Spiritual Qi Revival: My Sharingan Crushes the Heavens

It's a story about the protagonist's growth. It's not an invincible novel. The plot is very exciting. I just don't know if there is a female protagonist. I hope there is no female protagonist. After all, this kind of novel will collapse if I don't control it well. It would be better to write without a female protagonist. And currently, there is no female protagonist, and there is no ambiguous partner. The protagonist is not interested in women.

Up to Chapter 269, except for the first dozen or so chapters which are relatively bland, there are no flaws. One particularly good thing about this novel is that it does not describe women's figures in detail (some novels clearly state that there is no CP, but as a result, the figures of the women around the male protagonist are always described in extremely detailed ways, which feels a bit "low"). So far, there are no ambiguous plots 👍, and although the force value is high, it is not too exaggerated. The two points of no cp and no ambiguity are already very good, and the plot is also good.

The protagonist is worthy of being a student. His eyes exude clear stupidity. He is not defensive at all towards others and shows his heart to his friends. Before and after signing the SSS contract, he never asked himself what obligations he had to fulfill, what he had to pay, and what he would get in return? All she said was to help him find out the cause of his parents' death! Depending on how fast you upgrade, you can do it in less than a year. So what's the point of signing this contract? Moreover, for a systematic person, the resources and abilities are given by the system. There is no need to sign any contract. And the fat man's upgrade speed is almost as fast as that of the systematic people. This is a big problem. Is the protagonist a nanny? You will give him resources and take him to the next book. You will also give him a training partner. Unless you make the fat man's problem as big as the protagonist, what is the point of training him? I am a good friend, but we are not on the same latitude. In the end, when we are strong enough, there will be no connection. It is just a waste of effort. The only thing that feels good is that there is no heroine and no ambiguity [laughter]

As long as you read it patiently, you will find that it is quite beautiful. I hope I can see the day it ends This ended a bit suddenly [shocked]

It's average, the writing is a bit messy, there are too many skills and it doesn't form its own system. The title is Sharingan, which is the pupil technique. The content is off topic. The pupil technique is the eyes and involves the soul, and there is no development in this aspect. Then the realm of the sword is not marked. There are so many things written in it. Later, it still involves cultivating immortals. Just like sword intention, laws, and development directions are very strange. If there is a system, why bother to make it so complicated? Readers will only find it confusing and verbose. Soul (pupil technique), physical training, sword intention, and spiritual power. Wouldn't it be good to develop these four well? Soul secret technique, physical training martial arts, and swordsmanship. How can we still lack attacks? Have you ever understood what sword cultivation is? Have you ever understood what pupil surgery is? If you want to write about cultivation of immortals, just write a little bit, add a little wherever you want, and then pull a lot and add a little more, and look at the ink

It's okay, there were some problems in the early stage, but it's pretty good later on.

I really can't stand it anymore. I have endured dozens of chapters. When I have been with that team, I just want to give a low score. You said it is a bit poisonous. OK, I can endure it. It has been more than a hundred chapters, and there is another burden. Doesn't that thing belong to Mirror Seven? You still followed and continued to go deeper together without saying a few words, because you were dead and exploded. Okay, I will treat you as a kind-hearted person. From now on, is Mader called you a bit poisonous? Can't see a little bit

Damn, what kind of rating is this? I almost missed it. This rating is a bit low for this book.

Come on, author.

Does it sound okay? At least it seems less intellectually addictive than other Naruto novels of the same type.