At the Beginning, Naruto Was Accepted as His Disciple, and His Chakra Increased by One Hundred Thousand Times.

The writing is quite good. Why is the score so low? It's because, the author, your updates are too slow, which affects the score.

Mainly because of his charisma, being decisive but also kind-hearted. I can feel it from the little squirrel.

It's good to watch. The new plot adds the original work. The plot is ups and downs and touching.

Not bad. I feel okay

The system said: "Author, can you write quickly? My appearances are too few. Do you want to catch some octopus for you?"

I think the writing is quite good. Although the protagonist seems aggrieved, this is not an invincible novel. There must be a climax of the story later. The previous ones are just foreshadowing. Those who don't understand should not make random comments. There are many loopholes in the settings written later. I hope the author can read the comments on these chapters.

I don't care so much, I just think this book is a good book, and I feel very happy to see it. In the early stage, I definitely didn't have any feeling for some NPC characters, but later on, I will slowly change. You have to go through a transformation process. When everyone plays the game, don't they just hit the monster NPCs casually?

This is the best Naruto fanfic I have read recently.

Come on, this is a joke, so why should it be more serious? Just make it look good. The plot setting is quite interesting, and many of the author's own settings are added within the framework of Naruto. There is no need to deliberately give a low score. Apart from the slow update, it is still a good novel.

This book is quite good, why is it so low rated? ? ? It's just that the updates are a little slow. Come on, author. You can do it. Come on.

Come on, author, it's up to you to save world peace.

Not bad, but some foreshadowing was not used

In fact, most of them are okay, but some small poisonous spots are very uncomfortable to see, just like throwing a cockroach into a pot of porridge. Although a lot of the porridge is clean and edible, it is very unpleasant. Poison point 1. Danzo is dead and the curse mark at the base of his tongue disappears. Then Danzo is written because the first-generation cells are suspected to be not completely dead. Poison point 2. Capturing Konohamaru wanted Konohamaru to destroy Konoha in the future. Although it was changed later, it was unrealistic. Poison point 3. As a time traveler, I knew there were corpses in the third generation but it didn't help. I was shocked and unprepared at the scene. I don't know later.

There are many books about Naruto who resist the showdown and are invincible. The plots are almost the same. What's the point? The style of this book is different and I think it's quite good. The author doesn't need to change anything. Just keep working hard and code until death.

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The writing is ok, and it is more in line with the character's personality. Is it so miserable that three generations have been hacked? [Face covering]

To be honest, it's very interesting. It's mainly because of its endurance. Normally, when I read other novels, I read half of it and then don't want to read it anymore. What can I say about this novel? I went round and round and I finished it. Anyway, it's quite interesting from beginning to end. The author doesn't have a good word count and the content is quite sufficient.

Author, how could you do this? The Guinness record is for typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you need to eat about 100 words per minute. Spend two hours, another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour to fish in a daze, and you should have nine hours to type. Linyi typed 435,780 words. Calculating 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so little content every day. How come? To be honest, is this a deduction? No one in the production team dared to rest like this, so the author quickly got up to code!

The author hurriedly updated it. It's good. It's not affected by the plot framework. The plot is novel and it will become popular faster. Your work is popular quickly. You must not delay the update. If you delay it for a long time, it will become popular. Many of the ones I watched were not popular before. If you can't keep up with the updates, they will become popular. It's not that it's not good-looking, but it's very interesting. Many people keep reading it, but keep it up. Most authors feel that they are no longer popular and do not want to update, and then they become cold. So once the cycle starts, the author yourself does not want to update. Come on, I rarely review. The novels I can review are not necessarily popular, but they must all be excellent novels.

This book on Naruto is well written, yes, really well written. It is a brand new storyline, and it describes the dark side of the Hokage Village. The protagonist moves out of character many times, and the portrayal is very good. However, the last chapter ended a bit too hastily, which brought down the main book. But it's still worth reading. Unlike other Naruto books, which are just anecdotes. Still a good review

It's so good-looking, the protagonist is very independent, not aggrieved at all, does not suppress the protagonist, does not lick Konoha, it is worth watching, the five-star praise cannot let me be poisoned by myself [smile][smile][smile]

Overall, it feels very good to watch. Except for the protagonist in the early stage, which seems a bit toxic, the subsequent plot is still good. The role of the fiancée is a bit unnecessary. In short, I will continue to follow it. It is a Naruto fanfic worth reading.

It's very interesting, but I don't really like seeing Naruto go dark. After all, he is different from Erzhu. He is perfect. If he goes dark, he won't be perfect. However, people can't be perfect. This is very unfair to Naruto.

Give Naruto to Sasuke. Will we get 10,000 ninjas [laughing]

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The plot is very reasonable and exciting.

The author is really awesome. It's so popular and it hasn't collapsed even after nearly 200 chapters. It's a very enjoyable book.

It's over like this! What's next? There are still a lot of plots that haven't been written🙀

After reading it, I realized that there was a reason for the low score. . . . . .

Come on Sasuke, this is for you Naruto. Come on Sakura, this is Sasuke for you. Come on, Li, this is Sakura for you.