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The subject matter is very novel and the writing is okay. But regarding ghost stories, I suggest the author refer to it. Some analysis done by others. Using dreams or something is too common. From the perspective of the protagonist collecting emotions, it would be better to use some weird settings. For example, this home is an endless reincarnation. After reading it, I felt that the author was a little unable to control it. First of all, there is no need to connect all the stories together. The original theme was very good. Forcibly changing the settings has become somewhat nondescript. Feeling quite disappointed. To be honest, the author chose the topic really well. But it's really a little bit, I can only say go for it, but I really can't stand it anymore. I hope I can write better in the future

Very good, there is no such ink as others, I can deduce everything else and say a lot. There are many things that are not stated, which makes people feel a bit scary. In fact, there are no rules. If you don't state the rules, let me explore and let my brain make up. I feel like there is something wrong with the second male lead. Mainly explore the perfect level.

Dear author, you are so good-looking, so elegant, so beautiful, with white teeth, red lips, frowning makeup, like a lotus, graceful and graceful, beautiful and fragrant, petite and exquisite, a peerless beauty, with picturesque features, delicate features and beautiful eyes. Like a crown jade, with a flowery face and a moonlike appearance, charming face, bright eyes and white teeth, a thousand beauties, a charming person, a charming head, a moth-like eyebrow, a flower-like jade, eyes that cut through the water, a graceful and graceful figure, an immortal posture, a small family jasper, a beautiful appearance and a wise heart, young peaches and plums, a graceful manner, and hands like soft jade. , The beautiful flowers shy of the moon, the hibiscus emerging from the water, the natural beauty of the country, gentle and pleasant, beautiful and moving, noble and cold, the most gorgeous, the beautiful eyebrows, as beautiful as a fairy, the ice and snow are smart, gentle and pleasant, as beautiful as a fairy, unparalleled elegance, natural beauty. Do you want to write a few more chapters? [Shy]

Don't you write games? Why do you write it like a horror novel? Woohoo, I don't dare to stretch my feet out of the quilt when reading it at night QAQ

The subject matter in this novel is very novel, and some of the author's personal thoughts are added to it. However, success is determined by Xiao He, and failure is determined by Xiao He. The author has too many personal complaints. It is completely like a sea, full of water. And for some people who don't know much about virtual characters, it's a headache to look up pictures online. Don't forget, author, you can post pictures now! Especially the plot description in the second rule-based ghost story game is simply a highlight. Here I have to express my personal thoughts: Author, you tricked me into tears again! Ahem, let's get back to the topic. The author who has given up is too easy to complain and write. The whole plot is relatively smooth. It moves quickly in the appropriate water areas. Just watching the main plot still gives people a very happy feeling. Of course, readers who insist on no heroine will be disappointed (I know there are many such readers). The protagonist of this book begins There is a Wife (I really didn't expect it at the time, after all, this is my first reading challenge for a reader who likes no cp and no heroine). I know that most people really don't like to read love lines, and you can choose to ignore it. However, the author's writing style in this book is okay, not so poisonous, and readers who are not so resistant can give it a try. Finally, this is not for the readers, but for the author: write quickly, the day lilies I'm waiting for are already cold, can't the efficiency be improved a little? Do you know that reading a little more all at once, a little more all at once, will dampen our enthusiasm for reading! Therefore, the author, I advise you to feed the rats with juice and not force us to repeatedly push for updates. Also, if your efficiency improves, I will consider giving you a five-star next time! Finally, I would like to recommend this book. Readers who like rules and weird stories should come here! The main storyline is great! The plot of Gu Yi's second game is really touching, highly recommended!

It's been seven hours, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Update soon [note]

The book feels okay, but it feels like the author forced the rules into a game with weird rules ㄟ( ▔, ▔ )ㄏ

I have been chasing this book for a long time. The author said that when the book was ready to be finished, I was actually in a low mood. However, I hope that the author will still focus on his studies and write when he has nothing to do. He only needs to publish two or three chapters a week, so I will give you a 5-star review here~ Love you˚*̥(**⁰͈꒨⁰͈)*̥

Come on, author, your writing is very good. There is another type of game production. As long as you don't write that kind of cerebral palsy plot, it will definitely become a hit.

The author can add more rules-based weird stories in the future, such as secondary colleges or resting middle schools.

