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It's so beautiful, wow, wow, wow, the character design is so amazing, I want to see everyone competing for Eward, especially those who are very powerful, [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

The writing is very good, and the appearance of the character Eward is not abrupt at all. It feels like a very good fanfic. The image creation is very clever, but not too full. It would be nice if there were more events in the future to give Eward a more layered and multifaceted image. There is also a little selfish thing, cough cough cough, I love Shaggy, can you add a little bit of the interaction between Ghost Fox Tianchong and Eward in the second and third seasons? That, I want to rua, but rua is not available, let Eward rua a few more times, I love Fluffy who has a little conspiracy and struggles at the bottom, if it does not hinder the wife's event line. It's so hard to find good, non-romantic, lovable male protagonists. Please~~~~

I really like it. Keep up the good work, author✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

The character design of the protagonist is very unique, but the plot contains too much original plot and the description is too detailed, so it is suitable for those who have not watched Aotu. It's not very friendly to people like us who have seen bumps and bumps. The writing style is also good ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Thanks to the author for the hard work! ! ! Give it five stars!

It's so beautiful. I've rarely seen articles that suit my taste like this since I started reading Aotu! The appearance of the male protagonist feels that although there is a certain difference from the original text, it is not that big of a change. It's not like some of the exaggerated invincible novels I've read. As soon as it comes up, it suddenly becomes as exaggerated as the previous ones. Although it may be unbelievable from the perspective of other contestants in the article that he directly became third after the qualifiers, but we can clearly understand the reason from the perspective of reading the article. I feel that the character description is very good, but Jin's performance in the article is very reckless (recklessness and innocence do not mean the same thing, please don't confuse it. After watching the concave and convex world, I know that it is not innocence, whether it is intentional or not in the first and second seasons, but I won't say it to others, but I personally feel that it is very reckless). As for cp? I like the feeling of Yin Jue and Zi Tang Huan getting along with the protagonist, but I suggest no CP for the protagonist in the book. I think most of the comments in the comment area are more supportive of the ghost fox and the protagonist's CP. Maybe it's because I don't have a good feeling about the ghost fox in the main drama, right? I don't see any ambiguous relationship between the two. The fox doesn't like having its tail and ears touched, but the ghost fox lets the protagonist do it. Isn't that because he wants to take advantage of the protagonist? If the protagonist puts on the mask knowing that he is wearing it, doesn't that mean he is keeping his promise? The protagonist takes the ghost fox away when he is defeated. Isn't that because of Miss Lena? (Just my own thoughts) But I just say this. The cp in the text still has to be decided by the author. As for why it is recommended to have no cp instead of the two couples I kowtow to, it is because I think the best cp to kowtow is no cp, and the warm girl does not lose the sense of distance. It gives people unlimited room for imagination (if anything in this comment does not conform to your ideas, it is my fault, I apologize, I'm sorry! This comment is just to express my feelings about this article, if it is really not pleasing to you, please click "down" without specifically refuting me in my comment)

So pretty. Yes, I am already obsessed with this book! You can't blame me, you can only blame the author for being so awesome, you can only blame the content for being so beautiful, you can only blame this book for my taste! Personally like it very much. Ghost Fox and Edward are really... So in love! ! ! ! Then there is also the character design of the protagonist or the Yuanli weapons, which are very pleasing to my taste, I like it very much! ! [Adoration] I don't know how to express my excitement. I can only say, "I am uneducated, so I can conquer the world with just one sentence." Come on, author, and I look forward to getting better and better content in the future! [Praise]

Very good, it would be better to update soon ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶

A small reflection that is about to be completed. Because the book circle cannot post it, I have changed it to a book review. This book is the best embossed text I've ever read, right? I probably started reading it in October or November. How can I imagine that this book has been with me for half a year? Let's talk about Eward From the very beginning, the young Eward pursued the sun for Yongye Xing, and he also believed in the beautiful things in his heart. After learning about this cruel competition, I decided to change more than just my own planet. My personality is different from Jin's, but my ideals and beliefs are the same. On the surface, he has an isolated attitude towards everyone, but he never gives up on anyone, hoping to save the entire world and change their future. Talk about his buddies Eward's appearance in this world does not appear to be superfluous at all. It is well interspersed. There is no one in the whole book who feels that the black group is the villain. On the contrary, everyone in this book seems to be the protagonist From not getting along to slowly getting along to fighting side by side, I feel a sense of high morale every time I watch it. Finally, let's talk about Yu Yu's writing style is also very good. The entire character of Eward is portrayed very beautifully, and the plot has no sense of interlude at all. Is very hard every day. Basically, I update two chapters a day. If it were a month, I might fail ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿ I hope Yu's next book will bring me a different feeling! I hope that this circle will become more popular once it's over, so I'd like to finish it off in advance and spread my flowers. Hehe ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

It's so beautiful. Eward and Ghost Fox are a pair. They are locked together. I swallowed the key [blowing kiss]

It really touched my cuteness. I have always wanted to find an article like this, but I just couldn't find the right one. Speaking of which, I still have some criticisms about Eward and Ghost Fox's cps. I hope the author will update them more~

This book is very beautiful, the writing is exquisite, and details determine success or failure. It just so happens that this book has a lot of details, and it almost perfectly restores the original work. Sisters who like the concave and convex world can read it with confidence. Fried chicken looks good

Suddenly I realized that after reading this book for so long, I still haven't reviewed it? Five stars! Must be five stars! The whole process of reading this book was very comfortable! The protagonist is strong! But he is a little reserved and feels comfortable interacting with other people. There are not so many complicated twists and turns (although it may be that I can't understand it), and then... (Okay, please forgive my lack of language, I can't go on) In short, keep up the good work, author!

