Traveling Through Chengshu, a Group of Old Men Called Me Liu Shen

We're recruiting, and the pay is good. Package travel package rebirth package delivery system. Because the freshmen are small There are too many worlds, resulting in a serious shortage of travelers, so now Recruiting time-travelers, regardless of gender, old or young, is on a first-come, first-served basis. Point If you like it, you will get the system. (Give it a try, it won't work anyway) Ask for money)

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Thank you to every reader who clicked in. I am Chuan Yi, the author of this book. This article is group portrait + development. It is a relatively novel writing method. Some brothers may be impressed by it, but those who like the exciting upgrade flow may not be interested. Writing and reading books are both a process of mutual selection, and Sichuan Yi cannot take care of everyone's preferences. So first say thank you to the brothers who like it, and then I wish the brothers who don't like it to find a book they like. If you feel that the logic is wrong or uncomfortable, you can leave a message below. If you want to add characters or settings, I will also adopt it as appropriate. Writing a book is a time of mixed praise and praise. You may be praised to a height that is not your own, and you may also suffer unreasonable abuse. There are a lot of details that may be overlooked when making a long article. I hope you can forgive me as long as it does not affect reading. If there are any logical flaws, just leave a message and I will actively delete it. I hope brothers who like it can give it a good review. I also accept negative comments and complaints from brothers who don't like it. But those who come up and directly say "please invite trolls and swipe data" should stay away. I will not allow you to insult my work and the readers who like this book. The Tomato novel scoring mechanism has the highest weight of three and seven, and the score accounts for less than 20%. I can't afford to ask 20,000 people to follow up and let everyone know.

For a bookworm who has been a bookworm for more than ten years, the plot is more delicate, and the characterization and environmental description are pretty good. However, there is a little bit of foreshadowing in the big pit. It needs an outline, especially one that is buried deeper, so as to attract the curiosity of book lovers. There are too many personal chapters of the protagonist who is immortal, and it is a bit tiring to read. Generally speaking, it currently surpasses most time travel fantasy.

The work is okay. Among similar novels, the angle is novel and the logic is clear. However, it has not yet made a breakthrough in the Shuangwen genre. After satisfying the desire for development and growth, looking back, I can see that the main theme of the article has too little allusion to life (that is, the main theme is to cultivate immortality... It can be repaired) Immortality is just a form. Look at the old demon Han. He describes the hardships of life and the unpredictable nature of the human heart very well. The main characters are also very fleshed out and full of details.) If the reader does not gain valuable opinions, then this novel will not be able to retain people. And each time the protagonist grows up, he has a different target (believer). Can one main believer have a short story? (It's similar to Ya She's writing style). By using different short stories to promote the development of the plot, the author has more energy to perfect the theme, shape the characters, create the atmosphere, etc., And the works will be more attractive to readers.

It really gets better and better as it goes on. The early stage is a bit dull, but the later stage is getting better and better, and I am looking forward to it more and more. Come on, author! This kind of group portrait description is quite good. The main character is not fully described, but he is involved in it. It is very good for this kind of book. Every character is quite cute. I hope the little beggar can be happy in the future! If you didn't meet me in the first half of your life, you have already experienced the misery of the world. Now that you have met me, I hope you will experience the beauty of the world in the second half of your life. No matter what happened in the previous life, I hope you will accompany me to the end in this life!

No need to poke, there are a lot of laughs, which makes people forget to come back. Highly recommended, especially when the mouse is punching, it is a bit unbearable [cover face][cover face][cover face][cry][cover face]

