Sentian

Very nice looking so far. I would like to advise the author not to end it early just because the rating is low. If you want to make money, you have to keep writing millions of words, otherwise you will never become a great master.

This book is innovative in terms of plot. Compared with other books, it is less clichéd. For example, according to the clichés of other novels, the second uncle's death is certain. The plot design is also very reasonable. When he and his second uncle picked up the missing elixir, and when they were ostracized by the second-generation master, they just ran away. It was reasonable and reasonable, and he did not treat others as fools. The other characters' IQs are online. When they see that the Foundation Establishment Pills are not fighting directly, but they are discussing it. After all, everyone is about the same strength. You don't know who will die in the fight. There are many details. Of course, the shortcomings are also obvious. Without the use of routines, the plot will appear dull. I recommend the author to refer to the novel "Eternal Life and Eternal Life" to enlarge the world view and have something to write about everywhere you go.

I hope the protagonist and his second uncle can make it to the end. This world needs some warmth, there are backstabbing everywhere,

New book, new beginning, thank you all for your support Please give me a five-star rating, thank you all

It's a good book. I just read the reviews and I'm really convinced. Some people say that they threw away their second uncle. I just want to ask you, if you were in time travel, would you throw away your second uncle? [Vomit]

I read the reviews and thought it was okay, then read the book. I just read the first chapter and felt the need to give the author a heads up. Kerosene is a product of the industrial age and is extracted from petroleum. I personally feel that kerosene lamps are not suitable for the industrial product of immortality novels. It should be written about rapeseed oil lamps. In the past, the lamp oil used for lighting was rapeseed oil. Although vegetable oil lamps are not as bright as kerosene lamps.

How should I put it, I personally feel pretty good. It took me about half a day to watch it from the beginning. To make a long story short, it is still the early fighting scenes where the protagonist spends very little time practicing and breeding. As a mortal cultivating immortality type novel, his own cultivation level is a bit worse, but the beginning is better than other protagonists. The character is better, and the more creative thing is that he has a second uncle. The protagonist avoids some troubles on the road to growth. The role of the golden finger is not too big at the moment. It is probably just the nourishment value in exchange for some spiritual stones. Apart from some minor flaws and lack of details, overall it is still worth reading when you are in a book shortage. I hope to write a paragraph in which the protagonist's second uncle breaks through the foundation building, and then uses the treasure map to find a lot of resources with the protagonist, and then retreats to let the protagonist break through to the basic stage, start to go to other continents, and control the rhythm as now, not too fast, not too slow. I personally like puppets. If the author writes this paragraph, I hope you can make the protagonist master the puppet technique. Come on, author, give me full stars

The storyline is smooth and not cliche. Encourage, come on! You can have time and space without dependence. Maintain style and don't listen to slander. Mortal survival.

I haven't seen the usefulness of this golden finger after reading Chapter 30. I just mentioned it in the previous chapters and haven't used it [face covering]

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but it seems that the author said there is no heroine. Personally, I prefer a single heroine. Well, I have always had a question. We don't understand those books. There is no heroine. They have their reasons for not having a heroine. I am not willing to give the price, but this is a righteous fairy tale. This is not an apocalypse or a demon cultivator. At first I thought this book was good. I made a decision and stayed up all night to read it. Of course I also stayed up all night, but I felt that one cannot be a fool or a eunuch. I had no choice but to make a bad decision and give a bad review. Since the author said there is no heroine, I couldn't read it any more. It would be rude to read it any more.

A novel has a tone, and the tone of this novel is to cultivate immortality in a down-to-earth, step-by-step manner. It may not suit the taste of some readers who like fake things, but it feels more realistic. Cultivation of immortality is inherently difficult for mortals, due to lack of resources and dangerous paths. Just like good tea, it should be brewed carefully and tasted slowly. One less star is given because I feel that some parts are too repetitive and a little wordy.

The author should do more spell fights and see how other novels depict spells and fights. Then the world view should be larger. He can write some chapters about the invasion of the demon world, and then use the golden finger to rise up and counterattack the demon world, and finally become the strongest person in the human world and ascend to the spiritual world. The most important thing is to write some people to death, but the value of death can make Pig's Foot understand some truth. It is best for Pig's Foot to become a rogue cultivator in the end, because readers like the rise of grassroots. It is better to be a rogue cultivator, because you have to travel everywhere, so there will be a lot of things to write about in terms of plot, which will not be boring. Taste, I would also like to mention that when Yuanying breaks through and becomes a god, he should add some chapters about his experience in the mortal world, and finally achieve enlightenment and soar. Anyway, the author just wants to fantasize about the sky and the sky, so he should refer to well-known online novels for the wonderful plot and world view. Finally, I like this novel very much, cheers for the author [blowing kiss]

