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I think the writing pace of this book is too fast, and the original plot has been mentioned in one stroke. I hope the author can read My Fair Princess carefully and understand that some plots are meaningless if they are summarized in one stroke. Of course, it would be better if he could use his imagination more based on the original plot and turn it into his own work. However, it is indeed hard for authors to write and create works, so keep up the good work! ! ! I hope my suggestions will be helpful to the author. Regardless of the quality of the work (book), every author works very hard, because producing a good work requires imagination and writing skills. Of course, it is difficult for people who write novels for the first time, because they do not know how to attract readers' interest, so they will try to meet your requirements. I hope everyone can understand. I hope the author can synthesize it, and if he can't write, he can come up with ideas.

Another book with Ertai and the heroine as the main characters

Very good, looking forward to the new book