The Disaster Dragon King of Nazarick

Author, don't be angry, don't get angry because of those guys. In my personal opinion, both the character restoration and the writing style are above what I saw on Tomato. Every book is the author's own child. The author must keep writing!

In terms of plot and prop details, I think these are really rare details in the current Bone King novels. The first person to be able to write so many chapters of the plot of the first few episodes of the first season is that except for the emotional relationship issues, which are a bit bloody, the rest is really good. I will work hard to update. Looking at your progress, I think there is a chance to break 500 chapters in the Holy Kingdom chapter! I hope I won't be eunuched halfway through. =(

Tomato is one of the more prominent novels among the Bone King fanfics, but of course it has some shortcomings - the author is too short, I hope the author will update it more, and Genshin Impact will play less and update more. Oh, by the way, I wish you good luck in drawing cards! ! [Sinister smile]

It can only be said that it is a pity. For me who has only watched the series, it is undoubtedly a shock. Not only the description of many details, but also the quality of the plot can be said to be excellent. When I saw the ending, I was left with a heart full of emptiness and sadness. The future that the author described with a few strokes is, in my opinion, very worth looking forward to. Of course, the experience described by the author is undoubtedly unfair and unreasonable. Blindly restoring high standards is shameless and excessive. After all, no one is perfect, so why do those mindless essays have high scores? After all, it is not because of its "brainless" nature that has been accepted by everyone, but logical and "brainful" articles are more likely to be attacked due to loopholes. Therefore, the author's withdrawal may be correct, but for those of us who do not have high requirements, it is a disaster, a tragedy, and an end. For me, sadness is the main theme in my heart after reading it. In any case, I give the author a big thumbs up. It is worth the current score, and even higher. Water is not the wetness that covers the whole body on rainy days, but the mist in the forest in the early morning. Without it, how can we see reality from hypocritical novels?

I am a fan of Bone King and have read many Bone King fanfics. This book is more detailed than other fanfics. Personally, I like the section before time travel the most. The two-sided description of human nature in the following is also close to the original text. Although the plot has been changed a lot, it is much better than other fanfics in which the protagonist's combat power is overwhelming and the guardian's combat power is at the bottom, and he fights all the real dragon kings alone! The content is great, but the plot is slow. The disadvantage is that updates are too slow. The author likes to cheat.

This is the best Bone King fanfic in my opinion. In fact, when I read the original Bone King, I always felt that Bone King really regretted being a "companion". Although the NPCs are activated and weakened in this aspect. The biggest feature of this book is that in addition to the time traveler and Bone King, Hei Luo Hei Luo also traveled through time together. It feels like the friendship in the original work has been completed. In the early days, I was a bit gay, but each of them had their own favorite girls, so both men and women were attracted to each other. But I also really feel that even if there is a girl I like, it will not affect the relationship between the three protagonists and the iron triangle! P. S. If you don't like this article or find something unacceptable, please leave quietly and don't affect others, okay? It is true that you can express your thoughts arbitrarily by leaving a message, but that is not a reason for the author to accept opinions, nor is it a place for bad words. P. P. S. I really hope the author can stick to finishing the story. I really like this fanfic, even more than the original work.

A good book, the writing is good, the main thing is that there are no poisonous points, and the content is also very novel. Unlike other Bone King novels, which only have the protagonist and the old bone, it is very good. I haven't found any pitfalls yet.

The idea is very good. There are too few people writing about Bone King fans nowadays, and it is really rare to bring other players along for the time travel. The author's writing is great. Come on, as long as you don't supervise me, I will keep following him [Blow kiss]

It's a pretty good Bone King fanfic Yes, Momonga is actually a person who loves his companions very much. The guild is his other home. The world of Bone King is a rare design that is friendly to other time travellers. As long as you are a member of the guild, Bone King will never backstab you. It's just that the bone king's humanity will gradually decrease as time goes by, and his moral level will become a bit anthropomorphic. Logically speaking, this book should be rated as a five-star review, but this star deduction is a bit too much for the protagonist. Although it is enjoyable, it is a bit unreasonable and has a sense of violation, so some points will be deducted. But even so, this book is a fanfic worth recommending

It doesn't feel much worse than the original work. This kind of fan fiction is professional. You can see many things that are not written in the original work. You can see many things that are not written in the original work, such as the Eight Desire Kings, the Six Great Gods, various Dragon Kings, various world-class props, etc. These things that are still shrouded in mystery in the original work can be seen here. There are also various ways to break through the original level to obtain stronger abilities, such as capturing natural powers, which is a lot more fun.

It's pretty good-looking, pretty good, and more in line with my taste. The only drawback is that it updates a little slowly.

It is indeed well written. It respects the original character settings and the plots set for the original characters are quite reasonable. The relevant behaviors and plots of the protagonist who participates in the story are no problem. Personally, I think this is rare for fan fiction. Respecting the original characters and creating new characters that are not offensive is easier said than done. Many fan fictions that are not very good basically suffer from these two problems. In addition, the relationship between the three Supremes, especially the protagonist and Momonga, is a bit similar to Naruso's feeling of being a life-and-death best friend, which is a bit gay, but this is not a problem in my opinion. I even want the author to increase the intensity. Doesn't Xiao Di want the Supreme parent-child? Just let the protagonist and Momonga create dual supreme bloodlines, and the protagonist transforms into a dragon lady to increase the strength of Momonga. Thinking about this plot makes me feel explosive [laughter]

Among all the fanfics I have seen, the settings and plot writing here are the best. The settings of the protagonist are very interesting. I have never seen any fanfics in which the protagonist can turn into a dragon. The daily writing is also very beautiful and does not make people feel bored or tired. Brothers, I heard from others that if too many people give five stars, it seems that it will be considered as a malicious attempt to gain points. The same goes for one star, so I give it four stars.

