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To be honest, this online game is quite well written, but it is not recommended to use the dungeon template in terms of skills. Swordsman skills are mostly extended by basic sword skills such as stabbing, teasing, horizontal, chopping, and slashing. What, sweeping thousands of armies, splitting Huashan with force, vertical and horizontal slashes, sword energy, etc. Generally speaking, try to go towards the fairy tale, or check out more martial arts novels (books written by Mr. Jin Yong and other people). Try not to go into Western fantasy. Strengthen the technical flow, and change the weakness to one-hit kill. For example, the weaknesses of humanoid monsters are the neck (head), heart, etc. It's better to be as close to reality as possible.

Same as the Peerless Poison Lord. Rubbish novel.

It's rare for an old bookworm to find a book he can read. This is my first time reading a book of this type. The assignment of characters, skills, and story structure are all very well written.

The author is a loyal fan of tainted milk powder [Start]

Wonderful! It's the type of combination of online games and reality that I like.

Not bad, good, great

Very nice, keep up the hard work

It's pretty good. Why do you get such a low rating? ?

Everyone has fun

Not bad, good, good, well written

The writing is really good. I hope to continue working hard and write better and better!

Good looking, worth recommending