I Have a Longevity System

The four stars are my encouragement to the author. To be honest, I had no sense of reading and was inexplicably held down and rubbed by someone who was at a higher level. It really ruined my outlook. After jumping off the cliff, I gave up watching the plot and persuaded everyone to quit.

Twenty or thirty chapters were written about a bandit den, all kinds of water, all kinds of mortals are about the same time as the Qi training period, let alone those with martial arts, just ordinary people, in the era of not having enough to eat, a strong man can kill a few mud legs. Even if the strong man is powerful, the immortal cultivator at least has spiritual energy, right?? The internal strength of people in martial arts is stronger than yours, and you are constantly pushing yourself. There is no sense of humor at all, and a world where only you find it funny has been achieved.

The sixth level of Qi training is almost the same as that of a mortal. I don't know how you practice it. The whole article is almost just about the main character trying to force himself to be very humorous. In fact, it's just a chatterbox and I'm too lazy to read it.

It's not clear how much lifespan should be added, so don't write about emotions if you don't have a heroine.

It's unreasonable. I'm the only one commenting, so I'm embarrassed to give it one star.

It's a bit weird and I can't put it into words.

It's a bit long-winded and I couldn't stand it after listening to dozens of chapters.

Too much nonsense

The protagonist is so rubbish, a monk is worse than a mortal

There's really a lot of nonsense