I haven't seen this kind of traditional fantasy novel for a long time. Although the system has been added, it is still more traditional fantasy. The last time I read it was Perfect World. It can be seen that the author borrowed the template of Perfect World. The protagonist Liu Shu is also Liu Shen, and Zhao Li's experience is very similar to Huang when he was a child. Although he used Perfect, he also wrote his own style of writing. But sometimes I feel that the protagonist is not so domineering and has to ask others for everything. This aspect is a bit stretched, because in my mind Liu Shen is omnipotent. The ancient times and taboos will be introduced later, and the world view of the framework is very large. I hope to fill in all the pits. Although I really want to rush for more updates, I know that this kind of novel needs to be conceptualized, so I will keep writing with the current ideas. Come on! I saw many comments in the comment area. They were all dissatisfied with the protagonist not being invincible and felt that the upgrade was too slow. However, traditional fantasy has thousands of chapters. The protagonist develops slowly in this way. The protagonist must be invincible, but not all at once. What you see is the growth process of the protagonist. It is definitely different from some cool articles on Tomato. I don't recommend reading it if you can't bear it.

I read it in two or three days, and I really like it. It's really good. First of all, the description is good, especially the description of the environment and the appearance of the characters, so that I can imagine the picture. And although now I am telling the story of the supporting characters, I still like it very much. There are all kinds of believers in it, and it seems that the protagonists of many books are mixed in the book. There are tears and laughter. I feel that the logic and characters in it have not collapsed.

Features: ①The subject matter is good, but I don't know how big the world view is. ②The plot is okay. So far, I haven't seen any poisonous points. It's just that the number of transfers is a bit low. ③The characters are okay and there are no problems so far. All in all, it's okay [eating melon] [eating melon]

It's pretty good, but I realized after reading it that I've been reading this book today, and I haven't made any major changes to my work, nor have I updated it 😭. In addition, I would like to ask the author to update it quickly, it's not enough to read [shy]

It's beautiful, I will always love this kind of behind-the-scenes flow. And I feel like the author didn't write it awkwardly, but there's a little bit of driving and that kind of, well, human nature is about whether to kill people, and whether the protagonist is the Virgin. Such troublesome problems, but the author is very smart and will avoid them without spending too much pen and ink.

I watched it for a long time, and I personally liked the plot. Because in fact, I really wanted to find a protagonist in a book with a purely passerby perspective. The plot design is very interesting. In less than two hundred plots, many stories can be told. The most attractive thing, the one that attracted me, is probably the plot of developing villages. Similar to inheritance. Inherit fireworks and civilization. Year after year, generation after generation. A son begets a grandson, a grandson begets a son, a son has a son, and a son has a grandson. It just lacks some twists and turns in the story. My personal suggestion is to try to let the village face a huge crisis, and then save it or enter a new reincarnation or other thrilling plot. The story will be more exciting. The last thing is here. I hope this book will be loved by more readers and will get better and better. Come on! (The above represents only my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it.)

This rating was low, but it has improved. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง[learned][learned][learned]. I like it very much. The protagonist has his own story line behind the scenes. Kuoyi

So far, I am very satisfied with it and I am looking forward to the next plot. The world must be magnificent. I feel that the presence of pig's feet is not low at all, and I also like this writing method. It is really fulfilling to watch your villagers grow, especially the short story of death replaying life. I'm really looking forward to the next content. I hope that the perspective of the group portrait of the main character and the big boss behind the scenes will be reserved. It's really delicious.

Not bad, not bad, but there are a few chapters (100 million) [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon] [blowing kiss]

I've only read seven chapters, and I can't help but comment. Among the stories of the previous believers, the one that really touched me was Xiao Huang. For some reason, his eyes were filled with tears. It was clear that there were no gorgeous words to decorate them from head to toe. Ordinary words could no longer be ordinary. But it can make people feel the extraordinaryness. I have been reading books on Tomato for a long time, and this is the best book I have ever read. I have reviewed many books and given them five-star reviews, but after reading this book, I felt it was about four and a half stars. Let's not talk about the rest of Chapter 7. I have never seen the first part. (Everyone has their own thoughts, and there is no need to judge if they disagree. Everyone is the protagonist in their own world)

Personally speaking, the early stage of this book is good, but the framework is very large. If it is well written, it will be no less than a first-class article. Of course, if you can't contain it, the pie will be too big for you to eat. Let's take a look at the back.

