I Awakened an S-Rank Talent Because There's a God Inside Me

The title of the book "Just Because" attracted me to click on it, cough cough cough... Hmm There is no problem with the expression, but the connection between sentences and the behavior of the characters are not very good. It just feels like the author wrote wherever he thought, which is very awkward. To give you a chestnut, In the second chapter, where the male protagonist wakes up, the male protagonist looks at the morgue, and then tells people, "I am not Ah Piao." This place is very awkward. It feels like there is little process and it is difficult to connect. When a normal person wakes up, he should be like, "What the hell are there so many people?" → "What the hell are you looking at me for?" → "What the hell is this?" → Observe the scene → "This can't be a morgue, right?" "How the hell did I get to the morgue?" → Recall the whole story → "Who the f*ck sent me to the morgue, I'm still alive" → Ask others what happened → "It turns out that the separation of consciousness from reality will cause the body to suspended animation" → Repeatedly prove to others that you are a living person... This is a way of thinking that I think is smoother. I personally feel that this paragraph can be omitted. The protagonist can wake up at the scene of a car accident directly at the beginning of the book, describe the tragic scene of the car accident, the sound of sirens, etc., To stimulate the reader's senses, and then go directly to the main plot line. The author's three books seem to have more than 100,000 words, which are very short. Many people may not read this kind of book. Generally, I read more books with more than 300,000 words. The above only represents personal views, lacks professionalism and is for reference only.