[This is my first time writing a book. It's really bad, but I like it very much.
We will meet many people in our lives, and first love may not be the person we end up with. As long as you understand yourself and are willing to wait, that person will eventually appear.
.......
Su Beizhai held Yan Luo's cheek with one hand. The two were so close that they could feel each other's breathing. Slowly, their foreheads touched each other: "Yan Luo, I've been waiting for you."
After a long time, Yan Luo responded: "Su Beizhai, thank you for waiting for me. It was you who made me see the true nature of love."
Reader comments
I first read another novel by the author, and then this one with a lower rating. The writing was equally great, but the story was a little simpler and the ending was a little rushed, but it was still my favorite type. The whole story was sweet and not sadistic. Because real life has become a mess, and even the journey has been bumpy. In my leisure time, I can comfort myself by watching some sweet and warm entertainment. I also recall my young self fifty years ago, and my wife who has been away from me for ten years and who has devoted herself to me and my family. I hope the author will not change this writing style and bring us happiness and contentment forever. Thanks! Love you!
It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, I'm reading the author's 2nd story, and I'm going to read the third story. The author's views are very upright. This may be because this is the first novel, and the plot would be better if it were fuller. I look forward to better works.
This book is worth 5 points. I really like one point. Yan Luo is luckier than Qiao Jingjing because... Did Su Beizhai really lead her to cheat? Mathematics is too difficult for our poor Jingjing...😂 In exchange for Teacher Yu, I should teach you... Su Shen wrote the answer directly, which reminded me that Lao He also wrote the calculus answer for Mo Sheng... It all depends on my husband... It is really not easy to have someone who keeps reaching out to lead you forward.
[Love] [Love] [Love] We will meet many people in our lives. First love is not necessarily the person we end up with. As long as you understand yourself and are willing to wait, that person will eventually appear. [Thinking] I feel like I haven't finished writing the extras yet. Let's get married. I'm looking forward to a happy life after marriage. [Like][Like][Like]
They all say it's too short and the ending comes too quickly, and I feel the same way, [laughs][laughs]
I still have more to say, I just feel that their relationship could be sweeter, but the sweetness ended just after it started [laughing and crying], it's not enough... The writing is really good
Like, I think liking is a process, and the author writes about the process very well! It's not like it's going to change as soon as it starts! Warm and penetrating!
A very nice article, no misunderstanding!
It was well written, and I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. Although the novel is a bit short, I felt that it was just right. The male protagonist's personal monologue at the end was also very good, and it can completely explain the process of how he fell in love with the female protagonist!
The writing is delicate and the emotions are smooth. It is a good book worth reading.
It's very interesting. It would be even better if there were some extra stories about the male protagonist, female protagonist and their friends. I'm looking forward to the author's new works.
It looks good, but it's not good enough. It's too short. I also want to read the stories of the other two couples [eating melon]
Very nice and deep
And no, other novels
Want to read Luo Wenting's story
The little freshness feels great [love]
Finally got what I wanted! Those who have entered your heart, please don't give up easily. I really like this kind of evenly matched love.
Wonderful! Nice! Like!
The pace is bright and does not drag out!
A very good short article
It ended a bit quickly [laughs]
People who read it felt very happy, but the story ended too hastily.
The author's rating is low because the writing is too short.
It's great to watch. The male protagonist is super warm and devoted to the female protagonist. Don't miss it. The only regret is that I didn't see the ending of the male and female protagonists getting married and having children and the female protagonist's best friends! Five-star praise
It looks good and looks good. Come on⛽️
It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit too fast
I think it looks good [smile]
Very exciting, right person at the right time
Overall it's good, but I feel like the sweetness after having two people missing is still unfulfilled!
It's really good to read [Flowing Kiss] After reading the author's first novel, I thought it was very good. Then I clicked on the author's avatar and then read this novel [Eating Melon], which is still as good-looking as ever👍It is a highly recommended novel [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
I am looking forward to the author's next novel [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]
Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! Really like it! People who love you will always think about you!
I first read another novel by the author, and then this one with a lower rating. The writing was equally great, but the story was a little simpler and the ending was a little rushed, but it was still my favorite type. The whole story was sweet and not sadistic. Because real life has become a mess, and even the journey has been bumpy. In my leisure time, I can comfort myself by watching some sweet and warm entertainment. I also recall my young self fifty years ago, and my wife who has been away from me for ten years and who has devoted herself to me and my family. I hope the author will not change this writing style and bring us happiness and contentment forever. Thanks! Love you!
It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, I'm reading the author's 2nd story, and I'm going to read the third story. The author's views are very upright. This may be because this is the first novel, and the plot would be better if it were fuller. I look forward to better works.
This book is worth 5 points. I really like one point. Yan Luo is luckier than Qiao Jingjing because... Did Su Beizhai really lead her to cheat? Mathematics is too difficult for our poor Jingjing...😂 In exchange for Teacher Yu, I should teach you... Su Shen wrote the answer directly, which reminded me that Lao He also wrote the calculus answer for Mo Sheng... It all depends on my husband... It is really not easy to have someone who keeps reaching out to lead you forward.
[Love] [Love] [Love] We will meet many people in our lives. First love is not necessarily the person we end up with. As long as you understand yourself and are willing to wait, that person will eventually appear. [Thinking] I feel like I haven't finished writing the extras yet. Let's get married. I'm looking forward to a happy life after marriage. [Like][Like][Like]
They all say it's too short and the ending comes too quickly, and I feel the same way, [laughs][laughs]
I still have more to say, I just feel that their relationship could be sweeter, but the sweetness ended just after it started [laughing and crying], it's not enough... The writing is really good
Like, I think liking is a process, and the author writes about the process very well! It's not like it's going to change as soon as it starts! Warm and penetrating!
A very nice article, no misunderstanding!
It was well written, and I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. Although the novel is a bit short, I felt that it was just right. The male protagonist's personal monologue at the end was also very good, and it can completely explain the process of how he fell in love with the female protagonist!
The writing is delicate and the emotions are smooth. It is a good book worth reading.
It's very interesting. It would be even better if there were some extra stories about the male protagonist, female protagonist and their friends. I'm looking forward to the author's new works.
It looks good, but it's not good enough. It's too short. I also want to read the stories of the other two couples [eating melon]
Very nice and deep And no, other novels
Want to read Luo Wenting's story
The little freshness feels great [love]
Finally got what I wanted! Those who have entered your heart, please don't give up easily. I really like this kind of evenly matched love.
Wonderful! Nice! Like!
The pace is bright and does not drag out!
A very good short article
It ended a bit quickly [laughs]
People who read it felt very happy, but the story ended too hastily.
The author's rating is low because the writing is too short.
It's great to watch. The male protagonist is super warm and devoted to the female protagonist. Don't miss it. The only regret is that I didn't see the ending of the male and female protagonists getting married and having children and the female protagonist's best friends! Five-star praise
It looks good and looks good. Come on⛽️
It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit too fast
I think it looks good [smile]
Very exciting, right person at the right time
Overall it's good, but I feel like the sweetness after having two people missing is still unfulfilled!
It's really good to read [Flowing Kiss] After reading the author's first novel, I thought it was very good. Then I clicked on the author's avatar and then read this novel [Eating Melon], which is still as good-looking as ever👍It is a highly recommended novel [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] I am looking forward to the author's next novel [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]
Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! Really like it! People who love you will always think about you!