Building a Huaxia Universe in a World of Immortals and Heroes

After reading this, I will say that this novel is not bad and I will continue reading it. I can feel from it that the author is really serious about constructing a world, a world where immortality and China are integrated. The idea is good, but the author uses a large area at the beginning to introduce the background of the world, which makes the reader feel bored. The beginning of a book is the most attractive to readers. If the first few chapters at the beginning do not attract readers, it will be considered that the author's work is not good. This is also a common problem among people who read e-books in this era. So if the background is introduced in a different way at the beginning, such as using the dialogue between master and apprentice, events that happened, etc. To highlight the background of this world, it may be more attractive to readers, which is why I lost one star. Of course, except for the first few chapters, which are a bit unappealing, the rest will gradually become interesting. So come on! Author, I will continue to pay attention to your works

Insist the author to continue writing, but the author says this The book introduces this, so I hope the author will work hard to realize what he said in the introduction. Don't think too much. It's just that the Tang Dynasty was still a little out of touch with the era of immortality. When the history of the Tang Dynasty still existed, there were still prehistoric and journey to the west, and the biography of Agarwood splitting the mountain to save his mother will never disappear. Do you keep saying that immortals exist? But gods and goddesses really existed in the world of the Tang Dynasty. The protagonist never knew that saints, gods, and demons were paying attention to you wandering around the Skynet and changing the world. Also, the protagonist did not know that the changes in the Tang Dynasty had already happened. Saints and gods did not exist, but who said that saints and gods disappeared? It was just a story about the world sending saints, gods, and demons to live on the other side of the world and pay attention to the protagonist. I was just thinking about it and guessing! I hope this book will not be finished too soon. I hope this book will never be finished. Also, the author will not make readers wait for such a long time for updates. Don't waste time and delay the update. I hope the author will not disappoint readers.

You can't forcefully show us your worldview at the beginning. You can start the plot first. If you have something mentioned in the plot, you can start explaining it. If you don't mention it, you can leave it out. Otherwise, it will be too boring in the early stage. I didn't even want to read the first 7 chapters. In the end, if it weren't for the lack of articles about the Xiuxian entertainment industry, I wouldn't come back. Tomato is originally a fast-food mode. You are so slow and you directly persuaded 80% of the people. Please be more careful in the future [face covering]

If you don't know how to write about this kind of subject, I suggest you read [I Develop Modern Civilization in the World of Cultivation]. The first hundred or so pictures are all nonsense and never get to the topic. It's like writing a running account. You get up in the morning, eat at noon, and go to bed at night. If you want to develop modern culture, you should write directly. There is also a book about making movies in the world of cultivation, which is better than the one written. It's like a primary school student's writing style.

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After reading the author, I feel that the completeness of shaping the worldview is rare in this tomato. I hope you will write it down and I will help promote the book [Like]

The new routine is very interesting. I finished watching it. There are many settings that I didn't understand. Maybe it's because my understanding is limited and I was confused by the clouds [face covering]

The feeling disappeared as soon as it started. It was really too watery.

It's a bit like a running account, so good water

The background structure of this article is good, but the difference between the immortal and the mortal is not very obvious. . .