[Xuanhuan + Cultivation + Invincible + Transmigration + System]
The Heavenly Music descends, ushering in the Dao Era. The world enters a new age of digital cultivation. Humanity embarks on the road to immortality and becomes cultivators.
People cultivate for eternal life and power: cultivation techniques, resources, divine arts, alchemy, and weapon forging.
As Su Yi embarks on the immortal path, he also activates a top-up System. Recharge any amount to receive a first-purchase gift pack:
Heaven's Mandate Treasure: the Starsea Bottle
Several years into the Dao Era, Su Yi stands at the summit as the Founding Ancestor of the Great Dao. A casual punch brings heaven crashing down, turns the sun and moon upside down, and shatters the source of all things. He becomes the ruler of the entire Myriad Worlds!
The first gift package is too cheap, the second move depends on shouting? If you practice such awesome moves, you can't just point one finger at a time. Third, is this first-level map (dungeon) automatically refreshed by monsters? Build a city and don't have a clear map around it? In this copy, are people from which cities in reality teleported to this city or are they all teleported to this city? Not rigorous! Also, what does experience have to do with the protagonist? In your setting, you just need to grind money. What kind of elixir can you practice? There is also a setting problem. If you can't kill someone, isn't it just a matter of killing the younger one to create a bigger one, and beating the older one to create an older one?
It was originally written very well, but later the data collapsed. Upgrading can only add less than 100 attributes on average, plus the basic attributes are almost zero, and low-level skills can add less than 100 attributes (the geniuses mentioned above all have higher attributes), which adds up to two hundred. The protagonist has an average of 400 attributes. The author says both are the same. Very convinced. Forcibly improve the attributes of supporting characters.
If you don't know how to describe the protagonist's expression, don't write it. I feel so embarrassed when I see it. You look at a city and smile weirdly. Are you ready to blow him up? There are also skills. It is also a wolf in the early stage of Qi Condensation. You hit the wolf's head with a punch at the beginning and it exploded into blood mist. You don't say it's awesome. Later, you use a Tao-level fingering technique to penetrate the wolf's head. You say it's awesome. You are really speechless. If you don't know how to describe it, don't write it and just skip it. Isn't it better? It's embarrassing to watch.
They all have Dao-level skills, but the result is the same as ordinary skills. A fight takes so long and is not straightforward enough. .
How can I put it, I was halfway through watching it, and there were a few questions that I didn't understand at all. Since you said you killed the old man, how could you go back and tell them that it was the protagonist who killed the person? He's still dying, and he's already incarnation after just building the foundation????
The first time I saw Yi Nian's template
If you don't change your mind about Xiaoyao, I might actually finish reading it. And your kid cultivates his body, right? Don't watch it anymore.
It's pretty good, and there's no worries. No one can punish the protagonist 😏😏😏
If I remember well, this is the second novel I have read with the setting of Yi Nian. I gave it five stars just because it is Yi Nian. How can I put it in terms of writing? I feel like the protagonist is a bit off.
Good