Pirate, Hit Garp and Become Luffy's Little Boy

Bai Yun: "Brother Sauron~" Sauron: "..." These two must be a pair! ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

Love it! Baijiang is really cute! Consider the no cp ending! Baijiang really goes well with everyone! A true omnivore will have sad [love][love]

I feel that this is a good book about following the boat. I read it in five days. I feel good about it. The protagonist is not too strong to grab the experience packs of the protagonists. He is not too strong. Things have changed but they haven't changed much. Anyway, it gave me a feeling that the protagonist has really integrated into it, rather than being too strong to steal the scene. I really like the interaction between the four brothers. I don't think it is OOC. I can't say anything about some negative reviews. It can only be said that everyone has their own preferences. If you like the protagonist's role and ability, you can read other books. After all, this is not the only one that follows the boat. There is no need to leave a negative review to show your presence. [I am right if you criticize me, and I will not pay attention to you.] I will save it for two days and then watch it again. I am looking forward to the plot of the protagonist reuniting with his friends two years later. I think Luffy will give the protagonist a hug of love, so go for it, author [eating melon]

I have been looking for so many copies of One Piece and Funaru, and this is really a very good-looking novel that I have seen. Unlike other authors, the protagonist can defeat the Yonko from the very beginning. This protagonist can also have some restrictions. I like it very much and look forward to more chapters.

It's quite good to watch, the plot is not messy, not too frivolous, there is no harem, and there is no heroine who is pure and passionate. I love it.

New book, you can take a look, comments are welcome [Working on draft][Understood]

The plot is still good, and the protagonist's strength is gradually improved, instead of cheating at the beginning and no one can beat him, nor is it a bounty of hundreds of millions at the beginning. I think it's pretty good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Not bad, looking forward to it

Overall, it's very good, but the plot moves too slowly. The Alabasta plot has almost 80 chapters. The characters of the Straw Hats are well drawn. Their personalities and strengths are described carefully and clearly, which is more consistent with the original work. Very nice.

I have read more than 90 chapters and I feel it is very well written. I also read a pirate fan novel before, also with a system. The author of that fan novel is not sure whether it is because no one loves it in reality, or whether he had something in mind when he wrote it. He wrote it for his own mother, who was sexually repressed, and turned a passionate adventure drama into a harem novel.

One of my favorites so far, very beautiful. The protagonist is not invincible, nor does he steal Luffy's limelight. The plot is interesting, and the protagonist's personality is also very likable. In short, I think this book is invincible, but too few people have read it.

I really like long-haired men who look like boys and girls. They are so beautiful that others think they are girls. Have a good friendship with Ace, Luffy, Sabo and Xiaobai Katakuri Law Even the master-disciple relationship is very good. It's like an invisible heartthrob. All is white. It's just that the update is too slow. I re-watched it three times. Boss, can I still wait for your extra episode? [Crying] [Crying]

I think it's quite good. It's not the kind of mindless novel that can crush the whole world from the beginning. The protagonist also grows up with everyone and is one level better than the protagonist group (but I can accept it. After all, he has a golden finger in the time-traveling system.) And as a person who knows the story, he did not get too involved in the development of the story, nor did he steal the highlight moments of each character. It has solved a few regrets for me. The most uncomfortable thing about the original work is Sabo's amnesia. He did not participate in the war. The moment he received the news of Ace's death in the newspaper, I felt that he was going to feel guilty [crying] Regarding the frailty buff, it is also easy to understand. For example, Blackbeard converts physical damage into mental damage and doubles the damage. Whitebeard's use of the Shock Fruit also damages the body. Without this buff, it would become a mindless cool article to crush the world. In the early stage, the protagonist was lazy and used his abilities to copy other people's physiques. Later, he realized that he could not continue like this and began to slowly exercise his own physique. This is also growth. Also, the plot that the protagonist knows only reaches Wano Country. I'm really looking forward to how it will develop after this. Please give the author more updates [Blow a kiss]

My favorite pirate fanfic, the protagonist's fruit abilities, plot arrangement, character relationships, and character portrayal are all very good. Anyway, I really like it. Moreover, the author is constantly updating, working diligently and diligently, and is very friendly to readers like me who follow updates. I just hope that the author will not stop updating and not finish the work💪

A rare good book, the most serious book in Tomato. Compared with those books that are obscene, invincible at the beginning, and finished in dozens or hundreds of chapters, it is not a little bit better. I read a few negative reviews, and they are all from people who have never seen the world. Especially those reviews that the plot is draggy. Don't worry about the author, come on!

No harem, no heroine, pure passion, and successfully avoided the poisonous spots. The plot isn't messy, but it's not rigorous enough, so it's generally okay.

The plot is really good, and the protagonist is also very good. Although some plots are a bit poisonous, the overall story is really good. I have listened to this book for the second time. The author keeps up the good work [shy][shy][shy]

I personally think it's very good-looking. The protagonist is invincible even if he doesn't start the game. The character's image is very delicate.

[You taste it carefully] If you don't mind suspense, brain-burning and certain twists, then this will be the best book you have ever read, and it is still growing, so don't you really want to read it? All growth has its own traces, and no one is invincible all of a sudden. If you like slow growth, this will be a very enjoyable book.

It is true that there are not many good Pirates articles on Tomato. Although there are some innocuous little points, it is obvious that the author is a fan of Lao Pirates. However, don't read some of the comments. Some people really have never read Pirates and only read the fanfics. They just make random comments and want to curse after reading it, which affects the perception [smile] [awkward laugh]

Come on, author! ! Since reading the latest chapter, I have tried to read other books about One Piece, but none of them have attracted me as much as this one. To be honest, I can't even stand those books, but this one is my favorite. Good cheers for the author. I'm urging you to update more.

It's well written and I like the content. I hope you don't follow the plot in the later stages. I feel like One Piece is a bit unfinished later on.

The content is very coherent and the content is very exciting.

It's very interesting. I strongly support it. It doesn't randomly change the plot or interfere with the protagonist's judgment like other pirate novels. Anyway, I strongly support it and I hope the author can keep doing it [smile]

Although the front is not very good, it becomes more and more beautiful from the top and the back is pretty good. I hope Xiaobai and Xiaobai will be together in the end. Even if not, I still hope the author will give a side story [shy] If there is a female protagonist in the future, just pretend that I didn't say anything [grieved]

I feel that the author's writing is really good and there are a lot of foreshadowings. Each individual branch line has its own meaning. Every detail is filled in later. When a foreshadowing is proposed, my mind automatically recalls it. Although there are many typos, it is really good.

I admit that I am indeed accumulating chapters, but this one is really good-looking. I also particularly like Shellman in it. It is from here that I started to recommend Beckman, and it is also from here that I started to learn more about Beckman.

Keep writing, you can take your time, I want to see them and the Straw Hats, have Ace's world-class banquet, the author just said this, as long as you don't write, I will keep reading

The writing is very good, the characters are very realistic, and it feels like a pirate [please update]

This Pirates fanfic is currently the best one I personally think. I've been watching One Piece for 10 years. Other fanfics are all mindless and cool. Only this one sticks to the main storyline of One Piece and fills in some pitfalls of the original work. It's very interesting.

One of the few movies that I can keep watching. It's a hot-blooded, funny, and richly plotted movie. [Like] Dear readers, don't give up on this book just because it is a new chapter. This book not only has the original plot but also originality to make up for some of the regrets. Believe me, readers who have spent more than 7,000 hours will not lie to you [Like]