I Have a Breeding House in Zhenxin Town

It's a pity that the author has no female protagonist, but the content is also perfect, and it doesn't rely too much on the system like other novels. Let's just say that the rating is a bit low, but I believe it will go up in the future, as long as the author writes with care, come on💪!

The writing is quite good, at least it's not like some Pokémon stories, where people don't fight back when they're hit, and they don't dare to kill people when they're beaten; they always restrict this and that. It would be great if the author could update five times a day [thinking] [laughing] [laughing]

Yes, the author knows the illustrations. People like me who have never watched Pokémon can find it very comfortable. The protagonist has a very good personality, not very Madonna, and is also very good to his partners. It is not brainless, but the ending is very hasty. I think it can be written later, but I understand the author better. Writing novels is indeed boring, and I make less money. As a first book, it is already well written [laughs]

Yes, Pokémon's strength has not collapsed for the time being, and its qualifications are not too outrageous. There are no A's or S's everywhere, and the protagonist is not brainless. His IQ is online. Come on, the author.

Among the novels I have been following recently, the Pokémon Breeding House is more attractive to me than the trainer modes. The Pokémon I watch are more about getting along with each other rather than blindly getting stronger. Personal opinion, personal recommendation. 9.1 Points like this

It's my favorite type, so [punch] update me quickly

It's okay to take care of Ash at first. It's normal to have some feelings for Pokémon after watching them for so long. But later on, I almost indulged them, but it was fine before, so I'll give it four stars to get together and relax.

The writing is very good, the protagonist has carefully cultivated his main team, and the sense of bond between him and himself is also well written. It is not intended to be mainly cultivated, and it is clearly told to the Pokémon that it is just to give them a place to live, and to provide them with food and shelter. All that is needed are the eggs they lay. The protagonist also did what a breeding house owner should do very well, not to squeeze the elves, but to rely entirely on the elves' free will. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist promised to cultivate three commoner families, the fire master Xiaotanzai and the grass master Tianzhuzhu, but there is no water master. He can't directly go to Fiona. After all, they are also descendants of the illusory beast Mana Fei. It can't be regarded as a civilian Yusanjia at all.

This book is different from other Pokémon books. It has both comfortable communication with Pokémon and the battle process. The system setting is also more reasonable and the protagonist does not exploit the system too much. This is a rare good article

There are pictures at the end of each chapter. They are of high quality. The author is so good [Admiration]

A very interesting novel. I am very curious about which commoner fire-type and water-type Pokémon are. Come on! Don't stop updating [Sending Hearts]

After reading it, it is a very good article. It's just that the ending is too sloppy and too fast. The author still has many holes to fill in before it ends. I would like to ask the author if he can update this article again. It ended too quickly and I haven't seen enough. But I'm looking forward to the author's next article [love] [love] [love]

The book is still very good to read, but it was a bit uncomfortable when I read it at first, because the elves he captured were all familiar, and I generally like to read the elite route, but it got better after that, especially when fighting with Banmu, the sentence about raising ordinary elves to extraordinary, I felt a little relieved, and I didn't have to pay too much attention to the elite route. At first, I thought the author didn't have points, but it turned out that the author did, so I was relieved. I seemed to have had the idea of deleting the book, but I forgot now I remember the reason, but it got better later on, and it's good to keep writing at this pace. Anyway, I was enjoying reading it, and suddenly I remembered it, because the problem of Xiaozhi's wife Serena, it's not the protagonist's wife who wrote it in such detail [angry] you Do you want to bring hatred to readers? Do you know that readers are selfish, self-interested, and protective of others? Although we say we don't care, there is a thorn in our hearts. When we see other people's male protagonists and our own female protagonists, what is this called? The key is that you have written down the process in detail in front of n people. Which reader can have such a forethought? I still remember that when I read that comment, several readers were also scolding me for writing such a detailed description about someone who is not the heroine. I also scolded the author. I hope the author can correct it. If the heroine is not his own family, just omit it. What does it mean to see other people showing affection? Okay, there is no problem now. If you have any questions, I will criticize you later [laughs]

Damn, I think this is one of the best works I have ever read, and it deserves praise. But I think it is a pity that this book ends hastily like this. It is really great, and the plot is wonderful. Moreover, this is a trainer and breeder, and the subject matter is novel. Damn, it's great anyway

Although you are short and weak, it is undeniable that you are indeed short and weak, but you are indeed good. At least you are not the kind of blank text that dullly plays in the gym and simply and weakly expresses feelings. Exquisite enough