Come on, wash it well, it looks good now

This book is really, really good. The three views are very correct. Don't over exaggerate the role of gold fingers. But Goldfinger is not without its faults. There is room to grow. Each supporting character has his or her own unique magic weapon. And experience. It's not like those cool novels that kill the enemy with one blow, because everyone has the means to save their lives, and the protagonist also has emotional ties, unlike the protagonists in other novels who are possessed by a lone star or a teddy. There are companions on the journey of cultivation. In terms of family ties, I have a second uncle. The key is that the content is rich. Although it is flat, it is also magnificent. And it also works very well for gold fingers. Just plays a supporting role. Not like other novels. The protagonist is like a puppet manipulated by Goldfinger. Later on, the protagonist completely becomes a nanny. As long as there is danger, the protagonist is a thug, a thug who has nothing to gain. As long as there are resources, the protagonist will send his two younger brothers out, and return to normal. Those friends who treat the protagonist as a thug have become big friends. The protagonist's younger brother is still jumping around in the early stage, and he is just a boy who wants to spread wealth.

The new book is very good, the plot is very compact, the more I read it, the more I like it

This book looks good. It's very comfortable to read. At least I have a relative by my side.

It's very interesting. The protagonist is not mindlessly shouting whether he should bow his head or not.

It's quite good. The male protagonist doesn't talk about pornographically casually, nor does he make up some dirty stuff like other male videos. And although the male protagonist has a golden finger, overall he just helps the male protagonist make money, so it's not a story about Long Aotian's awesome male protagonist. It's pretty good. If you like to watch fast-paced movies and have a lot of golden fingers, you don't mind reading this. This is a relatively normal novel. There is no awesome golden finger, no cultivation speed, and no good luck and resources like the beloved of heaven.

To be honest, it is indeed very beautiful. Although it is a bit slow, it is very eye-catching. I will post a few pictures quickly.

Five-star support, I hope to see Wang Baoling get married and have children in my lifetime, and build up my own strength. [Make faces]

This book is good. Compared with other invincible novels, this kind of steady is more enjoyable to read. It is in line with my imagination. It is mediocre but smart. You have to be stubborn. Otherwise, it would be too fake to have the halo of the protagonist every day. I hope the author will not change this style in the future.

It's quite good-looking. It's not the kind of traditional black man who can cultivate immortality, but a black man who can cultivate immortality with a little bit of worldliness. The golden finger is not too wide, but it is enough. The plot is also quite loose, without any urgency of being hunted all the time. That is! Don't add a heroine, and don't have an affair with any female character. Many authors don't know how to write. Once they write these protagonists, they will instantly become lowb. The most important thing for the protagonist in the novel is not to lose the B-square! So far so good

It's a rare novel worth reading that has a good grasp of the rhythm, and I can't finish a chapter in fast forward.

This novel ranks in the middle among the novels I have read. Fellow Taoists, you can feel free to use it.

Good, good, good, five stars, five stars, five stars, five stars In Chapter 1019, I found out that there is a female protagonist. I don't really like having a female protagonist, so I left first. I would like to remind the readers behind me that if you don't like it, don't enter.

Is there a female protagonist? Please remind me if there is any

Simple, logical, cultivating immortals, and in line with common sense. Instead of being alone at every turn, and sweeping away thousands of armies at every turn, it is more real~ That is, the dialogue description is a bit cumbersome, and it will be much simpler if you delete the description of who and so said~ It will be much better if you delete the word "so and so said" and that "dao" [face covering]

I think it's quite interesting. The relationship between the protagonist and his second uncle is very touching. I've read so many novels for the first time to write such a supporting character vividly. I've read so many novels all about how the protagonist is so awesome and can become a god by himself. I feel like it's monotonous after reading too many novels. This kind of description of the supporting characters is very eye-catching.

Wonderful, although it starts with Wulinggen, it is different from other novels. The previous protagonist Su Yun, the second generation immortal, has a very good attitude. There is no need to make enemies with people with backing. The beginnings of other novels are as miserable as they are written, with all kinds of slaps in the face and all kinds of internal strife.

I read it from beginning to end in one go. It is very good. The characters have distinct personalities. Although the title of the book is slightly different from the content, it is really about farming. The pace of the novel is neither too fast nor too slow. It is just right. From the Qi training period to the ascension to the spiritual world, it is a very good novel. I highly recommend it [sending my heart]. I hope the author will work hard!