Tianyuan Beastmastery

From what I see now, there is no big problem. However, there are no conditions for the protagonist to agree to An Ying. This makes me feel that the protagonist is a bit cheap. But despite its flaws, I still give this book five stars.

Tiger hooves? [What] shouldn't it be tiger claws? Also, it feels very awkward to read.

As I write, there will be fewer people

There are too many typos and the content is too intellectual. It is recommended not to read it with your brain.

I just started watching it not long ago, that is to say, either not to write so much, or to write it directly. You have repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist is the child of those two people. Is it interesting? It gives me a feeling like I am praising but I have no words, I want to write something but I can't! On the contrary, I think you can better show the characteristics of the protagonist by focusing on the protagonist's own efforts, rather than Tiantian: he is worthy of the child of those two.

The setting and plot are okay, but there are some details that I really can't control. Can't I tell the hero about his parents' identity? Is it meaningful to keep it a secret like this? Is it interesting? I really don't understand. Anyway, it's quite speechless. It's good to hear this. I really can't stop reading this book. Alas

It's not bad, but there are too many typos.

If you don't tell others, forget it if others don't tell you. You haven't even told a family member yet. What do you mean? Just hold it in. Do you have any enemies? If you tell me, you will die? Everything else is good, but this one is a bit speechless

It's really a flaw that there are so many typos, but as far as the content is concerned, it's okay at the beginning, but it feels a bit messy at the end.

It is no exaggeration to say that there are typos in every chapter! Not very well written!