I Was *******

I don't even know what I'm writing about, whether it's about technology, science fiction, or urban gangsters. What I wrote at the beginning was about the huge emotion after he was hit by a rich second generation? Instead of writing about the need to investigate and sort out the situation after being hit and what the purpose of hitting it was, and why it was hit, the author wrote that it turned into a gangster society and the police force was of no use there. Not to mention too many poisonous points, I don't know what I wrote. What is the goal of the protagonist and what is his own development direction?

It looks good, why don't you write it again? Come on, author!

It looks great, why did it break?

Why did it break?