Zhu Xian************

The overall feeling is pretty good [like] But I feel that the protagonist's character should be restrained and feels a little untidy (ง •̀_•́)ง

The quality is quite high, I beg the author to try to update it as much as possible [Top post][Top post][Top post] @ Annual Sales No. 1 @ Chaoxi Hongye

Nice! ! ! I read the latest chapter overnight. I really like it. It is a rare masterpiece among Zhu Xian fans. I hope the author can perform stably and not be too frustrated! ! !

The author will update me soon, it's good, the writing is very good, I like this tone [like] [like]

This is probably one of the best-looking Zhu Xian fanfics, but it's just a little lacking.

It's quite interesting. The plot is not very awkward. Apart from being a dog licker, the writing is also quite smooth. It can be seen that the author still has a certain level of literature. I read too many novels of Tomato and used them back and forth in one sentence. It's uncomfortable to read. Come on, if the plot doesn't break down, it will be a good book.

I have read a lot of topics like this [eating melons], but this one is the only one that I like. It is full of literary talent and has romance and rationality in the madness. It is a bit interesting [smile] [smile] [smile] [like] I like it very much [love] [love]

The author's thinking is lively and his writing style is uninhibited. I admire him greatly.

The writing is quite good. Except for the unreasonable stoppage of good and evil when Zhang Xiaofan gets into trouble, it is indeed a major poisonous point in theory. No one with a brain would arrange the plot like this because it is too unreasonable. It is just a form of presentation used to highlight the characters in film and television dramas. Although it is unreasonable, it does not affect the content. The content is still very good, the writing style is also quite good, and the emotions are described in detail, but the emotional scenes are still a bit lacking, and there are relatively few.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu waited for 900 years, Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Zi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update, One day, one day, one month, a weak young girl was lying beside the bed, mouth But Jiao smiled slightly. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and the corners of her eyes The tears shone slightly. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

The overall pacing is pretty good, and the writing is okay. The protagonist's character is a bit off-kilter, but his actions are quite stable. Although the protagonist's portrayal is not outstanding, it is above the standard. The overall style of the story does not feel sadistic, and that's all I have for now [smile]

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Not bad, not bad. I can accept Xueqi and cut off Hu Tianshu with peace of mind. I break through quickly enough. There is basically no urination, but there is something wrong. I started licking beautiful women when I was 12 or 13 years old. I licked a bit too much. But with the protection of the author, I can lick it successfully. In fact, the author has an invisible hole that should be filled. The male protagonist's qualifications are incredible. Will the major peaks of the Qingyun Sect consider whether the male protagonist has younger brothers and sisters at home? I should have gone to visit my hometown long ago.

It is indeed very interesting to watch. There is no outrageous system start. The main character has only one time-travel golden finger and a talent with huge potential, so it seems to be very immersive. The NPC characters in it are very similar to the characters in Zhu Xian's original biography, and the characters are inseparable. It's a bit addictive and worth getting into.

It's a nice fanfic, and the ending arrangements for the female characters are also good. Like Baguio and Zhang Xiaofan, these two should have an ending. Also, Lu Xueqi's character could be a little cooler. Even if Xueqi's heart is with the protagonist, she is still cold. Humph, it's so good. It's one of the best Zhu Xian fanfics I've ever read. The author must finish it with he. I hope we don't have a harem. The protagonist and Xue Qi are just fine. Jin Ping'er doesn't deserve it.

It looks great, but the update is too slow. Come on, author, come on, come on, come on, support it.

It is very close to the original work, with beautiful writing, humor, and delicate grasp of emotions. It is a very, very good book.

Except for the fact that the protagonist is a bit "too much" at times, it is generally a good book. The overall rhythm is good. If the protagonist's character is polished and mastered, it can be regarded as an excellent fan work.

This book is good in all aspects, except for the slow update~ Dear author, you won't stop updating like this, right? If so, my family runs a blade factory, you know! ! !

Although there are many scoldings, I still want to support the author. This is the Zhu Xian I wanted to see most back then. As for the inner drama of being a talker, giving away girls and so on, haha, benevolent people have different views on benevolence and wise people have different opinions. In short, I feel that the writing is quite good. Although the author seems to be suspected of being a eunuch, it does not prevent me from liking the first half of what he wrote. I will support it with a five-star rating. I hope the author does not want to be a eunuch and is responsible for himself and his works and book friends. Thank you

The writing is good, and the portrayal of the protagonist's character is quite reasonable. A little innovation in the plot would be better. Next is the plot of going down the mountain. I think the author can add a separately created plot and then connect it to the main plot ten years later. Of course, it might be more exciting if Zhang Xiaofan's transformation process could be written about. The ten years in the original work are passed by in passing, and the author can add more as appropriate.

It's super nice, better than other Qingyun fan novels

I like this book very much. I like the character of the protagonist very much. It is not like other prose works where everyone pretends to be aloof and has no character traits at all. It is this informal style that is very good. It is good to be dedicated and you can catch it as soon as you chase it. That is not love. It can only worship money and ability, completely ignoring character. The plot can be more out of the ordinary, preferably unexpected and unexpected, which will be very interesting. I have read no less than 10 basic books of Zhu Xian, but yours is the most special. Why? At present, Zhang Xiaofan still plays a lot of roles. Other novels are written, but Zhang Xiaofan has disappeared. Without Zhang Xiaofan, Zhu Xian would not be perfect, then it would not be called Zhu Xian. I would like to give the author some advice not to lose the original protagonist. Fan fiction has no protagonist, and the flavor is gone.

I finally found a Zhu Xian fan novel. Although Baguio is not the heroine, I found this Zhu Xian fan novel now. The previous Zhu Xian fan novels were really great. But now I can't keep up with the times. I hope the author can write well. It's just that this author is really slow.

Personally, I feel that this book is one of the better among Zhu Xian fans. There has been no update for so many days. Has he entered the palace?

Generally speaking, the biggest problem with this book is the character of the protagonist in the early stage. He is a bit off-kilter and verbose, making him feel like a child. Also, it was too awkward when chasing Xue Qi. It gets much better later on. You can still read it if you survive the first part. Come on, author!

Personally, I think the relationship between the protagonist and Lu Xueqi could be a little more twisty. A smooth-sailing story is not that good.

It looks great, it looks great, and I am immersed in it. It fulfilled my wildest dreams. Thanks to the author, the money will come and it will be smooth sailing.

It's great. I finished reading it a long time ago, but the author hasn't updated it yet.

This book is good. Xiao Dinghou has read a lot of Zhu Xian fan's time travel and introduction system articles, and feels that this book is quite good. The general plot follows the original work, there is no conflict, and it is very interesting. Big cheers for the author! [Like][Like] Oops, a new chapter is finally out. Brother Pingtou quickly updated it to make up for yesterday's one. Come on come on