Hpmay the Magic Be with You

The writing is really good. The heroine has a great personality. She doesn't have the common problem in fan fiction that the adult heroine loses her IQ as soon as she crosses over. She also doesn't try to travel back in time to redeem Snape when he was young, making him grateful and never forget it... I think love requires two people to stand at the same height, not that kind of thing. Unequally, most fan fiction heroines travel back in time to give Snape favors and make him fall in love with her (them), but this is a kind of inequality... The love between the heroine and Snape is the real attraction of the soul, not because of kindness or anything else. They stand on the same level as equals and love each other.

I like it very much. This is the first time I have seen this kind of heroine. I feel very good. Ahem, mainly because GGAD is so annoying. Two months of confusion and infatuation, a century of indescribable feelings. My love and I both died in the high tower, and my heart and I both stayed in midsummer.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a wonderful Sri Lankan fanfic that appeals to my taste. Although I haven't watched Star Wars, the author has done a good job and can fully understand the heroine's background. The text description is also very delicate (and he also handles every bug carefully, which I rarely see in Tomato). The characters are not OOC, and there is no school discrimination (very rare). The plot development is also very smooth. The only flaw is that Sri Lanka's appearance frequency is not very high so far 😂 I hope to see more Sri Lankan appearances in the future

Oh, I like this kind of slow-burning style so much (mainly because Sri Lankan's feeling is suitable for slow-burning people, and it's impossible to fall in love with him right away). Although Sri Lankan teaching and Ariana don't have much interaction, I feel like I can see a little bit of the chemical reaction between them hahaha. I hope I'm not wrong, but the one I want to praise the most is Da Da. It's great. I'm very curious about Star Wars now. I must read it after the exam. The overall story rhythm is also very good. I want to read a few chapters before reading it but I can't stop it at all😭. In the end, I really hope that the cp will not be changed. Sri Lanka is really suitable for Ariana [shy][shy][shy] In short, it is very well written! ! ! Don't worry, you won't be disappointed! ! (It's one of the better ones among the fanfics I've read!) Help, I still have a lot of things I want to write😭. I'll add a longer one when it's finished [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This book has broken all the fixed plots of HP's fanfics since the first grade, and then he continued the style in the second grade. I don't know what will happen in the third grade, and what will happen later, but as long as I continue to follow it, I will continue to follow it. Overall, this is a very, very, very good fanfic. Due to the limited knowledge I have learned, I am too short of words and cannot express it well.

The plot is very coherent. It was the first time I saw the heroine who traveled from Star Wars to HP, and I also saw a different Dumbledore (PS: I didn't use Legilimency on the heroine or I soon suspected that the heroine was not a good person or something). Come on, the author. I caught a few bugs in the new chapter. I hope the author will change it soon.

I really like Anduin and Ariana! ! ! Come to life! My sweetheart! ! ! I hope that Anduin will appear in Durmstrang's team during Goblet of Fire, and then there will be a whole recognition article! ! ! Come on, I really like them both! ! ! They were in the previous world, so I hope they can be in this world! ! Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,, ,, was was was it was my delusion, but I really want to think about it so much, woo woo." ! ! Super pretty! Super invincible and beautiful! ! Super invincible explosion looks great! ! ! I love watching it! ! ! ! ! ! Hehehehehehehe [licking the screen] It's not impossible to teach Sri Lanka hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe[licking the screen]

It's so good. I declare this to be the best Harry Potter fanfic on Tomato. I really watched it over and over again. The only drawback is that it's not finished yet.

This is the most beautiful HP article I have ever seen [Love] Come on, it's really cool to be CP with Sif, okay? And the emotional line is also very obvious in the later stage. I really like it [laughs] [laughs] I was a little confused at the beginning (personal problem), but after I understand it later, I will find the highlights of this book, and then I will like it very much. Every day is a day of waiting for updates [please update] Author, please give it a try! !

I thought this book was awesome! ! ! The plot is great, and the heroine's character is also very interesting to me! ! Moreover, the heroine is rational, smart, and astute. Of course, the most important thing is that the heroine does not seem to be a love-minded person, nor does she blush easily when facing the opposite sex. This is really great! ! ! Big cheers for the author! Thank you for helping us by the way when you produce your own food! (It would be great if it can be more explosive [shy][shy])

I really like Wuwuwu. I really want to see the scene where the heroine uses a lightsaber to be seen by the teacher. I really like Wuwuwu. The author loves you so much (ɔˆ ³(ˆ⌣ˆc) And I really want to read the story of the heroine Jedi Knight.

