Troll Lord, Wife Succubus

So far, so well written. Whether it is the emotional line, the plot line, or the description of the war, the steps are not very big, and it can be seen that the writing is very careful. A very good book [like]

System upgrade Territory writing, at first the author always thought about mixing up the word count, but after getting through the early stage, you will find that this is a treasure text, it is very beautiful, but it is not enough to read. If you like territorial writing, I highly recommend it!

Finally, there is a book that won't accept girls without grinding. Five-star praise [like]

Very beautiful, highly recommended by old bookworms! After becoming a troll, he has completely adapted to this race. Instead of turning into other species like some other novels, he still finds ways to help humans who are enemies of each other.

I feel like I've been following this novel for more than a year. It's been quite a long time anyway. There are many works that I like in Tomato that were finished halfway through. I hope I can keep writing this novel [heartfelt]. This book is considered original because I have never seen any of these routines. I look forward to each update because there are some surprises for the protagonist. The golden fingers are quite reasonable, and the character creation is also quite rich. In my opinion, each character's personality is really comfortable to watch. Although it looks relatively bland and the protagonist is not very strong, it is still a half-hearted novel, haha. . .

Not bad. I like the subject matter very much and the writing is quite good.

A clear view of the world. They are all very intelligent, the villains and the good guys are all very intelligent, there is no brainless cannon fodder. The character settings and personalities are quite detailed, so it's not bad. Overall, it's pretty good.

It's very beautiful, come on, the description of the group portraits is pretty good, I'm very optimistic about the content, I must finish it well, it's a rare good book, I'll see what happens later, it's still a little short of becoming a god, come on I think the author can find an opportunity to change the title of the book. I have benefited many people, but they were turned away by this name [cover face][cover face][cover face] Please, don't be a eunuch, don't be a mess, please [cry][cry][cry]

I think it's okay. The subject matter is outstanding, but it's a bit draggy. I'm either at war or on the way to war. There are countless enemies, including 10,000 of my own tribe and 200,000 of my opponents. The more I read, the more I can't stand it. I don't have any other ill intentions. I just think a good novel is rare. The more you watch, the more exciting it becomes. There is nothing to say about the plot, especially the skeleton and the beast king are too dramatic. The deputy leader is knowledgeable, the leader is unfathomable, the cold Seven Kills, and there are many plastic characters. A good novel is so rare, highly recommended! The author will update as soon as possible! ! ! It's best to update five times a day [full] [full] [full] If one book is not enough, write another one I hope the author will write another one [making a face]

Five-star reminder. Don't be lazy, don't be lazy, don't be lazy. Say important things three times! [Cool][cool]

Except for the fact that time travel is not introduced at the beginning (maybe I didn't read it carefully) and I was a little confused by the ashes thing, the rest of the story is pretty good. The writing is very smooth and there is nothing wrong with it except that the panel is a bit long.

I have read a few chapters and made a brief comment. This book does not rely too much on things similar to the system (I mean that most of the strength is improved by relying on system rewards. If I insist on it, you are right). It is very fluent and highly recommended. Is it possible that the author can change the protagonist (troll) to be more in line with human aesthetics and not require too much?

This book is really beautiful, the subject matter is very good, the more I read it in the end, the more I enjoyed it [like] [like] [like] [like] and it is updated frequently every day, but it is still not enough to read [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] The subject matter is novel and unique, and the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes. It's completely unreadable. I hope the author will speed up the update and warmly recommend this book.

I like the battle between the two kings very much, but it changed a bit later on. I hope the author can find himself again. As for the elf, the author remembers to make up for it, otherwise the copy will be a bit lame. The Bone King should wake up and write about the group leader's surroundings appropriately. You can also make a book with the king of spades or develop a relationship with the little queen novice. But I still want to see the description of the elf most, so that the elf can be developed and then drawn into the group. In short, thousands of words can be combined into one sentence. This is one of the few books I love to read. I hope the author will not cut off the end of the book. If the author can come to me to discuss the next book after finishing this one, I will try my best to make a cameo in this one [blowing kiss]

This is the fourth novel that has really touched me in the eight years I have been reading online novels. In this novel, a strange Western World of Warcraft is depicted, with thousands of races and prosperity. So far, it has included elements that I like: tribes, brotherhood, beast control, war... I have to say that so far, the novel has a wonderful and reasonable plot, and vivid characters. It is a masterpiece! ! But I still want to say that the author must work hard and don't let the book end unfinished! ! ! Don't want to say anything

Even the protagonist's initial world depicts to me an extremely barbaric and violent tribal civilization, and moralists are not allowed to enter. It's not toxic yet, the plot is compact, the protagonist's strength improves quickly but isn't outrageous, and it's still quite enjoyable so far. (It is a harem, but there are not many emotional lines, farming style)

This is the best thing I've seen in another world. The short one is also very cute

It's pretty good to watch. There are some shortcomings in the early stage of strength improvement. Only the protagonist used other worlds to invade. However, as the strength increases, the territory expansion becomes more and more beautiful. Later, when I join the Knife Group, I have a trustworthy team to play dungeon development and expand the territory. Everyone in the team has their own value. It is not that they are all sluggish, but they are all working hard to grow.

