Invincible*******

Come on, author. I think this early stage is okay.

Why is there no female protagonist? I think that Silver Moon is pretty good.

Very good, this is the best Devouring fanfic I have ever read. It's just a little lacking [please update]

Not many of the "Swallowing Starry Sky" genre can be completed, and they are either banned or removed from the market. Moreover, there are not many single female protagonists, and they are basically harems. Although there are still some minor flaws, fanfics should be cool and enjoyable. Don't pay too much attention to the details, which will not look good. I also hope that the author can handle those copyright issues well and avoid being blocked.

It's okay, but I think it could be changed. Take in Li Yao and his wife. Anyway, when the law of time becomes ok in the future, we can just save them when they return to the time when Li V is not dead. According to the original work, Li Yao and his wife will kill Luo Feng regardless of any threat. In the original work, doesn't it break out during the execution? Unless you can save his son, unless the author doesn't want to let Li Yao and his wife live.

It looks good, but the strength improves too quickly. If this pace continues, Luo Feng, the planet-level protagonist, will become immortal. . . . . I originally wanted to give the overall rating two stars, but thinking about the author, it's not easy, so I'll give it four stars.

Come on, just because you are so beautiful

Don't Collapse in the Later Period is a good book

Come on, author! Looking forward to the follow-up

Very interesting novel

It looks good. It's mainly because your cultivation speed is too fast. Damn it.

It looks uncomfortable from the front, but it's still okay Say nothing more. The author should have had a baby. At first I thought it looked pretty good. This tm is now a chapter popping up hundreds of years ago. 6

This may be the most enjoyable devouring article I have ever read, so I hope it can be updated all the time. Don't stop updating. Come on.

This book is very good. I like this book very much.

I guess the rating for fan fiction shouldn't be too high, right? If it's too high, it seems like it will be blocked! Author, be careful ~ [face covering]

Come on, author, keep an eye on you.

Why do you feel it has been changed? Character names and levels.

The author is very good-looking, I like it very much.

Not bad, pretty good

Go on, write faster. It's much better than those on the brainless list.

None. If you are interested, you can check it out.

Not bad, you can take a look

Hey, it's pretty good-looking (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

Looking confused

It's okay. Come on, Oli.

You haven't finished writing this yet.

Author, come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on

I just want to say awesome

Stand on the shoulders of giants

It looks good but one chapter is a bit missing. It looks good but there are a few words.