The best Sri Lankan CP article I have ever read is that I didn't get to know Sri Lanka before Lily, as if I couldn't compare to Lily after that. There is no forced Otome halo to influence the professor who deeply loved Lily and lost his beloved. In this article, both of them let go of their lost love, and they gradually became attracted to each other through their daily interactions and each other's unique charm. Intelligent love between evenly matched adults. Slytherins will be attracted by powerful martial arts and outstanding perseverance, and they will also monopolize selfish and strong lovers.

Update soon! CP is my favorite Sri Lankan religion! Wish Sri Lankan education good luck all the way! May the Sect be redeemed in fan fiction! Get happy!

This book is very exciting, in which I saw the love process of Arianna and Snape. Let me understand that love does not need to be vigorous, it can also be buried in the heart, with all love latent in behavior. I hope you read this book with expectation and understand its brilliance. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The writing was good, but it felt like the emotional drama between the heroine and Snape started suddenly. It's hard to tell before that Snape has a crush on the heroine or behaves in a special way towards the heroine. He may even spend less time alone. And when we are alone, we basically have serious conversations. If you get along with normal people, you may not get emotional, but it's not bad anyway. Forget it, I can't stand it anymore

This is the first time I've seen Harry Potter linked to Star Wars. It's a bit novel. I hope I can continue to work hard to update it❤️

The writing is very good, I would like to show my love [blowing kiss]

Damn, I came back to watch it after a long time. Now that I'm halfway through it, I feel something is wrong at the end. I thought it was a non-CP story! Then I looked at my resume and realized that I was teaching at Sri Lanka! Do you know this feeling? Although I like Sri Lanka the most and I also like this development, I still feel like a bolt from the blue. Damn! Of course, the author's writing is very good, and it is one of the top ones in my heart. I will keep following it. It's really good!

This is really one of the best articles I have ever read. 1. The heroine doesn't know the plot, and the choices she makes are very common sense. 2. Every character is fleshed out 3. The relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses at a very natural pace. Si Jiao was attracted to the heroine only after knowing her true age and getting along with her for a long time. (Forgive me for not being able to talk about teacher-student love, but the author really handles this aspect very well) 4. I raise the banner for GGAD. Hey hey hey hey. It's really good. 5. The plot is a bit deviated from the plot of the novel and movie. But it's not abrupt because it makes sense because of the heroine's character and what she does. The only drawback is that the episode is too short! Arianna is so cute as a baby!

This article is really great, it is the best among the many articles I have read on CP Shisi teaching! ! God knows how awkward it feels every time when I read some articles and meet Sri Lanka, I am a little fan of Sri Lanka, and then I run over to lick it! Wuwuwuwu, the female lead master is really upset, and she even feels that it's okay for the CP not to be a Sri Lankan teacher🥺ps: This kind of love that both parties share is unforgettable from the previous period, I like it so much, the main thing is fairness! !

So far, this is the only novel about SCP that I can read from beginning to end. Snape's restraint is also very well written. The novels I am currently reading on Tomato are either very high-end or OOC. Personally, I prefer heroines like Ariana. I have never read Star Wars, but I have always liked this kind of characters with lofty beliefs and consciousness. Compared with other novels, it is rare to find novels that can make me laugh and cry like this one. It made me cry and feel happy. I liked it so much that I stayed up several nights to finish reading it [crying]

A particularly delicious and reasonable HP novel about Snape's cp. Although he is also a student at the beginning, the protagonist is indeed many times more mature. His behavior and memory are even more mature than Snape's. Moreover, both parties fell in love with each other on the premise of knowing each other's previous experiences, and respected each other very much. Snape didn't overly whitewash, he honestly showed his suppression of Gryffindor, and he also clearly analyzed the part where he voluntarily joined the Death Eaters. I really like this, Snape doesn't whitewash. The last thing I want to praise the most is that Star Wars and HP are so well combined. Although I have never watched Star Wars, the heroine's firm humanity, willpower, and perseverance to uphold her principles were vividly demonstrated! It also adds to the legitimacy of Snape's attraction. The charm of the heroine is completely overflowing. Xiao Ha's early love is also very reasonable. The heroine acts as a guide, but at the same time does not look down on her. She earnestly persuades Colonel Deng and informs Harry of his fate at the same time. It is so well written. And GGAD is real. Although the heroine looks like AD and has abilities and prophecies like GG, in terms of personality, she is really a complete Jedi. The little heroine in the episode who has not yet fully become a Jedi is so cute! Like! Full marks! I would like to add that it did not steal Harry's protagonist's highlight, but it also did not force the hp plot, and reasonably promoted the acceleration of the plot. Harry still has considerable growth. The heroine is one of the helpers in his destiny and does not replace him as the person to kill Voldemort. This is even better! There is no black lion, black snake, and black Deng school, which is even more praised among the praises!