It's very interesting, but some people's comments affected my overall impression of the book.

It's really good to read. I'm used to the rules of the national games, so this kind of game-like weird story is quite refreshing. The one about the zoo is really well written. The red star guides the direction. Everyone is, everyone can be. I hope the author can stick to it. I will always support the author. [Sending my heart]

I felt weird after watching it for a long time. The rules of the game are not clear. Who knows? The rules are not very clear. (Maybe I am stupid and didn't remember it.) Mom's note is better, at least it is easy to understand for a single person, but the zoo is really confusing. (Maybe I am sb) It's understandable that the protagonist has a golden finger and then crazily mocks other similar game production novels, but isn't it a bit too much? Souls games are difficult, and it's understandable that players love and hate them. But for games with weird rules, it's strange that players can still love and hate them after being mentally contaminated. Shouldn't normal people avoid them? For me, if I personally experienced the Rules Monster game, my first reaction would be that I hope there won't be a next time. If I played the Rules Monster game, I would play it once or clear the game once, and then I would put it in the library and get ashes, or even get scared and directly refund the money. Is that world full of bt? (No malicious intent) Another point is that the so-called VR or the somatosensory method used in the article can really simulate mental pollution so realistically? I haven't read much, so I'm going to give it four stars. I hope the author has an outline, and I'll wait until I see the updates before commenting. The previous review was about 40 pieces. Now that I have finished reading Zoo, I feel great. I have to say that the author is really not suitable for writing about multiple people. Gu Yi's writing about completing the level by himself is quite good. I suggest the author to write like this in the future. Low-end players will play the game to highlight the game, and high-end players (similar to Gu Yi) will make a clearance video or complete the level alone to focus on the description. There is less of a multi-player joint playthrough. I feel that the author is not suitable for writing about multiple people. It may be that I am stupid and not suitable for watching multiple people [face covering] After reading Chapter 139, I really can't stand it anymore. The introduction of this book is very interesting. It would be good if the author just followed the rules and weird talk in the introduction to make a game. But the problem is that the author wants to express too many of his own ideas. In the end, the imagination is good but the writing is too weak. Furthermore, I won't say how good the game has been since I just sat around and made changes to it, but it's really hard to describe the changes, especially for Dead by Daylight (maybe not, I'm not sure, but it's probably it). The map has been changed, and the two sides of the game have also changed, making it completely different. It's understandable what the author wants to express, but there's really no need to say it in a novel about making a game like this. I really can't stand it anymore, so I'll leave it at that. Maybe I'll come back and watch it again when it's finished.

Looks good, cheers for the author [Like]

Come on, author, I believe in you

Why did I have to open this novel so late at night?

My brain has returned to 50%, it hurts, it hurts too much

I've read the first twenty-five chapters and finished reading Mom's note. The cognition the author is talking about should be the state of the soul before its defenses are broken. It's a very exciting novel.

I think it's quite good. At least so far, I rarely see novels of this type. Although the plot is lacking and the emotions are a bit too much, I like novels of this kind of subject very much. I only found this one that suits my taste. I hope the author will update it faster and stop talking about big principles and just talk about the general content. Otherwise, it will seem like the number of words is too low. Can you write as little as possible about emotional scenes? Anyway, that's it, it's still pretty good.

One less star⭐I'm afraid you'll be proud [laughing evilly]

Give it a little five stars

TM scared me. I watched it at night. I was so scared that my phone was almost out of battery and I didn't dare to charge it.

Has the author considered writing a game related to Mandela's record?

A good book, it cured my bad habit of not closing the curtains at night [crying]

It's okay, but the description of the frightened plot is not very good. There are too many descriptions of the cold sweat and fear when listening to the book. I remember that the more frightened and excited the more excited I was [laughter]

It's beautiful. It's very beautiful. In fact, when I saw the white lions and the elephant area in the zoo, I was a little touched. Oh, it's so fragile. I really was.

I like it, I like it, I'm really surprised [admiration] Also, the author greatly posted [blowing kisses]

Should the author set up a foundation? [Laughs crookedly]

Author, I would like to know if the plot of Gu Yihe in your novel is related to those two ghost story novels?

This book is a hundred times better than other books of the same type. The other books were basically forced to burst into tears, which made me very puzzled and made me feel as if I was going to hang myself along with them.