Very well written! However, in Carlos' Biyi City, many people died after the male protagonist took out the Flower of Eternity. The male protagonist's behavior was weird. I didn't feel any guilt or anger on him. He was just like a normal person. After that, no one knew that he was the cause of all this. In the end, the male protagonist also received a lot of benefits [face covering], but the author's writing is very good, please keep updating [heartfelt] The breeding house is like a background board [face covering]

It's a very good book. I hope the author will write more about leisure. In fact, it's not that interesting to keep fighting. The author can consider letting the protagonist continue to study the elf ecology, and then become famous. Later, he can buy elf, take care of a child (Ash), and then study with Dr. Ohmu, such as legendary Pokémon, elf ecology, ultra-ancient Pokémon, overlord Pokémon, etc. When you encounter mythical beasts, don't keep fighting them, although fight gods. Beasts are great, but for daily writing, if possible, consider the plot of Team Rocket. Mewtwo should be coming out. You can ask the protagonist to help with research. The protagonist walks towards the researcher. After all, Ohgi has a granddaughter. But don't write the kind of plot where the protagonist goes up to help fight Mewtwo and then subdues or helps Mewtwo escape. Just write about helping Sakaki control Mewtwo. I feel that this is more interesting. What will Sakaki do if he really has Mewtwo?

It's okay. It's not reasonable to send the Vulcan Moth. Basically, it's good. If there is no heroine, don't write an emotional route. The protagonist has few formal battle scenes. If it is written by a new author, it is already good. Come on!

I think it's good for a newbie to write a book like this. Even if there are some shortcomings, I hope everyone can give it more encouragement and less criticism. Also, please come on, author, and publish a new book as soon as possible. This word count is too few and it's not enough to read.

It's very good. I hope the author can think about it before writing. After all, there are many pitfalls that have not been filled in.

Nice. Very good Pokémon training article. The open hanging is very enjoyable to watch.

It's good-looking, and the few high-quality elf writings can be considered high-quality.

I am a Pokémon fan, and I usually like to read Pokémon novels. I have read a lot of Pokémon articles on Tomato. For most of the articles about various battles after time travel, I personally prefer the ones that focus on cultivation, leisure, etc. It is okay for the author to write articles for the first time. I think it's great to write it like this, because I am a relatively impatient person. If I get bored after two or three chapters of the novel, I won't read it again. This is also my first time commenting under the novel. If there are any impolite words, please forgive me [Love]

It's quite interesting, even if it's systematic, it's a step-by-step process, instead of just starting with all kinds of mythical beasts. As someone who has only played Emerald and Arceus, and watched a few episodes of anime while dancing at the small dining table when I was a child, the article seems to flow very smoothly, but it ends in a very unexpected place. The farewell between the protagonist and Domino is like the farewell between the author and the reader. It's a little touching, and it's a good article.

Chapter 70 is checked in, so far it's okay. There are a few things in the content that are not consistent with common sense. Then there are dozens of chapters about traveling outside and not caring about the breeding house. It's not a big deal if you can see it. Moreover, there are pictures at the end of each chapter which are quite good. After reading it, the shortcomings are: In the author's own words, I wrote whatever I thought of, which is in line with my feelings. Generally speaking, the plot is very jumpy and not very coherent. Relatively speaking, the beginning is more interesting and then it is forced to end (one star deducted, at least it is finished), and then Zhise's handling seems awkward (not much plot). And I can still read the same sentence. I think it's okay, but there aren't many readers so I didn't write it. Otherwise, this book should be pretty good.

It looks very good so far, I hope the author will work hard

Overall it's pretty good, but in terms of qualifications abcdef, I think that after the elf evolves, the qualifications will be slightly improved. For example, if the green caterpillar of F- evolves into an iron-shell pupa, it will be F, and if it evolves into the eighth disc, the qualifications can be upgraded to E.

It's okay, I came here for the breeding house, but it's a pity that I didn't start writing it. The ending is too sudden. Both the protagonist's own strength and the development of the breeding house feel that it is still in the middle stage, and there are many pitfalls that have not been filled. Four stars for encouragement

It's very interesting, but I stopped writing halfway through, which makes me a little sad. Come on, I believe you, overall it's very good, and the outline feels quite smooth. It's just that the writing is incomplete. Based on the previous outline, it should be a very good book, but it's still incomplete, so I regret adding another book, QAQ

Overall, the content is pretty good