Quick Wear: the Host Tortured the Male Protagonist to Tears Again

After watching the first world, I had a good impression of Jane's description at first. After I realized that he was getting worse and worse, I started to have a good impression of Cheng. I thought the description of the sunny little angel was very good. On the contrary, Chen Shen has never been in favor [face covering] Let me give you a suggestion. Writing about a scumbag and regretting it does not necessarily make him worse and worse. The sense of accomplishment that makes a good person regret is much greater than making a trash regret. Moreover, if the real male protagonist appears behind the queen, the two male characters in the front are established, but Lu's charm is not captured. In fact, I think it is okay to let Cheng accompany the female protagonist until she dies. These are just some suggestions from reading the article, the rest are pretty good [Like]

Why must the original male lead be written so badly? Another point is that it is just a world, so why is it so confusing? After seeing two worlds, I actually saw Lu Shen in both worlds. Hey, author, this is a novel without CP! I hope Lu Shen won't appear again in this world!

I like the plot setting very much, but the scumbag is not in love with him, and there is no fixed CP? The heroine can still have someone to accompany her so that she won't end up alone. She mentioned "can't destroy the character" at the beginning. Fortunately, this requirement is no longer required. Unfortunately, the article is not long and not enough to read. The torture is not satisfying just because the opponent is too weak. The scumbag man and the villain have average methods, which is a bit bland. The fusion setting of planes one and two is quite interesting, and it completes the difficult task of plane one.