Break**

Well, that changed in Chapter 9. Come on! [Learned] I want something more erotic

How can I put it... This kind of system gives a plot of choosing one of the two options [eat melon], and I feel that the protagonist's character characteristics cannot be well expressed. Secondly, there are places where there are no commas, which makes it a bit uncomfortable [face covering] But come on, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

The author should add more sentence fragments,,,,,,,

The writing is not very good, but the content is okay, keep up the good work.