Nirvana

Oh my gosh, I had been thinking about how this book was written so well, with vivid characters and non-cheesy routines, but there were no comments. But when I saw it, I was convinced and updated it for 9.7K words. I was really convinced. Isn't this going to cost me my life? The author should update it quickly! ! Don't force me to take a knife to your house and force you to write.

Why is there no one here when it's so beautiful? It's so beautiful. The author seems to have chosen a bad title for the book? Maybe it would be much better to change the title of the book, Crusu Elements, Apocalypse, the protagonist is a tentacle monster, they are all hot topics, the author will not stop writing because of poor results, please, must keep writing.

The description of the character's mentality is very detailed, and the narration of the situation is also in place. The disadvantage is that the cool points are not clear enough. Although the words are conclusive and try not to rely on cool points to build momentum, this is an online novel. A novel that lacks cool points will have no popularity and soul. This is a helpless fact. In addition, if I were to end it, even if it is a sloppy ending At the end, we also need to create a suspenseful and open ending, so that we can continue writing or start a new chapter, or build momentum for the new book. The whole story ended hastily just for revenge on a small and unpopular gang. It is a pity. I hope the author will take the time to expand a larger world view and more character lines. Come on.

There's something there. There are still quite few apocalyptic themes of this type. Come on.

It's been a long time since I've given five stars. It's really exciting. Although it's finished, I can tell that this is probably just the first volume. There will be a second volume soon, right author, right author, right author! ! ! It's so fun to watch, and the plot is completely reasonable. Although it progresses very quickly, I can see that this is just a prelude. The follow-up content will definitely be more exciting.

It's very well written, very eye-catching, and different from other apocalypses.

As long as you keep writing according to this trend, this will be one of Tomato's rare masterpieces

The narration is very smooth and the storyline is very reasonable. I can understand what I am talking about and I am looking forward to the development of the story later. Come on! ! !

Tomato has good books! Good luck to the author!

I'm not very good at talking, but I look good anyway. Come on