The content is good and the subject matter is novel. However, the rating is a bit low and it shouldn't be. I support you and I hope you will update it more! Come on, writing books is like this. It's a good thing to have the original intention. Don't look at the low rating now. I feel that he is more than just writing with such heart and you will receive wonderful rewards [Like]

This book is quite good, the plot is reasonable and not toxic, which I don't have at the moment, and the characterization has a worldly feel to it.

It's okay, and I particularly like this kind of behind-the-scenes flow. Except for Wang Qiye's B-level appearance, the rest of the plot is okay. It's a pity that Xiao Huang died at the beginning. After all, he was the protagonist's first spirit beast believer, and he was very respectful to him. Even when he died, he was thinking about the protagonist. This is also a pity. The later part is actually okay. The only shortcoming is that it is too slow [laughter]. I finished it in two times.

I can only say that it's very good. At least the emotions are well written, and it's easy to get involved. In the front, it's like you are the protagonist. After life and death, watching the ancients leave, I don't feel this way in the back, but it's also very good. You can go at your own pace, don't be disturbed by those comments, take your time and don't rush [Chigua]

Good-looking, looks smooth, not embarrassing

It's so beautiful, but it's too short and not enough to read. I hope to add more words, please come on! I wish you high scores [code to live] [code to live] [code to live] [code to live]

The book is actually okay. The portrayal of the life and death partings seen by the protagonist is very good. The portrayal of the supporting characters is also delicate in Tomato. However, there are many problems. The first is about the loyalty of believers. Does it have a value that will increase and drop? When loyalty is full, it will be absolutely loyal, or will it be absolutely loyal once it is opened? Loyal from the beginning, there is no explanation here and it is a bit confusing. There is also the problem of the protagonist, who claims to be omniscient and omnipotent in the consciousness of the believer. Well, this is completely different in the reborn person. This omniscient and omnipotent should be more detailed, it is best to say that it is omniscient and omnipotent in a limited range, and there is the portrayal of the protagonist. Well, it might be much better if the protagonist is not a god but a master, because the protagonist cannot be seen as a god at all. In the eyes of believers, the protagonist may be a very good and powerful creature, but I can't see the shadow of a god. Many things should not be done directly by the protagonist's image of god, such as delivering messages, etc. Some trivial matters, as well as teaching skills to the villagers, are really not like what a god would do. The protagonist playing a god here feels unqualified. This has nothing to do with the strength of the god. Well, you can look at the role of the god in Lord of Mysteries and learn from the portrayal of the gods. They all start with low power, so we should learn from it.

This book is quite good. The author's writing style is very good. At least you can keep reading. The author has a lot of foreshadowing for the protagonist's identity. The plot is very long and the story should be exciting. The protagonist has a very sloppy personality and the followers he brings out are also very wretched. It's really funny.

The story written by the author for believers is very emotional and the plot is quite good. I hope I can look forward to the time when the protagonist dominates the world (or it can have a sad ending). I prefer tragedy [cover face][cover face]

It's quite interesting, but I don't think you should read it rationally when reading some of the clips (for example, when Xiao Huang, the mouse, stole something belonging to an ape and gave it to the protagonist and was beaten to death by the ape, the protagonist became stronger and wanted to avenge Xiao Huang, but I think the ape was not wrong), but this novel is still relatively logical.

Very good! The protagonist has the ability to make people surrender to him! Any technique is good this time! There are so many people doing things for themselves and doing things for themselves, so how can there be no success! As the saying goes, things get easier when there are more people!

I give it 5x because the writing is really good, but the rushed ending is a bit of a pity. In fact, I already guessed a few things based on the author's hints halfway through, and then when I saw the ending, it became clear. It's like Inception, and it's similar to a novel I've read before. There's a bit of time and space reincarnating, and each point intersects to create a different ending. I hope to see a very beautiful extra story.