Wow, this book is surprisingly good! It's just that the number of words may be a bit short. If there are more chapters, more people may read this book. Come on, author. [Blow a kiss]

It's really interesting to have a god of war paired with a weak scholar (theoretically speaking, ss cannot be considered a weak scholar, but whoever is in HP is weak when facing a Jedi Knight hahh The heroine and Dumbledore cb trust each other and it feels good. There are no conspiracy theories. The relationship between the protagonist and the trio is also handled well. GGAD is very compatible in the early stage. The ss is a bit OOC but I can accept it. It seems that the author wants to write about Harry's gradual growth (I think the writing is quite accurate), but the comment area seems to have been poisoned by the idea of "the savior is reckless and ignorant" for a long time... Disadvantages: The emotional line is quite sudden. I always feel that SS still lacks understanding of Anne at the beginning. There is a lot of Star Wars content, and readers who have never watched Star Wars may not have the patience to finish it.

Another good book, but it's a pity that I haven't read Star Wars and don't know the code of conduct of the Jedi very well. The heroine is a descendant of Aberforth, but she was misunderstood by Grindelwald because she looked too much like Albus and rushed out to save Dumbledore. Hahaha, overall it's a good read. The one star I'm missing is that I didn't finish it and I'm a bit of a fan of Sectarian Poison [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

Straight girl, hahahahahahaha! It would be unfortunate to fall in love with a straight woman. I didn't expect that there would be a straight woman who is straighter than the Catholic Church. It's so joyful. The professor in this book is particularly cute and even a little out of touch. Everyone became cute because of Anna. I will directly tell you about the story of "The Overbearing Mr. An and Her Weak Little Pharmacist" by Professor Beloved Wife. The story is very cute. The heroine's character is very calm and a little cute. People can really see her mature and tenacious soul. She is very cute! !

My family, I have to say, this is so good that I cried. Damn it, it is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever read. It is refreshing and the plot is compact and not draggy. The most important thing is that this cp is really sweet to me [shy][shy][shy] The most important thing is that when you use cp, it is not the kind of industrial saccharin, but the kind of light sugar. The special top is like tasting a tasteless stone, and then as you taste it, it gradually becomes sweeter. This is the feeling, and this CP is really sweet, really sweet to my heart. I like it so much [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

2026.7.22 Finished spreading flowers Ariana Snow-Dumbledore x Severus Snape Not bad, the heroine is not the naughty and mischievous Gryffindor I imagined. (When I was reading the introduction, I was really discouraged many times [palming my face]) The heroine is very calm (leader + warrior), with a bit of naughtiness that was suppressed in the Holy Land. Not an annoying brat at all. The heroine is not just a nanny or a blowbag for the three little ones, she is very comfortable to watch. The relationship with SS is also very good. Both of them are strong-willed people, attracted to each other and appreciate each other [laughing] The relationship with the two Dumbledores is also good. Draco is very "aware of current affairs" (cute little dragon). GGAD is also beautiful [laughing]

Ariana is really awesome!!! There is a sense of seriousness mixed with nonsense (bushi), and she is undoubtedly the Gryffindor Lion. The rules of the Jedi made me stunned for a while, and I already want to watch "Star Wars" haha. And wizards are really fragile when facing melee warriors. Such a "delicate" Sri Lankan teacher still makes me feel very strange. The other two people and Bai Yueguang are just equal. It's very fair. Y1s1 I quite like to see Sri Lankan religion jealous. I can't imagine how many points Ariana would have been deducted by the teacher if she had grown up in Hogwarts, the fighting lion in Gryffindor👏. The smooth feeling I felt after reading it in one breath is indescribable.

I have never read Star Wars, but the author's introduction is very accurate and detailed. It is neither long-winded nor confusing. It is well integrated and very creative. The writing style is serious and funny, and I often laugh out loud because of something that everyone knows very well. The characters are very fitting and there is almost no OOC, at least I didn't notice it. Everyone is still so cute, and I mean everyone on Ariana's side. He respects the original work very much and leaves the highlight to Harry. The teacher and the heroine also frankly admitted that they had loved someone before. The process of the teacher's and the heroine's attraction was also very reasonable, and it was very sweet after they were together! This is one of the best fan works I have ever seen about falling in love with Sri Lanka! All in all, a very, very good book! So author, when will you update?