The beginning of this book is very novel, I like it very much, and the characters are also very vivid and three-dimensional, but I have never been exposed to the flow of mortals cultivating immortals before. So I gave it five stars and I went to find other books. This book is really good [Like]

The story plot has ups and downs and is exciting. From Fangen's ignorance, to his gradual improvement, to the life-and-death battle against powerful enemies, every plot is full of tension and excitement. In this process, the intertwining of various emotions adds a lot of warmth and touch to the story. While feeling the tension and excitement, you can also appreciate the preciousness of true love in the world. Thank you to the author!

A very good book, I hope the author will update it soon [smile]

The language is exquisite and interesting to listen to. For example, the movements are as fast as the wind... Especially when describing the scenery, it is wonderful and well worth savoring.

Why is this novel rated so low? The best novel I've ever read on Tomato. The non-system flow, although some of the details are unreasonable in design, such as the protagonist approaching the enemy and the protagonist's group combat power soaring, but overall it is very good and a rare masterpiece.

The writing of this book is good. Although it is a fairy tale, it has the flavor of a martial arts novel. The male protagonist has a tough character, perseverance and wisdom, and can defy the odds without flinching. Yes, it is very inspirational. I listened to the article. The male protagonist has a very nice voice. He is gentle, strong and full of wisdom. I feel that the male protagonist is a super handsome guy, hahaha.

The plot advances naturally and is not a cookie-cutter upgrade mode. This is what gives it the flavor of a novel. The writing is better than most online articles. No vulgar descriptions of sex, very good. As the author's first novel, it is already very good, surpassing most of the bad works. Writing is like cooking. Only when it is made with craftsmanship will it be full of color, flavor and flavor, and more people will like it. Hope to keep up the good work. Works are more valuable than more. We look forward to Xiaowei bringing us better works.

For those who have read the book after reading it, it is not bad. There are no routines such as academies, auctions, adventures, etc., And the ending is perfect. It is a pity that the final achievable goal of the protagonist is revealed too early, and there is less suspense.

Okay, it's well written and can be considered a readable novel.

I read the new chapter in one breath and spoke in the comment area for the first time. The book written by the author makes people feel as if they are personally on the scene. The emotional expression is delicate. The author's writing style is just like a scalpel. He details the ugly side of human nature in today's society bit by bit in the work. Give the author five stars.

Overall, it's good. There are no plots about breaking off the engagement and slapping people in the face to show off. I have a small opinion. Too many realms lead to too fast upgrades. It would be better if the highest level is placed in Transformation. There are some small flaws that can be ignored, such as letting gods steal "resources", and the plot is a bit simple. For example, you can add some exploration areas, trade fair auctions, find resources by yourself, find skills, etc. … … …

The book is well written and worth reading. Thank you author!

I love it so much. I would love it even more if the brother and sister were perfect. Alas! Maybe that's life! I'm really looking forward to the next one, I really like the author's writing style!

Although the word count is only over two million, the author occasionally shows off his words quite well. The overall plot is good, but there are some flaws in the middle, but the flaws are not outweighed. If you don't have a book to read, this one will do. The story is quite complete, and it seems to have a special feature, that is, there are not so many flirtations! Good reviews

A very interesting novel about mortals cultivating immortality! The author's writing skills are solid, the plot has ups and downs, the characters are vivid and vivid, the logical design is reasonable, and the final step is to fill in the gaps perfectly! The only shortcoming is that the young protagonist is too resourceful (if it is a time-travel setting, it is understandable) ~ However, despite the flaws, this book is worth reading! Thanks to the author for his contribution! Looking forward to more masterpieces!

Very good, the scene description is very good, the writing is very good, not wordy

Viewed 50. The writing is first-class, the logic is reliable, and innovative. The writing is serious. I am very satisfied. I will comment after reading it. Coming out of the island, I can't write anymore.