With My Spiritual Power, It's Not Too Much to Carry a Sword with Me.

It's a story about the protagonist's growth. It's not an invincible novel. The plot is very exciting. I just don't know if there is a female protagonist. I hope there is no female protagonist. After all, this kind of novel will collapse if I don't control it well. It would be better to write without a female protagonist. And currently, there is no female protagonist, and there is no ambiguous partner. The protagonist is not interested in women.

Up to Chapter 269, except for the first dozen or so chapters which are relatively bland, there are no flaws. One particularly good thing about this novel is that it does not describe women's figures in detail (some novels clearly state that there is no CP, but as a result, the figures of the women around the male protagonist are always described in extremely detailed ways, which feels a bit "low"). So far, there are no ambiguous plots [like], and although the force value is high, it is not too exaggerated. The two points of no cp and no ambiguity are already very good, and the plot is also good.

The protagonist is worthy of being a student. His eyes exude clear stupidity. He is not defensive at all towards others and shows his heart to his friends. Before and after signing the SSS contract, he never asked himself what obligations he had to fulfill, what he had to pay, and what he would get in return? All she said was to help him find out the cause of his parents' death! Depending on how fast you upgrade, you can do it in less than a year. So what's the point of signing this contract? Moreover, for a systematic person, the resources and abilities are given by the system. There is no need to sign any contract. And the fat man's upgrade speed is almost as fast as that of the systematic people. This is a big problem. Is the protagonist a nanny? You will give him resources and take him to the next book. You will also give him a training partner. Unless you make the fat man's problem as big as the protagonist, what is the point of training him? I am a good friend, but we are not on the same latitude. In the end, when we are strong enough, there will be no connection. It is just a waste of effort. The only thing that feels good is that there is no heroine and no ambiguity [laughter]

As long as you read it patiently, you will find that it is quite beautiful. I hope I can see the day it ends This ended a bit suddenly [shocked]

It's average, the writing is a bit messy, there are too many skills and it doesn't form its own system. The title is Sharingan, which is the pupil technique. The content is off topic. The pupil technique is the eyes and involves the soul, and there is no development in this aspect. Then the realm of the sword is not marked. There are so many things written in it. Later, it still involves cultivating immortals. Just like sword intention, laws, and development directions are very strange. If there is a system, why bother to make it so complicated? Readers will only find it confusing and verbose. Soul (pupil technique), physical training, sword intention, and spiritual power. Wouldn't it be good to develop these four well? Soul secret technique, physical training martial arts, and swordsmanship. How can we still lack attacks? Have you ever understood what sword cultivation is? Have you ever understood what pupil surgery is? If you want to write about cultivation of immortals, just write a little bit, add a little wherever you want, and then pull a lot and add a little more, and look at the ink

It's okay, there were some problems in the early stage, but it's pretty good later on.

Does it sound okay? At least it seems less intellectually addictive than other Naruto novels of the same type.

Come on, author.

I really can't stand it anymore. I have endured dozens of chapters. When I have been with that team, I just want to give a low score. You said it is a bit poisonous. OK, I can endure it. It has been more than a hundred chapters, and there is another burden. Doesn't that thing belong to Mirror Seven? You still followed and continued to go deeper together without saying a few words, because you were dead and exploded. Okay, I will treat you as a kind-hearted person. From now on, is Mader called you a bit poisonous? Can't see a little bit

Feels good looking👀

Damn, what kind of rating is this? I almost missed it. This rating is a bit low for this book.

I actually commented on it before, but now the book is gone, and I don't know if I can see it, but it doesn't matter, just keep it as a souvenir. Some people may not like this book, but for me, it really suits my taste. Although the book is gone, I am really sad. Before this book came out, I forgot how long it was, anyway, it's quite a long time. It's been a long time, but I haven't removed it from the bookshelf. Sometimes I even take it out and read it, not from the middle or excerpts, but from beginning to end. Anyway, I like this book very much. I'm sorry for its disappearance. I'll just keep this as a souvenir. Maybe I will read this book again occasionally in the future.

