[Single female protagonist + sweet article + dog food + male protagonist's occupation: author + female protagonist's occupation: painter + two-way running + pure love]
Bai Shi, who was about to leave college life, decided to become a class assistant in his senior year. While working as a class assistant, he met the new student Yu Youwei. The author of the class assistant, Yu Youwei's trumpet, discovered that the world suddenly became very small, and when Bai Shi found out that he had fallen into Yu Youwei's trap.
It's a new work by a newcomer. It's my first time writing a love story. The setting won't be outstanding because I want to write it more purely. I hope you can give me some suggestions.
Reader comments
Let me give myself a five-star review. After all, I have always been so shameless, hahahahaha. Thank you to everyone who reads my book. This book is not very well written. You are welcome to give me your opinions. I will log in to the Writer Assistant from time to time to check. I will try to read every comment. Even if there is no reply, I will like it. Of course, I will think carefully about the comments and learn experience for the next book. My pen is limited, and I am very grateful to everyone who has the patience to read it. I am really grateful. The pace of this book in the later stage is too serious due to my personal emotions, and many of the things I want to express are a bit messy. In addition, my shortcomings are obvious, so the impression may not be good enough. I am trying to protect everyone from lightning. I sincerely thank everyone who reads my book. It was originally just for love, but I didn't expect so many people to read it.
Come on, author, don't give up. The book is really good. The characters are full of emotions, delicate and the writing is smooth. You must continue.
In my mind, apart from cars, I also have welding, so I really can't rate this book as good. The overall feeling is very science fiction, but also very realistic.
Let me give myself a five-star review. After all, I have always been so shameless, hahahahaha. Thank you to everyone who reads my book. This book is not very well written. You are welcome to give me your opinions. I will log in to the Writer Assistant from time to time to check. I will try to read every comment. Even if there is no reply, I will like it. Of course, I will think carefully about the comments and learn experience for the next book. My pen is limited, and I am very grateful to everyone who has the patience to read it. I am really grateful. The pace of this book in the later stage is too serious due to my personal emotions, and many of the things I want to express are a bit messy. In addition, my shortcomings are obvious, so the impression may not be good enough. I am trying to protect everyone from lightning. I sincerely thank everyone who reads my book. It was originally just for love, but I didn't expect so many people to read it.
Come on, author, don't give up. The book is really good. The characters are full of emotions, delicate and the writing is smooth. You must continue.
In my mind, apart from cars, I also have welding, so I really can't rate this book as good. The overall feeling is very science fiction, but also very realistic.
Very good, great author~