[Fantasy + Cultivation + Invincibility + Time Travel + System]
Tianyin came to the world and the Tao calendar started. The world has entered a new era of digital cultivation. Human beings start the road to immortality and become monks.
People practice for their own eternity and strength - practicing exercises, cultivating resources, practicing magical powers, refining elixirs, and forging weapons.
When Su Yi opened the Immortal Road, he also activated a recharge system. Recharge any amount to get the first recharge gift package:
The most precious treasure of destiny——Xinghai bottle
Several years after Dao Li, Su Yi stood at the pinnacle as the ancestor of Dao. With a random wave of his fist, the sky collapsed, the sun and moon were turned upside down, and the origin was shattered. Become the master of the entire universe!
Reader comments
The first gift package is too cheap, the second move depends on shouting? If you practice such awesome moves, you can't just point one finger at a time. Third, is this first-level map (dungeon) automatically refreshed by monsters? Build a city and don't have a clear map around it? In this copy, are people from which cities in reality teleported to this city or are they all teleported to this city? Not rigorous! Also, what does experience have to do with the protagonist? In your setting, you just need to grind money. What kind of elixir can you practice? There is also a setting problem. If you can't kill someone, isn't it just a matter of killing the younger one to create a bigger one, and beating the older one to create an older one?
It was originally written very well, but later the data collapsed. Upgrading can only add less than 100 attributes on average, plus the basic attributes are almost zero, and low-level skills can add less than 100 attributes (the geniuses mentioned above all have higher attributes), which adds up to two hundred. The protagonist has an average of 400 attributes. The author says both are the same. Very convinced. Forcibly improve the attributes of supporting characters.
If you don't know how to describe the protagonist's expression, don't write it. I feel so embarrassed when I see it. You look at a city and smile weirdly. Are you ready to blow him up?
There are also skills. It is also a wolf in the early stage of Qi Condensation. You hit the wolf's head with a punch at the beginning and it exploded into blood mist. You don't say it's awesome. Later, you use a Tao-level fingering technique to penetrate the wolf's head. You say it's awesome. You are really speechless. If you don't know how to describe it, don't write it and just skip it. Isn't it better? It's embarrassing to watch.
They all have Dao-level skills, but the result is the same as ordinary skills. A fight takes so long and is not straightforward enough. .
How can I put it, I was halfway through watching it, and there were a few questions that I didn't understand at all. Since you said you killed the old man, how could you go back and tell them that it was the protagonist who killed the person? He's still dying, and he's already incarnation after just building the foundation? ? ? ?
The first time I saw Yi Nian's template
Good
If I remember well, this is the second novel I have read with the setting of Yi Nian. I gave it five stars just because it is Yi Nian. How can I put it in terms of writing? I feel like the protagonist is a bit off.
If you don't change your mind about Xiaoyao, I might actually finish reading it.
And your kid cultivates his body, right? Don't watch it anymore.
It's pretty good, and there's no worries. No one can punish the protagonist [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Where are the good people? I've read more than twenty chapters and still can't understand the grades. Let's talk about them from low to high. I'm confused.
A bit like a happy thought
There are a lot of things that seem wrong, but I still support it with four stars.
I've read Chapter 60 and finished reading it.
It's not bad, at least it feels to my taste.
😁😁😁
It's ready, it looks very interesting, it feels like playing a game! [Like][Like][Like]
There are too many flaws and it looks awkward. The previous sentence said that you can use the best Qi Condensing Pill yourself and sell it as soon as it comes out. It is not rigorous at all.
Worldwide? After working on it for a long time, it turns out that it is not in the ball! Then why are you playing around the world?
It looks good, good luck to the author
I think it's better not to say the name of the move.
Don't take endless risks as soon as you have a strong woman, okay?
The plot is exciting and interesting, and it's great to watch! ! !
The first gift package is too cheap, the second move depends on shouting? If you practice such awesome moves, you can't just point one finger at a time. Third, is this first-level map (dungeon) automatically refreshed by monsters? Build a city and don't have a clear map around it? In this copy, are people from which cities in reality teleported to this city or are they all teleported to this city? Not rigorous! Also, what does experience have to do with the protagonist? In your setting, you just need to grind money. What kind of elixir can you practice? There is also a setting problem. If you can't kill someone, isn't it just a matter of killing the younger one to create a bigger one, and beating the older one to create an older one?
It was originally written very well, but later the data collapsed. Upgrading can only add less than 100 attributes on average, plus the basic attributes are almost zero, and low-level skills can add less than 100 attributes (the geniuses mentioned above all have higher attributes), which adds up to two hundred. The protagonist has an average of 400 attributes. The author says both are the same. Very convinced. Forcibly improve the attributes of supporting characters.
If you don't know how to describe the protagonist's expression, don't write it. I feel so embarrassed when I see it. You look at a city and smile weirdly. Are you ready to blow him up? There are also skills. It is also a wolf in the early stage of Qi Condensation. You hit the wolf's head with a punch at the beginning and it exploded into blood mist. You don't say it's awesome. Later, you use a Tao-level fingering technique to penetrate the wolf's head. You say it's awesome. You are really speechless. If you don't know how to describe it, don't write it and just skip it. Isn't it better? It's embarrassing to watch.
They all have Dao-level skills, but the result is the same as ordinary skills. A fight takes so long and is not straightforward enough. .
How can I put it, I was halfway through watching it, and there were a few questions that I didn't understand at all. Since you said you killed the old man, how could you go back and tell them that it was the protagonist who killed the person? He's still dying, and he's already incarnation after just building the foundation? ? ? ?
The first time I saw Yi Nian's template
Good
If I remember well, this is the second novel I have read with the setting of Yi Nian. I gave it five stars just because it is Yi Nian. How can I put it in terms of writing? I feel like the protagonist is a bit off.
If you don't change your mind about Xiaoyao, I might actually finish reading it. And your kid cultivates his body, right? Don't watch it anymore.
It's pretty good, and there's no worries. No one can punish the protagonist [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Where are the good people? I've read more than twenty chapters and still can't understand the grades. Let's talk about them from low to high. I'm confused.
A bit like a happy thought
There are a lot of things that seem wrong, but I still support it with four stars.
I've read Chapter 60 and finished reading it. It's not bad, at least it feels to my taste. 😁😁😁
It's ready, it looks very interesting, it feels like playing a game! [Like][Like][Like]
There are too many flaws and it looks awkward. The previous sentence said that you can use the best Qi Condensing Pill yourself and sell it as soon as it comes out. It is not rigorous at all.
Worldwide? After working on it for a long time, it turns out that it is not in the ball! Then why are you playing around the world?
It looks good, good luck to the author
I think it's better not to say the name of the move.
Don't take endless risks as soon as you have a strong woman, okay?
The plot is exciting and interesting, and it's great to watch! ! !
Come on, wait and see.
It's a refreshing article that suits my taste!
Why do you need green tea on the side?