This novel is highly readable, has many and deep foreshadowings, a stable plot, and a great world view. Some people will make random comments without reading a few chapters. I have been following this novel for almost two years. I started reading the second volume in my second year of junior high school and am now in my first year of high school. I have always thought this novel is readable and very suitable for my taste. It can be said that it has been on my bookshelf for the longest time. Wondering how long ago this book was published? I took a look at it and it's been more than 500 days since I added this to my bookshelf.

Please update more. This kind of book is very good. It's a pity that it's on Tomato. The theme and detailed outline are well written. Come on, the theme of hegemony will never go out of style. Does the author have any other books that you would like to read?

Come on! ! ! (It's pretty good-looking, although sometimes I'm a little speechless, but it can only be considered a small flaw, and it's pretty good compared to others)

This novel is more focused on territorial development, with a slow pace and less combat plot descriptions. However, I personally like the characterization and description of the characters in this novel. It is very delicate. The author is very careful to shape each character, which makes people feel that these characters are fresh, vivid, and each has its own style. The descriptions of some things are also very subtle, but not too subtle. The world framework is a bit vague, and the levels are also slightly vague. The cultivation of each system is relatively simple, and there are so many races that all have unified cultivation methods. I feel that the plot is quite acceptable, but it is rather dry and feels a bit like an American drama. Some parts look boring and long, so skip it. If you look at it later, the plot will not match up, so don't skip it. It looks too dry. Overall, it doesn't affect it. It's pretty good in Tomato. There aren't many books that need to be read with your brain. The above are all personal and insignificant opinions. Please don't comment if you don't like them🌚🌚🌚

This book about the new world➕multiple fields➕populations➕big world view, tribe view and alliance view is really enjoyable, especially the protagonist is promoted from low to high, the characters he knows are getting more and more familiar, and the domain modules are getting bigger and bigger. It really makes people look forward to the next plot. The only thing I want to complain about is that the author should give me an update soon [laughs crookedly], it's been a few minutes, why haven't I received the update notification yet! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Finally won the Easter match. Hurry up and publicize it and call back old book friends.

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. Instead of having Noxian with an outer ring and Noxian guillotine, this wave of m4 If you shoot six times, you will die. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's use of flowers. The 108 monkeys in Guoshan said, "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your brother Liang", showing Zhuge Liang's three-stick attack on the monkey. Indignant. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the characters are well described. Bit!

It looks good, but there are some detailed problems: 1. The resource system is not perfect, and the number of resources obtained by the protagonist is not clear every time. As a result, when using resources in exchange for combat power, the protagonist cannot immediately see the side of the protagonist who needs to be careful. (My understanding is that you need to be careful in the early stage) 2. The currency system is not perfect, and the number of magic crystals of different levels equivalent to other magic crystals is not clear enough, resulting in a slight difference in the points. 3. The appearance of the Ashes platform is too sudden, and it appears without much foreshadowing. I hope the author can reflect the protagonist's exploration process, that is, show the resources that the protagonist wants to cash in in the early stage. Otherwise, the protagonist's redemption goal or growth curve will be unclear, and the feeling will be a little less satisfying. 4. The Ashes Treasure Chest has a low sense of existence. When I first read it, I thought it was a novel about killing monsters and opening chests. However, the author devoted a lot of space in the early stage to improving the protagonist's strength for platform redemption, ignoring the role of the treasure chest. Then let's talk about the advantages: 1. The writing is good and fluent, and the plot is relatively reasonable (one of the few Tomatoes that kept me watching) 2. The protagonist upgrades at a reasonable speed, never becomes invincible, and does not drag on. 3. Although the author's writing of Goldfinger is poor, the battle plot is well written, which satisfied my sense of satisfaction. 4. The excessive plot is okay (except for the part that leads to the succubus), which makes people feel comfortable to watch. A little humble opinion, just for reference, don't comment if you don't like it. Finally, I wish the author good luck every year and good luck every year!

I have read this book twice and it is very good and I have high expectations. I hope that the author will not finish the work no matter when he is under pressure or confused. It may take a long time to complete it. I will silently follow up on it when I am in a different place. Come on, author. I firmly believe that this novel is far more than demigods. There are infinite ideas beyond demigods. The chapters are far more than 1000➕. The story of Miyan Shakes is far from over.

The plot is organized and relatively good. This is one of the few high-quality Western fantasy novels I have seen. The author's writing skills are above average, and there are not many toxic points in dealing with interpersonal relationships. For novices, he is not relatively hardcore. He may only have basic concepts such as trolls, which may need to be understood through translated materials, but it does not affect reading! ! ! ! Driver, hurry in! ! !

It's a very good book. The plot, details, and writing are all very good. It's not toxic, and the plot is not blunt. It's a rare question in Tomato. I give it five stars.

A book about a character whose family's influence continues to expand and how to move forward. Although some of the plots are rather draggy, it doesn't stop me from liking it. I like this type of book very much. It gives people a bright feeling. There is no trace of routine. The writing style is relaxed and not depressing. I feel good about it so far. Every story is exciting, every character is charming, and everyone has their own personality! A very special book, the author's imagination is wild, the plot is novel and attractive, and the sense of substitution is very strong. He is very good at depicting various scenes, and he especially has a very unique way of depicting those scenes. I have fallen in love with his writing style since his first book, and I will definitely read this book.

It's the first time I've seen this kind of competition. It's very good. It's just that it was a little rough in the early stage. I clicked on personal information every now and then. There were few improvements later. Overall, it's still very good. I highly recommend [like this post] [please update]