Immortal Journey

Overall, this book is good. It's similar to Lan Ke Qi Yuan. It pursues immortality and travels around the mortal world. Its biggest feature is probably its fairy spirit. It feels like stepping out of the mortal world and acting casually. It's very comfortable to read. , The ordinary fantasy fairy just fights monsters and practices to upgrade, and the plot also revolves around the practice, which makes it boring and makes you feel tired. The story becomes more and more unsightly, with many logical inconsistencies, and it becomes more and more bland. It doesn't want to live forever and become an immortal, it is more like a narrative work of a martial arts novel.

A rare good book among longevity essays. The protagonist is like a passerby who connects many people and things while searching for himself. Although it may be a bit heartless at times, I feel that seeing the mortal world as a passer-by is the essence of the longevity novel. The love lasts until the end, the relationship is shallow, the world is detached, neither ruthless nor enthusiastic, despises external things but is willing to undergo physical examination, but only pursues the great road, that is the immortal. The protagonist of this book is somewhat fairy-like. Therefore, there must be no cp. If there are exceptions, you will fall into the world. I still want to read the longevity article that is full of fairy tales.

I give you five stars. I hope you can keep it up. "Lan Ke Qi Yuan" changed halfway through. It no longer has the carefree flavor. I hope the author can be better and stronger than "Lan Ke Qi Yuan". A hundred times better than "Lanke Chess Game", very good

It feels very good. There are no monsters to level up and no romance. The whole text highlights the relationship between the game and the relationship. There is no excessive interference, no grudges, no fighting between the young and the old. There is no absolute evil in the text, there are many foreshadowings, and it is very slow. It is not like cultivating immortals like fast food, nor opening a harem, but more like cultivating the mind, and the changes in the game.

The writing style is comfortable and the plot is neither urgent nor slow. It is suitable for readers with a certain experience. Those who want to read ups and downs and exciting stories may not be comfortable with it.

The writing is very long and unsystematic. Chun Changsheng writes slowly but it is very comfortable to read. When you are alone, you can read and experience the beautiful things that the protagonist has left in this world.

The writing is good and the plot is very good. If you like Invincible novels, you can read it as an Invincible novel, but it is less brainless than Invincible novels and more elegant. It is worth pursuing.

Personal opinion The novel is really good. Everyone should be familiar with the novel Lan Ke Qi Yuan! This novel can be said to be very similar. So I didn't watch it, I didn't like it for purely personal reasons (I don't really like to bring Chinese mythological characters into the world of immortality, because I feel that this is not writing a novel, but adapting the ideas of predecessors, and it lacks novelty. It doesn't have creativity. After all, we have seen and heard too many of these things. If you have thought about the plot, why can't you just change the system and the name, so that it is completely your own thing), so anyone who is not in this situation can watch it. After all, it is really good. This novel tends to be invincible, mystery, and pastoral. Bye [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's good and beautiful. It fits the indifferent feeling of the Red Dust Fairy. The details are also handled very well. For example, the part where the protagonist asks the child to get his sword back reflects the protagonist's high emotional intelligence. I've read a lot of cool articles. It's also a pleasure to watch this kind of high-quality work.

A good book, with a sense of loneliness and vicissitudes in the overall text. The text quotes He Kun's example of changing grain into chaff during disaster relief, and also writes some theories on traditional Chinese medicine, which shows the author's skill.

I have a lot of feelings. After reading novels for several years, your novel still made me feel something. I can't help but think of this sentence: When people leave with tears and say goodbye, they will regret and cherish the years. Yin and Yang are separated by a layer of laughter in the dream. I asked you when you will return. The reason for waking up from a dream is a dream. The remaining warmth has not dissipated, it is the time when it falls most. What a good book

Full marks. I like this type of novel. There are no upgrades to fight monsters or harem stallions. The short stories are connected together and it is very comfortable to read.

A very fairy-like novel, a bit similar to Lan Ke Qi Yuan

Not bad, not bad. It suits my taste. I just hope it won't collapse later [laughs] Sorry, such a good start will not work anymore (ﾉ_ _)ﾉ

It's very good. This book doesn't have the seduction and fights of cultivating immortals. It makes people feel comfortable reading [shy]

Very beautiful, looks very similar to Lanke chess game

About my "love-hate relationship" with this book If I remember correctly, I have been following the book "The Immortal Journey" since it has about a hundred chapters. Before, I updated it once a day, and I have been following it for a long time. I deleted it intermittently (because of the emotional problems of the characters in the book) no less than three or four times, but finally I put it back on the bookshelf. This should be the fifth time... During the days when I was waiting for the author's update, I re-read it twice. What I want to say is that the period when Chen Changsheng was in Liuyunguan was my favorite. Perhaps like Mo Yuan in the book, I think that when he was in Liuyunguan and Qiuyuefang, he showed a very free and relaxed state. I feel that Chen Changsheng at that time did not have too many worries, and he would not be upset or entangled about some things. Perhaps it is precisely because as he goes longer and longer on the road to explore his life experience and some truths, he gradually puts invisible "shackles" on himself. Of course, I also know that what the author writes may not conform to everyone's imagination, which is understandable. But overall, I think it's pretty good that the author can persevere in today's cluttered online writing environment. Finally, I hope the author can finish the story seriously, and I also hope that the next plot will become more and more exciting! Come on!

