Fox Demon*****

Rao Yi is gone like this? Who is the heroine?

I like it. The plot is very good, but it's a bit short. The writing feels like it's written too fast. Just like the narrative, it's all dialogue that drives the plot. Well, what I mean is that it can be more watery. You don't have to be so anxious to promote the plot. You can use more watery descriptions.

Generally speaking, it is not much different from other fox demon fics on the market, but the identity of the cat demon is very novel, so it has four stars.

What good does it do you to cut me off [smile]

Personally I think it looks good

Very well written and I have a natural affinity for cats It's pretty good, but the author himself should also pay attention to his health

Nice! Nice! (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ I have a question, who is the heroine? ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Comment, comment, comment, okay, I've already commented for you. Your novel is great👍[Read it carefully][OK]

I think it's okay and I'd like to ask the single heroine? If so, it should be Tu Shan San Miss Li or Gu Qiu Shui! [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Still very good

It's okay, the author wrote a relatively new one, the two-tailed cat demon, praying for blessings is also good, it's okay

This is really beautiful

Very nice cat writing, everything is written in my opinion (๑°3°๑)

It looks good, but I don't know who the heroine is