It looks good. Although I haven't read Bone King, this article is really good, so I searched for pictures and read it. The author, please give me a thumbs up. It's not good enough [Sending heartfelt thanks]

To be honest, it's pretty good-looking. There's nothing special about it. It's just that maybe I'm a straight man and can't bear the overly gay scenes. I encourage you with five stars [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

This is one of the few bone kings that is well written. Most of them have a cheap feel and no desire to read. I feel good about this ordinary writing method. It is not too messy like others. The more I read, the less I want to read.

I really didn't expect to see Bone King's long serialized novel www. So far, there are no serious plot logic errors or OOC in the original work. It's quite smooth to the senses! The addition of original characters and the super bold plot development that breaks away from the original work are amazing╰(*´`*)╯

The emotional scenes are described very well, especially in the birthday section, where the original plot serves as a template for the author. How dare you update it every day? [Laughing evilly] The woc author is back again

It will be better if you update it quickly if it looks good. Come on, come on, come on.

It's very interesting, a pretty good Bone King fanfic. The author will continue to work hard to update it. By the way, I would like to ask the author, how many more chapters do you expect this book to be completed? There is still hope that it will not be unfinished.

It's very good. It has a plot and daily life. It's written in detail and the content is good. However, the love line of the protagonist is a little lacking. However, this book is originally based on the iron relationship between Momonga, Heihei, and Nahara, so the love line is not considered a slot. The one star is missing because I am afraid that the author will become a eunuch and the author will run away. I also can't make the author too proud, so I took this strategy, lightly spray, and to urge for updates.

There are few very good Bone King fanfics at the moment. The writing style is quite detailed (but there are still some minor setting issues). At present, it seems to be more of a daily slow-burn (I like this flavor). There may be more fights in the later period. Of course, it may be mainly daily (I guess) By the way, there is also a comment section saying that time travel has not happened yet. I can understand this. After all, I must talk about the background of the protagonist and the (super) friendship with Momonga for so many years. I personally think there is nothing wrong with it. The only drawback may be that there are too few! ! ! Totally not enough! ! ! Come on, author! 💪 This book really suits my taste!

It's so exciting, even among the many fanfics, it's one of the best.

The author wrote the best Bone King novel I have ever read. It's a pity that the writing is so good and the rating is not low, but the update speed is too slow. I felt sorry for the eunuch in the middle for a long time. I didn't expect it to be resurrected.

It's good-looking, the logic is not confusing, and I respect the original work. Some of the things that were a pity in the original work are comforted here. The author should not stop updating tj or anything, don't be ignorant of good and evil, and don't force me to kneel down with the reward and beg you! ! !

As of the latest 509 chapters, from a visual point of view, it is a good Bone King fanfic and has been well received. Advantages: The author really respects the original work and has his own ideas and framework. Although the update is slow but steady, it should be completed. Plot: I think the most interesting thing is until the founding of the Sorcerous Kingdom, but the main plot after the founding always feels a bit boring, whether it is fighting demons or the Dragon Emperor... I still prefer branch plots, such as the lovemaking between characters (the plot between Lao Gu and Albedo feels too little), the interaction between NPC NPCs in Nazarick, and the protagonist's longing body Naraku (I still like the character of Neia, with her fierce eyes), these are very interesting. All in all, it's a good pastime to pass the time. It's worth reading if you like fandoms, but I probably won't continue to follow it (after all, the best way to read a book is to finish it in one sitting)

After reading this book, I would like to recommend this book to those who have read the original work. Advantages: The author has obviously read the original work carefully, the details are well handled, the plot is well connected, the writing is very good, there are not many flaws in the characterization, and there are deviations in the character's personality, but because they are a fan, they will not pursue it. Disadvantages: It is obviously only suitable for people who have read or understood the original work. It focuses too much on the depiction of daily life. Rui Comment: Maybe Tomato's writing can only be read by very cool fanfics. At least this work doesn't have any big mistakes that Tomato's writing would make. Of course, it's also possible that the original work is a work that is very suitable for writing cool stories, so there is no sense of violation, right? There are errors in details, but they can be ignored. All in all, this is one of the better books I have read in the hundreds of hours I have read on Tomato. As for fan fiction, I can unhesitatingly praise it as the best among the Tomato fan fiction I have read. I also write fan fiction (not on this platform, as the development of online literature on this platform is too commercialized), so I may have more say than some people. Advice: My online literature tutor said that if you have never written a book, don't say that someone's book is bad. In the same way, if someone else's book is more popular than yours, you will be jealous of whatever you say. Vice versa. Unexpectedly, the author started updating again. Come on, it looks pretty good so far.

Very good, the roles of the three of them are very even, although it looks very comfortable [shy]

Not bad, this is the first time I see such a good Gu Aotian fan

It's the best among Bone King fanfics. It's very thin, and it can hold a hand of black Luo, black Luo, tomato, and one star. Many people who travel through time on Tomato seem to have been taken over by some system or original body. Bone King is a good example. This guy kills quite a few people? There is also forced calmness. In private, what should he do if he doesn't look like a time traveler? Ainz's anime and novels show a very divided character. For example, Blood Emperor Ainz really treats people as friends and has a lot of internal drama. But it doesn't prevent him from being punished The most important thing is the Vampire Princess Gaiden, which shows the country's subjugation, and Ainz lives an easy life. Many of those fellows are cold-blooded killers once they travel through time. They kill, kill, and plot everything in the union. It's simply a justice value—500 is a person's gain. Where is a small setting on what panel.