It is rare to see a fairy tale that can describe the elegance and ethereal meaning. I read it in one sitting, but it was too uncomfortable to catch up, so I saved it to read it later.

It has good foundation, is not vernacular, is good-looking, has a plot and a story. I'll give you 99 points out of 100, just one more point to make you proud!

I like this feeling very much. The description is very unrestrained. I have to say that it is really the kind of novel that can relax you after reading it. The more I read Tomato's other novels, the more I get more and more angry [face covering], but this one gave me a quiet feeling.

Second brush, my favorite among the longevity novels. The author uses most of his writing style to express the emotional entanglement between immortals and things in the world, and his writing style is delicate. The protagonist's invincible deeds are only described when necessary. It's all about daily life. There is no formula for invincibility!

How can I put it, you and I are common people, and the smoke and fire in the world is what touches the human heart the most. After watching Lanke, there are indeed some similarities in the early stage, but the word "ritual" is roughly the same in people, and it is not difficult to accept. The later stories will also be less loose and tell the stories of other people. It's not a bad thing, and it also means a little finishing touch. After all, you and I see it from a human perspective, so we can naturally empathize with it. Although there are some small breaks in the middle, it is not a big problem now. It is a rare and good book. I hope that it will be more complete in the future and there will not be too much difference.

The feeling of this kind of invincible writing is quite good. The writing is a bit elegant, because I sometimes see some novels with relatively low-level writing. Although I can't clearly tell where the low-level feeling is, reading too much will make me feel a little uncomfortable, and I feel a little impatient due to the influence of the text. I really appreciate this kind of novel with a literary flavor. Reading novels can also help me improve my literary talent. Being able to write such a text must also have some skills (don't ask how I know, it is always a pain for me to be unable to write sentences with a certain cultural level in the examination room). I think those who say that there is no intrigue or intrigue in the novel about cultivating immortals are worthless. It's just that you don't like this kind of thing. There is no need to make subjective conclusions and dissuade others. And I'm a little strange. I've read some in-chapter comments, and why do I feel that the tone of the speakers is not very friendly, or a little sarcastic? Maybe it's because my perception is different. Some of the words that some people think are too artificial, I think it's okay.

I think this novel is really good. It's not the same style as what I've seen before. The character development is very good. Sometimes I feel really tearful. After all the changes, is this immortality?

It's pretty good. It's very leisurely and comfortable in the early stages. It's very comfortable to watch, and it feels like you're outside the action. Later on, there was a girl here and there was a girl there who all liked him. When I originally thought that having a man could relieve the stress of all the women, eh! The man either supports the woman's bold pursuit of love, or he doesn't follow the protagonist Also, I thought there was no heroine. It's true. No matter which girl likes him, he won't reject him. It's all fate and it can't be broken. Even if he enters the world of mortals, there is no need for so many unnecessary fates!

:-) The plot is too draggy. But it's just beautifully written. The only star deducted is that the story is too slow. This is not a slow-burning movie. A slow-burning movie means the plot develops slowly but steadily. I keep writing short stories here, just like Conan next door. I only push forward the main storyline occasionally, and other times I work on other things. It's meant to be a relaxing watch, but the occasional Riddler will leave you eager to know what's next. But the author just doesn't write, and instead writes about daily life. Reading too much at once can lead to boredom. A tip for latecomers, don't read more than 200 chapters at a time (it varies from person to person). This book is perfect for reading a little bit every day. I read more than 300 books in one go and got bored. I needed to read other books to relieve my boredom. This 4-star book is not bad, but I am impatient, otherwise I would not have read 300 chapters in one go. Also: My evaluation is of course based on my senses. It is difficult to agree with others, so the author must not change his mind because of any readers' comments. The world you create (write) is your world!

What a great book, the author is of a high level. It's on par with another book called Xianlu Yuyouyou. Good luck to the author.

After reading this, it is generally very good. The loneliness of eternal loneliness is completely written, from the beginning to this. What I like most is that the author did not write about the love between children from the beginning until this. It can be written, but most of the love between children is written too much, too complicated, and too detailed, and it will change the taste. Overall it's pretty good. Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update it. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding. This is true day and night.

It looks good. I don't see any faults so far. I'll give it four stars. I'll make up for it later if it doesn't fall apart [Start]

The first part of this book is acceptable and worth reading!