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I finished reading it in one go. The overall feeling is pretty good. The protagonist is a bit funny. The only drawback is that the plot develops too fast and the plot is not tight enough. I support it with five stars [like]

This is my first time writing a book. I hope you all like it.

If you guessed it correctly, the author wanted to create a martial arts-like character in a fantasy world. A protagonist who has both a sword and a moral character in his heart will make readers more heartbroken. However, according to the taste of Tomato readers, the author had better divide the article into more paragraphs to make it more popular.

The writing is not bad. I would like to give the author two suggestions: divide the paragraph into one point because it is too long, and use double quotation marks when speaking. [Laughs] Keep up the good work! ! !

After reading several chapters, I feel that this book is different from other fairy novels. It has no system and the protagonist is not invincible. It reminds me of the traditional fantasy novels in the past. However, this kind of book is not popular on Tomato. I hope the author can add more funny elements so that it will become more popular. The update speed should be faster. This is not enough. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes [Like] [Like]

I really like [Salute] The beginning is not good enough, but the rest of the writing is okay

The author does have some ideas. It may be my problem. I feel that the plot develops a bit too fast for the elderly to keep up. It would be better if it could be slower.

Later the world view became more and more interesting, and the protagonist became more humorous [Like]

Traditional fantasy, the plot is well interspersed, the plot and characters are carefully portrayed, it is beautiful to watch

Yes, yes, the content is interesting and can attract people to read. The plot has ups and downs and is worth recommending.

Not bad, very attractive! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The plot is very interesting, the writing is fluent, and the structure is complete. It is a good fairy tale fantasy novel. I look forward to subsequent updates, so keep up the good work!

This is my first time reading a fantasy work. It's quite good. The author's writing style is very good and very interesting. I like it very much!

I like this book very much. Every character written by the author is vivid and full of life. I support it with five stars. Very interesting [like][like][like][like][like]

A good book with smooth writing and vivid and interesting plot. I like it😍

The author's structure is clear and the world view is very complete. It is very clear at first glance. The plot is very interesting. I recommend five-star praise [like]

I also want the Sword of Protection. This article is well-conceived and the plot is smooth. At first glance, it looks very attentive. Good-looking and good-looking. The divine sword comes out and miracles appear. Keep going. Come on.

It's well written, please support it!

A traditional fantasy work with many new ideas. The storyline is exciting and the characters are vividly portrayed.

The mind is very big, the writing is fluent, the structure is complete, the logic is rigorous, and the refreshing points are dense. It is really a rare good book, highly recommended [top post]

I think Chen Changle has a bit of wit and humor, Mo Yu is thoughtful, and Li Xiaoran is just a pure and reckless person [face covering] [face covering]

Five-star recommendation. Although the review said that the plot is fast, I think it is okay. Maybe I need to work on the emphasis. Please update it quickly [laughing]

The article is well written, the writing is very good, and the content is exciting.

The writing is delicate and the characters have distinct personalities. The plot is novel, but there is too little. I hope it will be updated soon [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Fantasy continent, the setting is good. The protagonist is humorous, I have read a few chapters, I have to go to work, I will read it in the evening.

The author's writing is good, the plot is good, full of twists and turns, and imaginative