One Piece: Big Sister

The title of the book is the first impression the book gives to readers. To be honest, this title really doesn't make people want to read on. But I quite like the plot. Please give your best to the author. I am looking forward to the ending of this book!

The plot is great, the writing is also great, I really like the writing style, and the heroine used to be beautiful and strong, and it's really great to raise a cub and get redemption, and it's not a virgin. Bartolomeo and his father are sharp and warm, and they are handled particularly well. I love the sentence "I can't guarantee that your son will become a good person. What I can do is teach him the basic concepts of good and evil, the basic rules of life, and let him decide what kind of person he wants to be." It touches my heart. And as for the school part, part-time work-study really gives the children the greatest respect! There are always some children who are not allowed to eat. Love it! But I hope it won't be too drastic in the later stage. People can only eat cookies when they get old. Note: I can't remember clearly what Lily said, so I wrote it roughly, so don't take it seriously.

I like it very much. Shanks is obviously very good but there are too few female videos! Most of the pirate stories are about the male harem Long Aotian. Although there are some good ones, they are few and far between, and there are also quite a few unfinished ones. I'm going to spit it out, send my heart to you. Come on, author! Don't be cooing or rotten [crying] [love]

The author's content is very detailed, there are no logical loopholes, and the character design is stable. To put it simply, if there are 20 stars, I can give it 20 stars! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] I love this book so much. I hope the author can keep updating it until the end and not stop updating it suddenly, so that I can only eat ashes at the bottom of the pit [face covering] I just missed it, I love Shanks in it! ! ! ! ! I really like the heroine too! This kind of career-oriented woman is really awesome! ! ! ! !

Chapter 106 To be honest, it's really hard to find a time-traveling One Piece novel with a heroine that I would love to read. Read the end in one breath [Like] I like strong heroines. I originally came here to see the heroine. I don't care who the male protagonist is. As long as the emotional development is not too outrageous and the heroine is not forced, it will be fine. Today is another day for liking strong women. [Like][Admiration] Come on, author! ^0^~[Like][Like]

The author's writing style is really great [adoration][adoration][adoration]. I have read so many pirate fanfics and only this one made me want to keep reading. I'm really grateful for letting me see such an excellent article [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Very good [Admiration] [Admiration] The evil CPs I knocked on were Goosegooseluo and Doflamingo [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] Haha (｡ò ∀ ó｡) They knocked me to death [Admiration] [Admiration]

It can be seen that the author really likes this anime. He has a lot of thoughts about some details of One Piece and has many refreshing opinions. The most important thing is that the heroine did what I wanted to do most - open a school and enlighten the people's wisdom. So cool!

Please update soon, the writing is so beautiful! ! Come on, come on, come on

It's really sweet [crazy] The way Shanks is written is so cute and lively, wow, it doesn't feel awkward and the two of them match each other well.