Yes, it's rare to find a book that I want to read.

Just help your so-called friends when they have nothing to do, provide resources and skills, and hold them back. Compared with this type of novel where the protagonist fights alone, it is more interesting. In this kind of novel, friends, family, relatives, etc. Are all burdens. It is so fun to fight alone.

This is a great book. Fortunately, I have added it to my bookshelf. What kind of dog platform is this? Why is it so cruel? This book is very interesting. I am reading it with great enthusiasm. How could it end? I am applying to write another book with the original content of this book. Damn it! ! ! ! ! [Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][ Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Sad][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry] [roll eyes][face cover][angry][angry][angry][angry][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad][sad ][Sad][Sad][Sad][Sad][Sad][Sad][Sad][Sad][Sad][Sad][Sad] I want to watch it over and over again, but I can't see the follow-up, hey, hey, hey, I swear this is the longest comment I've ever written.

It's okay, just a little bland and could do with something. Otherwise, it would seem that the protagonist is too invincible. I want to watch a life-and-death plot, but I don't know if the author can describe it well [eating melon] It's still okay, the plot is pretty good, the setting is okay, the main thing is that there is no female protagonist

After reading more than 70 chapters, I really can't stand it. First of all, the pace is very slow. You can see the protagonist getting stronger little by little. But after being baptized by too many cool articles, it really feels too routine. Training at every turn. Why do you always write about training? You can bring things with you in one sentence. Only two beans were opened in chapter 70 and then they entered randomly. How good is it to directly develop the eyes? What you wrote is the eye effect. That later stage is not NB

It's pretty, but the front is a little bit poisonous.

Fortunately, it's just that the protagonist's Sharingan talent is a bit too big. The world is so big, there are always some special talents. The Sharingan is special, but it doesn't need to be too different from other talents. I hope there will be some special supporting characters.

I've been reading it for a long time to make up my ratings, and I've forgotten it several times. The book is good-looking, but the author seems to stop updating for a few days, but just read some. If you don't want to be an eunuch, you'll keep chasing [Thinking][Thinking]

It's a bit stiff in the early stages, but the story that unfolds later is really good [please update]

I'll ask again, is it a single woman?

The main thing is that the background makes me feel comfortable. There are not so many so-called gods or the like, or the human side is relatively weak, and the plot is forced to be sensational. Also, at least there is no heroine at the moment, but I hope there are not too many talents. I think three is a bit too much now, and I actually think two is just right.

It's pretty good-looking. His fighting power finally didn't collapse.

So far, the overall plot is smooth. Come on!

In the early stage, there was a bit of fluff (but it's harmless [laughing] [like]). About chapter 50, the plot began to connect. The protagonist had something to do in each time period. The plot was very sticky and really interesting [full] [full] [full] It hasn't been updated yet. It's been three days. I have the ability to reply to book reviews but not the ability to update, right? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Oh, okay, it's more updated, just don't be a prisoner [full] [like]

Looks good, really looks good

It's super beautiful, super exciting, and very in line with my favorite novels. Incoherent I can't express in words how good this book is. It is much better than other novels that are passionate in the early stage and dull in the later stage.

Personally, I think it's okay. The only thing that's a little bit poisonous is giving exercises and other exercises to the fat man. If you continue to give exercises and pills and so on, it would be really too poisonous. It would make you feel very holy. After all, if you keep giving things reciprocally, it would be hatred rather than kindness.

Except for some problems in the early stage, the later part is okay, and some of the content is also very enjoyable to watch. There is currently no heroine (should there be no heroine, right?). As long as the later part is not too discordant or too poisonous, I will still continue to watch it. In addition, I am also very curious about what will happen when Baymax and Iron Hammer meet later [eating melon] (I quite like Baymax [shy]), and the author will update it soon!!! It's not enough!!! [Crying]