It looks good. There are actually relatively few protagonists with this kind of character, and the subject matter of this article is very novel. Compared with other convex articles I have read, they are basically written according to the updated seasons, but this article is very different. He really wrote a story and wrote a happy ending. It just didn't feel like a ridiculous hasty ending. The whole story went smoothly and it was a good read. As for this article, I had read about 210 chapters before, and then when it was updated later, I didn't read it much. One time when I was browsing the bookshelf, I saw the end, and then I remembered to read it. At first glance, it's still as high as before. You can't escape the law of true fragrance. In my opinion, the ones who feel more regretful are Eward and his father. When I saw the memories about his father, I really couldn't help but cry. In fact, my tears were quite low. The whole story also lacks the author's imagination. The author's writing is really good.

This novel is very interesting and worth recommending, but the author is a bit slow, but I like it 👀₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ gave this book a five-star rating, which is super exciting. ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥

The writing is very good, please be sure to let the ghost fox and the protagonist cp [smile] Please give me a thumbs up if you are more knowledgeable [laughing evilly]

The main character is really what I like, it's really great. He's cute, he does whatever he wants, he's handsome, and he has the image of a gentle big brother, and he also gets crazy criticism and perversion from time to time. When I read the first chapter, I thought that the protagonist went to the Concave Concave Contest to realize his wish in order to make his planet have a sun. The further I read, I discovered that the protagonist is a runaway (rebellious son? Laughs) prince like Lei Shi. He is also disgusted with God and disappointed with his family. The protagonist really has a camaraderie with everyone, it's really great! ! ! ! There is no female protagonist in this book.

This book uses dynamic description, character description, and appearance description. There are also exaggerations, metaphors, and anthropomorphic psychological descriptions, and the characters have their own personalities. The writing is wonderful.

This book is pretty good. So far, it doesn't have any serious flaws. Even if it does, it's because it's related to the main plot of the anime. Many furry lovers can watch here as Li Huade helps us realize our dream of rubbing the ghost fox's ears. In the early stage, the main plot remains low, and the participation in the Hundred Deaths and Hundreds of Lives project is high. In a sense, it is quite restored to the animation. The fighting plot is a bit unfamiliar, but I believe it will be better in the future. In the early stage, the unit where the protagonist is located is erratic, but of course it is still inseparable from the ghost fox wife [laughter]

It creates a new idea. The protagonist is no longer a time traveler, but a character who already exists in this world. But his ability is very special and very useful. The position is unclear, but the ultimate goal is. He also saved Palos and reunited the Thunder Lion Pirates The ending is also very happy (๑◕τ￩๑)b

This article written by the author is very nice Unlike some articles that are brainless Very good, highly recommended

It's very interesting, but I just have to push for points. The fanfic is so well written that it's easy to take it off the shelves. This is my favorite concave and convex fanfic, so cheers for the author! I support you!

It's really good to read, help me. Ever since I read this book, I feel like I've been poisoned. Every day when I'm in school, I think about Eward and the subsequent plot all the time. Friends who like Bump, I really recommend this book. Because of this book, I've started to get into fan fiction. I've stocked up a lot now, ready to read it. Finally, I want to ask, is Yun here? Update quickly and send me all the saved manuscripts! ! ! [Angry] Hehe, I want to give him ten stars, this is another 5 stars

This book ranks among the top three I have seen in the fan fiction of the concave and convex world. The author's writing style is very good, and the characters are also very full. Zha's writing style is also very good, just like the empathy between Lei Yu and Zi Tang Huan, the protagonist's understanding of Zi Tang Huan also seems very real. Then I personally prefer Ke Guai. Finally, I will always support Zha!

I haven't seen such a good one for a long time. I like it very much. I'm already drawing Xiao Ai's weapons and they will be submitted tomorrow. Please remind me @ I love you😘 Moma [thinking]

Woohoo, it looks good. But just now I saw classmate Xiao Ai being controlled and my heart suddenly tightened~ So you don't know how to knife classmate Xiao Ai, right? (Bite the handkerchief. Jpg)

After reading the full text, I really want to write a few thousand words of review, but unfortunately I don't have time to write it (it's already more than 3 and a half years old, woo woo woo) Overall, this book is really good to watch anyway, and most of the ambiguities in the original drama have been successfully eliminated (of course there are still a small number of ambiguities, but that's all) The author's writing may be average at the beginning, but it's absolutely amazing at the end! (Writing improves so quickly!) CP has a lot to offer! (It's just for fun, no CP) The ending is 100% HE, and there are very few knives in the whole story (don't worry, read it!) Not bad (in my eyes) Let me think about what else is important that I haven't mentioned [eating melon] Unexpected, let's just end it... (Don't look at me because I don't have much time to read. In fact, I still have several hours to read on other software) This is one of the few stories that I am willing to see the ending of. It is really super attractive and amazing to me! I give 5 stars not because this work is 5 stars, but because Tomato can only give 5 stars at most!

It's really good to watch. After watching it, I felt like I was watching a TV series. I was drawn into it, and it was from a third-person perspective. Some people may feel that the writing style is unfamiliar after reading it, but I found it↗↘↘↗ very refreshing~[Blow a kiss][Send a heart][Please update]

This book is my second most satisfying concave and convex fanfic after "The Concave and Concave World, I am the God" [laughs] Come on, author~

Super nice embossed text. It is also one of the best novels I have read so far! Author, why can't the protagonist show his strength and fight them directly?

I knock! This is so pretty, both Ai Hu and Ai Yin are really good at it! The plot is also very creative, I was so excited to watch it! It gets more and more interesting the further you go, I can't stop watching it! Really recommended! Read this book more, you can learn a lot of truths and feelings if you read it carefully! I really love it, the writing style is really good! Recommended! ! !