Pirate************

The title of the book is the first impression the book gives to readers. To be honest, this title really doesn't make people want to read on. But I quite like the plot. Please give your best to the author. I am looking forward to the ending of this book!

The plot is great, the writing is also great, I really like the writing style, and the heroine used to be beautiful and strong, and it's really great to raise a cub and get redemption, and it's not a virgin. Bartolomeo and his father are sharp and warm, and they are handled particularly well. I love the sentence "I can't guarantee that your son will become a good person. What I can do is teach him the basic concepts of good and evil, the basic rules of life, and let him decide what kind of person he wants to be." It touches my heart. And as for the school part, part-time work-study really gives the children the greatest respect! There are always some children who are not allowed to eat. Love it! But I hope it won't be too drastic in the later stage. People can only eat cookies when they get old. Note: I can't remember clearly what Lily said, so I wrote it roughly, so don't take it seriously.

I like it very much. Shanks is obviously very good but there are too few female videos! Most of the pirate stories are about the male harem Long Aotian. Although there are some good ones, they are few and far between, and there are also quite a few unfinished ones. I'm going to spit it out, send my heart to you. Come on, author! Don't be cooing or rotten [crying] [love]

The author's content is very detailed, there are no logical loopholes, and the character design is stable. To put it simply, if there are 20 stars, I can give it 20 stars! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] I love this book so much. I hope the author can keep updating it until the end and not stop updating it suddenly, so that I can only eat ashes at the bottom of the pit [face covering] I just missed it, I love Shanks in it! ! ! ! ! I really like the heroine too! This kind of career-oriented woman is really awesome! ! ! ! !

Chapter 106 To be honest, it's really hard to find a time-traveling One Piece novel with a heroine that I would love to read. Read the end in one breath [Like] I like strong heroines. I originally came here to see the heroine. I don't care who the male protagonist is. As long as the emotional development is not too outrageous and the heroine is not forced, it will be fine. Today is another day for liking strong women. [Like][Admiration] Come on, author! ＾0＾~[Like][Like]

The author's writing style is really great [adoration][adoration][adoration]. I have read so many pirate fanfics and only this one made me want to keep reading. I'm really grateful for letting me see such an excellent article [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It can be seen that the author really likes this anime. He has a lot of thoughts about some details of One Piece and has many refreshing opinions. The most important thing is that the heroine did what I wanted to do most - open a school and enlighten the people's wisdom. So cool!

Very good [Admiration] [Admiration] The evil CPs I knocked on were Goosegooseluo and Doflamingo [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] Haha (｡ò ∀ ó｡) They knocked me to death [Admiration] [Admiration]

Please update soon, the writing is so beautiful! ! Come on, come on, come on

It's really sweet [crazy] The way Shanks is written is so cute and lively, wow, it doesn't feel awkward and the two of them match each other well.

The author's analysis of Dover and Rosie really poked me. Dover's tolerance for Rosie, and Rosie's empathy for Rosie because she failed to save Dover were not shown in the plot. There was a feeling of regret that was touched but did not change, which is a pity. The author's thinking about pirates is very profound, and I have seen points that I have never seen before, but how can I put it, the cp with red hair is not as good as that with Dover (although I also like red hair), but the Dover written by the author is really good, can't there be a book about Dover? ≥≤ I can relate to anyone. (Dover is really the most charming, regrettable and heart-wrenching of all villains)

This novel is very interesting because I prefer reading novels about saving Ace, so I think this novel is very interesting, and her CP is Shanks, which makes me like it even more. If you like reading this type of writing, I recommend it. If you don't like it, you can read some other types, which is still very recommended. Please give the author a little more motivation! ! ! [Notice]

It's pretty good, but the pace is not fast. It doesn't follow the timeline of the main character. I've read a lot of pirate novels. This one is well written, but it's a bit unreadable. I read it slowly. If I write it too fast, my ideas get messed up. Come on

It's well written, I hope the author can keep writing! [Please update]

The plot of this book is very good, and the author also devoted time to sorting it out when the Haimies couldn't figure it out. Please give it a try, author! 👏😘, And the author said my level is also super high 🙂🙂

Five stars plus follow in case you can't find it in the future

Great support! It's just that I don't have enough small money (இωஇ). I don't have many people who would work hard to save it! (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

I like it very much! Shanks in it is really cute. Who can resist a big red-haired dog?

Very nice (´◊ω◊｀) ps: The author will update it soonᕮ◥▶‸◀◤ᕭ

@He Yi, come on, author, I'm optimistic about you

Damn, I actually don't like Kizaru very much. He is too undisciplined. He obviously has the ability to change many things but he didn't change it. In this article, I really understand his undisciplinedness. If he didn't fight you as a pirate, it would be great. Who would want to be a navy! Highly recommended for fans who write "Kizaru"! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I like it so much, I love it so much! ! ! Cp knock well

It's great. I've been hesitant about reading this book before. Oh well, luckily I made up my mind to read it yesterday. Otherwise, I wouldn't know what I missed. It's really good-looking, well-founded, not too abrupt, and very nice.

It's really beautiful! ! ! And that extra story (smiling obscenely)... Hehe, I really like it too~ I never lowered the corner of my mouth during the whole process (except for the Kizaru one, after all, Kizaru doesn't look like a young one, so he can't knock)

This book is very good. The author has his own understanding of each character. Although there is not too much main line, it is more of the author's own original description, which is perfectly integrated into the world. I have a feeling that this is the original work [Thinking] The heroine CP is red-haired Shanks, and of course there are several special guests who are written together in the extra story [laughing]

Fighting is almost fun, but you are such a good cunning CP [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I really like this book. The author would like to update it a lot! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Highly recommended, very beautiful! Great author, come on!

It's great to watch, the plot is okay, the characters' personalities are well described, overall it's pretty good

In the main story, the male protagonist is Shanks, and the female protagonist is very powerful. There is a very mysterious feeling at the beginning. In the extra story, there are also stories between her and others (explore it yourself [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]). All in all, it's pretty good-looking. The further you go, the more shocked you become.