Genshin Impact: Falling in Love with He and Xiao After Reincarnating

Gaga looks great, thank you to the author! (Roaring) (Become a monkey) (Fly into the virgin forest) (Dang the tree and vine) (Chuang Fei passes by the monkey eating banana) (Roar) (Become a monkey) (Fly into the primitive forest) (Dang the tree and vine) (Chuang Fei passes by the monkey eating banana) (Roar) (Become a monkey) (Fly into the virgin forest) (Dang the tree and vine)

Welcome all travelers who meet here ~ First-person perspective, there will be self-design, adaptation and imagination, the core idea is like the title of the book, okay😘

Because Mandrill plays the original god, I really love this book so much 😢 😢 😢 Good cheers for the author, I love this book so much [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I love reading this book, but it's a bit short and not enough, and Shiyan is a bit sadistic and made me cry while reading it, so I can only give you four stars, but I still have one star left for you in my heart. Come on!! Oh my god, I made up that one star, but I hope you can take time out of your busy schedule to write a novel about Mandrill CP Not a Traveler. Thank you.

To be honest, when I saw the middle, I thought the graduation ending was about to happen, and then I was very sad. Fortunately, I continued reading. The ending was really sweet. Although the middle was a little bumpy, the knife, although sharp, was made of sugar. If you taste it carefully, you will find that it is very sweet, very sweet, and it will not cut your mouth. It is like a book written by the author. If you read too hastily and don't taste it carefully, you will feel really heartbroken. But if you look at it carefully, you will find that the author has prepared a perfect ending for every trick. Really, I really like it! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ The word "graduate" is wrong, it's "be"

I'm waiting for the author to update a few more chapters, but I just like your book so much that I can't bother with you. But these few chapters are so frustrating, why am I waiting to die? I thought I was different from others, but now I think it's just me being too sentimental. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

I was attracted by the title of the book at first. I thought it was pretty good overall, relaxed and humorous, and the part about helping the ghost fulfill its wish was very touching. In addition to the emotional line, the heroine also has her own growth path. The character design fits pretty well. It was just that it was a little confusing in the later stages, and I obviously felt that the author's writing skills were insufficient, and he couldn't grasp the huge plot of reincarnation. I could barely understand it only through the comment section and the author's supplements at the end. There are some good opportunities for growth in the front, but they are not used at all in the end. They are all about the love and hatred between the male and female protagonists because of their "substitutes". The heroine also has an ambiguous attitude towards Mandrill in the future and Mandrill in the past. They are the same person, but because of the complexity of the emotional line between them, the heroine feels like a female Neptune. This article is narrated in the first person, but the heroine has too little perspective in her heart. She is obviously using me, but from the perspective of a bystander, so some drastic emotional changes are very inexplicable. It is all about the heroine, and very little about other people's routes. When the plot reaches the point where everyone fights against the gods, I feel that the heroine's reasons are quite reasonable, and the others are summarized in just one or two sentences. It feels like they were forced to fill in the story. There is foreshadowing in the previous article, but it is too shallow and too little. I feel that the author has very exciting ideas but he did not write them out. It is really a pity. As the relationship between the male and female protagonists develops to the later stage, they become more and more mindless. The author can write about what they do together other than feeding readers dog food. Otherwise, it will feel like they are always in love and have nothing to do. To sum up, there are many advantages and disadvantages. The author is very imaginative and has his own ideas. It's just that the writing style needs to be strengthened, and the character creation can be more distinct. Think about the heroine's personality before writing. For a fanfic like this, I think you should think about what type of heroine the hero would like, what is the reason why he likes the heroine, and what are the opportunities. These should be expressed more clearly.

This morning I walked into McDonald's, and the clerk asked me what I wanted to order. There were shrimp burgers, cheeseburgers, pork knuckle burgers, chicken drumstick burgers, beef burgers, and cod burgers. My tears flowed down. She couldn't understand my sadness. There were so many burgers here, but I just wanted my author baby to write an article [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

The writing style is very close to the original work. It was so exciting that I felt dizzy after watching it all night yesterday and wanted to read it. But sometimes I couldn't understand the hints and foreshadowing. If I think about it carefully, I just think it's awesome! It's so tiring to watch it all the time 😭 It's so good, the ending is nice

It's so well written!!!!! That's why no one is watching!!!!!!!