Lighting the Divine Fire at the Beginning: Shocking a Group of Primitive People

It's pretty good-looking, but it's a little lacking [I'm about to cry]

Please support me a lot, I will work hard to bring you a wonderful original world!

It's very beautiful, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are all vivid and flesh-and-blood, and the protagonist will also make mistakes [Like] [Like] [Like] I'm afraid that there will be nothing to read in the later stages of writing, so it would be better to add a little mystery, such as the Classic of Mountains and Seas and other ancient myths and legends, which is an imaginary world anyway [laughing] [thinking]

This book is quite good, I highly recommend reading it Brothers, I gave this book two stars for a special reason. I believe you will not be disappointed with this book. I highly recommend reading it.

I've watched half of it, and I don't have any big problems. Although the author has a modern romanticism in the description process, it can be seen that the author is working hard during the writing process. With this hard work, I gave it five stars instead of four. The author got lost in his writing later. I suggest the author read some books on economics.

I'll give it four stars first. It's very interesting. If I can continue watching it later, I'll give it five stars [laughing evilly] [thinking] Okay, I've read a lot of them, and they're indeed pretty good 5 stars [Sending my heart]

It can be seen that the author wrote very carefully and worked very hard. Much better looking than those system cheats on Tomato. Come on, author Come on, author, I hope it doesn't end badly.

This book is well written and beautiful. The plot is full of ups and downs, and all the characters in the article are flesh and blood, vivid and vivid. The male protagonist Jiang Yuan is a modern Chinese medicine graduate, but he is also an archeology fan and is familiar with all kinds of ancient creatures. He accidentally traveled to ancient times. As soon as he traveled through the past, he was attacked by various ancient creatures and almost died. While running for his life, he encountered alien wolves, and at this critical moment, he encountered cannibals. Unfortunately, he was caught by the cannibals and brought back to his tribe's territory. At this time, he met Qing, the daughter of the leader of the Yunxi tribe who was also captured. The two of them helped each other untie the vines and looked for opportunities to escape from the cannibal territory and go to the Yunxi tribe. Since then, Jiang Yuan has become a member of the Yunxi tribe. He also used his wisdom to lead the Yunxi tribe to eat and clothe themselves while uniting with other tribesmen to exterminate the cannibals. And in the days that followed, he conquered the world and unified the country.

From the primitive times to the founding of the country and the proclaimed emperor. There is no system, and by developing step by step on your own, the plot develops relatively smoothly without any delay. All in all, this kind of primitive era development story is pretty good.

I feel something is wrong when I see a beautiful woman

When a typhoon comes, the pigs will fly. Therefore, when you really fly, you must clearly know whether it is because you can fly or because of external forces. Pigs that fly by typhoons will fall down sooner or later

This book is more traditional, and it is actually a bit difficult on this platform. But if you write one million words, do a test, and then update it to two to three million words, this book can support the author for several years. Come on, the early stage is still relatively difficult. If you don't use your imagination and have less than a million words, don't expect to make a lot of money.

I wish all readers who read this comment: Having both ability and political integrity, good looks, both civil and military skills, being outstanding, being unparalleled in elegance, being outstanding, being a dragon or a phoenix among people, having a jade tree in the wind, having a good appearance, being a proud man of heaven, being quick-thinking, being knowledgeable, being loved by everyone, having a wealth of knowledge, having a wealth of knowledge, being well-informed, having unique wisdom, unique insights, insight into the essence, being handsome, being heroic, and having great talent. Proud, personable, gentle, handsome, dignified appearance, extraordinary, humble gentleman, gentle as jade, virtuous, well-behaved, magnanimous, aboveboard, modest and courteous, magnanimous, smart and capable, able to handle things with ease, light and easy, capable and neat, skilled, independent, strategizing and enterprising. !

The plot is exciting, but the physical progress and emotional progress do not match. Hope to speed up. The author writes very carefully. The author has included pictures of the giant beasts, weapons, tools, etc. In the article. Like👍🏻Like👍🏻

It's not enough. Author, your book is very popular. I have read 95% of the original novels, and this one can be ranked in the top three. Are you in such a hurry to finish? I'm sorry, one chapter has come to an end.

I don't know how to comment, but it's so beautiful. Cheers, author＾0＾~ Finished spreading flowers! ! !

It's very nice, but I didn't write everything in the back. It's too urgent at the end. I highly recommend it.

It's a bit short, more than one chapter would be better.

I haven't seen any salt after reading Chapter 30. Is salt just a condiment in your mind?

Not bad, not bad. It's much better than those books about primitive society. It's just that it's exciting. The author should understand me. Cough, cough, cough. Cough. Cough. Cough. Cough. Cough. Cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough, cough

I'm curious whether the Bronze Age has begun outside the mountains [Thinking]

It was quite satisfactory, but Snake Valley was too deliberate. From then on, there was a long war. A group of women went out to find someone and were speechless all night. It was too deliberate.

The ending is too sudden! Otherwise it would definitely be five stars! Keep up the good work!

Come on, author, this book is worth recommending

Niu B is super super super super super super super super good looking!

It's really good. I like to read this kind of unsystematic farming novel. I would like to give it a good review. The article is very good. Come on!

Rigorous research, clear writing, first-class writing

The writing is good, the plot is reasonable, the characters are realistic, the characters are vivid, and the plot line is solid and not exaggerated. Although there are some details, readers like me don't pay attention to them. The most important thing is that the ending of this book is too rushed. It is indeed quite interesting.

This is the most exciting original novel I have read since reading Tomato. Please update it soon!

It's very well written. It's one of the best novels I've ever read. I give it five stars.