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It's very novel. I hope I pick up a younger brother, not a male protagonist, please.

It looks good. I hope there will be no male protagonist and no cp [like][like][like]

●Key points! ! ! It is recommended to read it before watching. Attention, this book is about scientific cultivation of immortality! Scientific cultivation of immortality! Scientific cultivation of immortality! There may be some minor deviations between the settings of this book and previous immortality novels, but the physics of the immortality world still exists! Even if you become an immortal, you are not omnipotent! The air composition still contains nitrogen and oxygen! All seemingly magical phenomena of cultivating immortals can be understood from a scientific perspective! If you can't accept this setting, don't watch it, don't embarrass yourself, and let me go! You have to allow ideas that are different from your own to come up, right? ●My writing is not good either, so don't expect too much from me. If you can't stand it anymore, let's change it!

A very good novel, the logic can be followed There are currently no logical contradictions. Apart from not knowing why the protagonist traveled through time, there are no particularly big pitfalls. The character of the protagonist is very good The idea of the whole book is very novel and the wording is very appropriate. There are no special problems in this regard. After looking at it so far, there should be no CP, but at the beginning, two men were picked up, but there was no development, and the protagonist was not moved. Some of the protagonist's moral concepts and outlook on life are actually quite good. It's a very good book, but there are too few of it now.

The assignment is really imaginative and the content is exciting. As long as you keep this pace and don't write the heroine in a romantic or romantic way, this book will definitely become popular [Cool][Cool][Cool]

This is the first time I read the subject of this book. The heroine wears a mobile phone to live broadcast. The heroine didn't know anything in the other world, but the country and netizens tried their best to help, especially when the heroine encountered Xie Xiuna and spent a lot of money on the first list. When the accident happened, the netizens really cared about the heroine. In the article, when the heroine joins the big sect (the name of the sect is Da Zongmen, and there are only a few people at the moment), when netizens communicate with Head Gou across time and space, I have the feeling that the heroine is the only Miaomiao sent by the earth to communicate in another world, and I hope that the other party will take good care of his cubs (my own feeling). Still, the heroine (the hope of the sect), the little fool (the stupid one), the headmaster Gou (the old one), the Si Shang (the disabled one), the Gou Wazi (the young one), and the missing one (the weak one) have appeared, which is very consistent with the writing. It's really good-looking and funny, and the author's writing style is also very good. I read more than fifty chapters in one go, so the author should work hard on writing! 😊😊😊

This novel is really enjoyable to read new chapters in one go. The subject matter is novel. It belongs to the cool writing type. Come on, the author, keep updating and strive for a score of 9.0

It feels okay, but it's a small problem that the country is not at the top of the list. This is a different world, and there are blessing bags in front of it. That proves that this other world can affect reality, and the country does not occupy the first place on the list.

Very pretty! But it was so hard for me to sit and wait for you [crying] I think I watched it in January or February this year. It was too long and I don't remember the specific time, but I really had a hard time waiting for you. I came here to check it out every day. Finally, he finally updated it [sending heart] and it was the first time I saw this kind of subject matter. I think it is very beautiful! I hope the author can complete it. [Shy] I would like to ask if I can give some spoilers? Will the heroine ascend [shy]

[Shy] Good job, author. Don't make it worse. [Grief] It's really hard, but you have to balance work with rest🌹

The collision between the world of immortality and technology, the revival of the earth's spiritual energy, the theme is novel, I have never seen anything similar so far, I like it very much. The combination is realized through live broadcast, and the elderly, weak, sick and disabled are cleverly collected to bring fun in a funny way. He's not the type to hide his cheating, he has a certain level of logical thinking. Anyway, I hope the author doesn't give up. I want to see the plot behind it. Awesome!

This book is very beautiful, with a rigorous rhythm and good writing style. There is nothing verbose and verbose, and it is relatively crisp and clear. The context can be connected and the subject matter is really novel. So far, there are no major shortcomings (I have only read 28 chapters), and the writing is also very attractive. This book is very good so far. I also like this kind of growth-oriented, refreshing novel with a heroine. Finally, I would like to ask those who have read this book, are there any lightning protection points in the follow-up? Is there a male protagonist?

I hope there is no CP. I want to see the heroine have sex with those two people [face covering]

It's very exciting. The heroine is not as stupid as the comment section said. On the contrary, she is very smart. The heroine is originally an ordinary person in modern times who traveled to the world of immortality. It's normal not to know anything. Even if you read a novel, it may not be correct. If you go through it, would you believe it? Will you be so calm? The heroine is not blindly confident and only fights the battles she can. This is probably also the consciousness of special forces among ordinary people. Moreover, the heroine is so talented because she has a lot of mechanical skills. It is considered a semi-refreshing novel, and there is nothing frustrating about it. It is recommended to read it first and not to be dissuaded by the comment section.

The subject matter is very novel. The author must keep it updated. [Sending my heart]

Overall, it's pretty good, but the plot about owing money is really uncomfortable. How can the master owe so much, and the heroine has to help him pay it back?

The subject matter is very novel and highly readable. I am optimistic about this book.

It's pretty good. I don't know why the rating is so low. It's very funny. I like to watch this kind of thing [Eating Melon]

Okay, but can Liu Chang not be a bad person [crying] [crying] Author, can you see it? He can be vain and ambitious, but don't betray the human race. For example, if demons appear later, or he is influenced by interests and betrays the country [crying] [crying] Author, can you see it? Can it? [OK][OK][OK][OK][OK][OK]

I find it very interesting [Shy] and really like every main character! This theme is very new! Anyway, I like it very much! I hope it will be more and more exciting in the future! The only fly in the ointment is that it's hard to find a novel that I like, but there are only a few dozen chapters [crying][crying]

It's very interesting, funny and special. It's a different story about cultivating immortals. The only shortcoming is that it's too shallow. I finished it in a few hours. I hope you can read more! I want to secretly save the manuscript!

The subject matter is novel and the protagonist is not the Virgin.

I've read Chapter 23, and I think it's good. The heroine is a rare cold-faced cool girl type (a bit like an INTJ personality?). She seems to be more egoistic at the moment, but she's not very ruthless. She can save people with her heart. I like it very much. The article is also very funny. I added a bookshelf, so good luck to the author.

Why does such a beautiful book have such a low score? I strongly recommend everyone to read it. It's very interesting, but the chapters are a bit updated [laughs]

The subject matter is very novel, but with the weakening of live broadcasting in the later period, it feels a bit deviated from the title of the book, and most of the time the live broadcast room is used by the master

Not bad, not bad. It's a good article. I love it. [Adore][Adore][Adore] Great love for the article about cultivating immortals without CP. But it's too shallow. I'll update it more.

Nice! The heroine announces the global cultivation of immortals through the live broadcast room and then announces the skills to everyone, instead of letting the official operation, and then quickly plunges the world into a huge conflict between immortal cultivators and ordinary people, causing many casualties, which feels very bad.

Nice! ! ! Come on update [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The characters in the book match the cover of the book perfectly

I have never read a book of this type. It is really good. I hope the author will read more.