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Ah, no culture Just live in Akiyoshi and be an ordinary fox in the next life. This book is a small comfort I wish that the beautiful starry sky will shine without being bound or twinkling. A friendship with small regrets is also a friendship I wish that I, and everyone, don't lose our friends That's something more terrifying than death Live a good life Be bold, life doesn't have that many viewers Sincerely: To the author of comfort Have a nice day

I put down the book in my hand and looked at the sky. It was as if I saw a river of stars, rushing towards the distance. Someone is telling a beautiful story at the end of the rush. Someone is singing, their own dream.

The clear night is dust-free, and the moonlight is like silver. When the wine is poured, it must be ten minutes full. It is a waste of hard work to write and break the text. A horse is caught in a sigh, fire is caught in a stone, and a body is caught in a dream. Although I read the article, I still haven't updated it. And urge me to update, I hope you will treasure it as soon as possible. When will you return, please write another article. To a long harp, a pot of wine, and a stream of clouds. Who are you sitting with? The bright moon cools me.

I really like it. I can't describe it in words. Hehe, please keep updating.

The previous chapters will be slightly adjusted in the near future, and the look and feel should be better.

I was so moved. The first time I saw Star Egg, my heart bled. But after reading this book, I made up for it a lot. After reading it, I doubted whether I had read the original work. I didn't understand many parts. The author is great 👍

This is the most exciting second work of Star Egg I have ever seen. It complements the regrets of the original text and many series, and at the same time develops around the settings of the original text.

I've done it three times and I keep forgetting to rate it. Summary: I like it a lot There are some differences in language style from the original work, but it does not affect the quality of this book at all. Each chapter is written very carefully and has quite a lot of words... And then there it is! The author and I have different understandings of the original work! In my opinion, the egg in the original work should be a kind of existence, parasitic on the shell of Qiuji, rather than so-called energy. Anger is more closely a kind of conceptual monster (such as the monkey-faced Anger that can make wishes, the hands that can be modified), and the description of Anger in this book is more like a deformed beast. The battle in the original work is more conceptual, and the description of human settlements is also very unreal... But the author's explanation of the concept of "Distant Viewer" is really good. As both an explorer of the outside world and a defender of the city-state, the author has less of a sense of collapse in the last days and more of truth and goodness between people. The characters that impressed me the most were Lao Li, Ulgis and Mir. Although they only appeared in the extra chapters, the characters were vividly portrayed in a few chapters and had their own souls, rather than crude clay figures wearing skins. I personally like the extra: the pain of parting, the anger of the dead, the despair of collapse, they are just words but they can make me feel something... This is probably why I like novels. Ahhh... I'm going too far... Anyway, I'm looking forward to the future development. I hope the author can persevere and bring adventure and excitement to the story of Akiyoshi and Ryosuke...

Finally we have candy, it's not easy

Write! Of! Real! Of! Overtake! Class! Good! It really filled the gap in my heart in the original work. Those benefits that were not enjoyed in the original work have really been written by the author, which is really satisfying. Seeing Akiyoshi and Ryosuke happy makes me smile, and as a fan, it is really good to be able to supplement the sparse descriptions in the original work. Although the big be in the original work is very desperate and left a deep impression on me, when I read this fanfic, sometimes I really hope that their real ending will be a super good he, but I am also satisfied here. I hope the author can continue writing!

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง You must stick to it. As promised, Ryosuke and Akiyoshi should be together forever... Don't separate.

It's just as sweet as the original book [laughs crookedly] This book is really great, but the author should pay attention to his health when updating [blowing kiss]

As the saying goes, the unknown is the most essential fear of human beings, but if you can use this to create new buds in flowers, then why not give it a try? Ryosuke doesn't know what the change he can call his creation will bring. When he sees the orange sun that is supposed to shine rising, he will not regret embarking on this thorny road. For myself and for Qiuyoshi. The white bear stood in the fog and moved forward slowly without stopping. What more praise is needed? Forget it, let's laugh at it: no knife at all (three thousand ketchup waterfalls flowed from the corner of my mouth)

Perfect, there are only two fanfics of Tomato Star Egg, both are of high quality

Beautiful (I don't know what to say, I can only say these two words)

@Bear Do you want to join a group? Let's discuss the novel. I think your novel is quite good.

Flow batch! (Broken sound!) The author's writing is really good, I feel like I'm reading the original work [full]. It's great that Ryosuke survived and Akiyoshi doesn't have to be alone. I feel like the descriptions of the battle scenes are great. It's amazing. The writing and plot settings are all online. Come on, author!

The author's writing is very beautiful. Today is the third time I have read it. Although there are many words, I still feel that it is not enough to read. The author needs to work hard to update. Come on.

Woo woo woo, [I'm about to cry][I'm sending my heart] I hope the dream ended happily [I'm sending my heart][I'm about to cry]

The hope of Star Egg fans depends on you! I wish me good luck in my high school entrance examination. See you after the high school entrance examination.

Come on, author! Support[send heart]

Hehe, although the author secretly included a lot of personal information, I am already satisfied to see such a fan of the same appetite [please ask for more updates]

Very well written. Highly recommended to watch. After so many days of watching, I make the following summary of this article. First, although the author does not update regularly, it can be seen that he has made great efforts to ensure quality. Second, the author worked very hard on the character structure, and each character is just like in the original work. Third, although there is no clear class of strength, the author is really trying to structure one and ensure that this thing will not lose its combat power. Fourth, the author pays great attention to the plot and does not care about the setting. Although sometimes he will come up with some plots that are incomprehensible at first, but the incomprehensible plots at the end are like dominoes that continue to enlarge the three-dimensional sense of the article. When they all come together to impact your brain, the feeling of enlightenment is great. I am not exaggerating in any way about this article. I really think this book is very well written. Although the updates are very unstable, as long as you read it, the updates are not a problem for us. To be honest, it is difficult to find a book like this one on Tomato. I am looking forward to the future of this book.

When did the author come back to life and kick me? . . .

I was fooled by the original work, I must support the fans, have some candy

Welcome to fanfic series 6

It's really beautiful (can't express it in words) [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

There's not much to say, it just looks good. Oops, I have to wait until summer vacation to see the rest of it [face covering] But I'm not in a hurry [laughing evilly] I hope the author writes better and better, and I look forward to the rest of it [sending my heart]

Very nice fan

A belated review of the book, very interesting