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The foreshadowing needs to be quick, it's well written, but I'm curious how many female leads there are? (I love harem stories the most)

I found that a lot of people who read novels on Tomato liked the kind of stories where I was born invincible, walked to pick up materials, someone would kneel down to give me money when I went out, a girl I met for five seconds would fall in love with me, and alchemy requires equal exchange, and I still want to lose money every day. This novel has surpassed most time-travel genres on Tomato. Looking at some brainless translations, I feel tired when I read novels, let alone those who write novels. It's still the same sentence. What kind of bike do you need for free? No one is perfect. If you want to see something that perfectly suits your own needs, write it yourself.

It's still to my liking, but it's just too little, not enough to watch [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's very exciting. It deifies the world of Eastern cultivation. It's so awesome. How did the Song Dynasty be destroyed? How did the Eight-Power Allied Forces and the Japanese invasion of China happen? There are also Wu Huan Hua, and Huang Chao of the Tang Dynasty has trampled all the streets. The suppression of Buddha in various dynasties and the Huangtian Rebellion in the Han Dynasty

It's pretty good to watch, but after watching it for so long, I'm confused as to how many female leads he has, but the rest is okay.

It's quite good-looking. It's about the Eastern and Western realms, and the protagonist's messed up thoughts gave me a headache. In real life, I'm a person who likes wisdom and strength, and I'm not very interested in love and love. Although many things in the second society are a little simpler, but the ultimate goal of the protagonist is to be a fourth-level and potion master.

Not bad, I recommend getting into it

I have read a lot of HP books, and this one is considered the most creative and reasonable. However, it would be better to change the title, as it does not show its own characteristics.

To be honest, I'd give it a 9 for the story. It's not as good as some particularly good HP fics, but the setting is particularly good, interesting but not overwhelming. I think the book's low score is because it contains some settings about oriental cultivators that have attracted a lot of people who like to read oriental fantasy books. Friends, but rather than cultivating immortals, it is more like covering up the skin of cultivating immortals. The Eastern cultivation system is more similar to the refining of Qi in One Person, so those book friends who come for Eastern fantasy may be disappointed, but for some Ham fans, it is a very good book.

This book is okay so far. Readers of many works who resist Our Lady are actually resisting not the positive energy itself, but often the didactic talk in the works. It is difficult to control the word forgiveness. Some things don't need to be described too much. . . It's hard to agree with everyone. They are all ordinary people who have certain qualities that they cannot achieve but still yearn for. (I admire Mary, but I don't like Mary's literature.)

It's okay. The writing is actually quite good (≧∇≦*). The advantage is that it incorporates Chinese things. Although it may be a bit uncomfortable, the author did a good job😊, which makes up for a lot of my regrets. The reasons for poor performance may be the following: 1. How do you say the title of the book? Now this name gives people a casual meaning. The story can be funny, but the book title cannot😄. This is the first impression. For example, if I read this book and the author named it casually, I will also be a bit casual. I will just read it and will not add it to the bookshelf. Second, the subject matter I mentioned before is relatively niche.

I like it personally, but I didn't write it specifically around the trio.

The rating of this book shouldn't be so low, so I gave it a lower rating than the full-star rating. Of course, I didn't think it would reach 5 stars, but the rating should be above 8. Talking about the overall feeling, many people feel that the low rating is because it incorporates a large amount of Eastern cultivation content. It is very thoughtful but the opening chapter has too much content and feels a bit disjointed. The author has a certain understanding of the original work and the official content, but it is not detailed enough and there are many discrepancies in the content. Of course, this does not deny the fact that this book is pretty well written. If fans are short of fan fiction, this book will be a good choice.

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The writing is very good, but some paragraphs still feel quite disgusting. Although it is necessary, it still seems a bit disgusting, but the writing is very good. Well, well, it's getting colder and colder in the back.

Hehe, it's not bad. The author uses his own writing style to expand the entire world, instead of just limiting himself to the world view of the original work. The author also wants William to win over the future minister as soon as possible. When will it be done? I will give you gifts every day and I will do what I say! (Loyal Hermione party) And I'm looking forward to William's operation at the Final Four Ball (hehe, I like to watch women fight the most [laughing evilly])

After reading Chapter 61, I realized something was wrong and started reading the back and reading the comments. The writing is good, and the experts have already mentioned the shortcomings, so I won't repeat them. It's just that the book didn't suit my taste. In addition, I feel that if the Eastern and Western settings are made larger, I can directly write an original world, and there is no need for Harry fans to filter readers. One more thing, come on, author.

I recommend a book by the author: "Monster Hunting High School", which is also an original novel with a slow popularity and a larger world view. I hope the author can absorb the elements in this book. This book is also a magical world that combines Chinese and Western elements, with a little bit of Harry Potter elements (only a few sentences)

There are so many content platforms, but Tomato is actually at the bottom of the contempt chain. But this article by the author effectively fights back against the chain of contempt. Good work is good work, anywhere.

The writing is good, but it is only suitable for old bookworms [laughing]

It's really excellent. It's a fine piece of Harry Potter fan fiction. It involves some classical Chinese in the early stages, and the more you read it, the better it gets.

The introduction is right, slow to heat up. I haven't read much, it's only about 100 chapters, the beginning is very sophisticated, and the setting is very clever. However, I don't like watching harems (I only like to watch single or no heroines), and I am still impatient, which can be said to be incompatible with each other. Those who like watching harems and don't mind the slow start will probably like it; those who don't like watching harems and are impatient can stop wasting their time.

Overall, it's really good to watch, and the plot is quite interesting, with ups and downs. The author's writing style is also good, and the story description and atmosphere rendering are very good. And even though it is a Harry Potter fan, many parts are the author's personal design, which is great. ·🌟·🌟·🌟·"Harem/Multiple heroines"·🌟·🌟·🌟·

All I can say is that it is difficult to agree with others [I learned it]

It's very well written, good luck to the author. I have read many works, and some of them are very vague. And some authors feel like they have a soul when they write. I feel that the author has created a very clear world. I can only feel this feeling in certain works. Come on, author.

The content is quite good, it expands the Eastern worldview, and the content is rich enough, especially some brilliant plots, and some warm scenes in families and campuses. However, some of the settings of love tribulations are too abrupt and leave people speechless. It's really not easy

Gouzi, you have changed. You used to have four or five updates every day, but today you only have three updates. . . . No, if this continues, it feels like you, the author, are evolving towards a beast [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Author, what the hell is Chapter 7? There was KFC in that era

It's that dragon that's annoying me to death

After reading a hundred chapters, the book is really good. The low rating is probably because of the audience. The author's writing is more hard-core. Generally, only old bookworms who are interested in urban cultivation + Harry Potter can read it. However, most readers of novels nowadays are impetuous. For example, I admit that I don't have the patience to read it slowly. If it had been five or six years ago, I would still be able to read it with gusto.