Urban Rebirth: I Am Actually the Rich Second Generation of Cannon Fodder

Overall, the writing is really good, and there are no major problems so far. It's worth reading, and there are innovations in the article. However, I think it is a little inappropriate to list the realm divisions in a separate chapter at the beginning. Best of all... It would be nice to photoshop each chapter. After all... There are a lot of people who don't like to see this.

Let's evaluate it. The author has always emphasized that he is a novice. Indeed, the front is not very good. The main reason is that characters appear suddenly. It is very sudden, and some messy plots will suddenly pop up later. But one thing is certain. The author writes more and more smoothly. This is a good thing. I hope that Tomato will produce another excellent author.

The subject matter is new and the ideas are fresh. You can add a little emotional line appropriately, such as adding a fiancée or something. There are also multiple pairs of children of destiny to take action to add a bit of interest. If possible, get some that are reborn with only memories. Also, it is not necessary to kill every protagonist. If you have a good attitude and character, you can take them as subordinates or friends. I feel like this year and a half in the book is so slow. I like the end of the world. I don't know when I will see the protagonist start a plane war in the end of the world. I look forward to it [Love]

Um, how can I put it this way? This book gave me a very strange feeling. I always felt that something was missing, just like a dish tastes weird without a single seasoning. After all, the author, you also said that it is normal for a novice to miss something. Overall, it is pretty good.

Because the prologue clearly explains some of the settings of this article, I like it very much. Although the writing style is a bit too white [face covering], I can continue to read it. I really like this kind of story about an invincible single female protagonist. It is a pity that the ending is too hasty because the data is not very good [crying]. Looking forward to the next one~

Come on, don't be lazy.

It's a pity that it's too short. I want to watch a movie that is neither the protagonist nor the villain, but one that saves those who are suffering. Whether it's a villain, a pig's foot, or a female villain, as long as they are miserably cheated by heaven, just go and help them.

The author is great and the writing is very good, but I feel that the female protagonist has no sense of existence, and the male protagonist does not really care about her.

It feels pretty good, quite interesting

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

Today is the same as always

It's the first time I've seen a single heroine as a villain.

That's great, at least it won't exist [laughter]

Come on, come on, come on! I've been looking for a book like this for a long time.

You deserve to be an author who is so stacked that he is almost crazy and full of desire to survive [face covering]

Very good, good luck to the author! Come on!

Big cheers for the author!

Very interesting content

Emmmmm The author's crazy stacking of armor is a joke... When I read what the author wrote, I felt embarrassed for the characters in it. Also a bit of a laugh. . . . ———————————— This plot is sped up and makes me laugh to death

Come on, I want to see the male and female protagonists spreading dog food [smile][smile][smile]

The writing is pretty good and the plot is compact, but I also hope that there will be a child with good luck, otherwise it is not good if it is all bad. The author has to work hard and give me five stars [blowing kiss]

My rating is, five stars, very, very beautiful (personal opinion, don't criticize)

This book is interesting

Five-star support~ It ended quite suddenly. . . .

How can I say it? It's okay.

Writing is pretty good. Good

After reading your resume, I decided that it was a single female lead, which is a five-star rating for me. This is a pretty good book

You want me to say she's pretty. (/ω＼)Shy or pretty? (>ω<)It still looks good! (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

The writing is immature and lacks foreshadowing, but since this is a newcomer's first book, I'd like to give it an 8 out of 100 encouragement.

It's not bad. It's the first time I've seen this style of villain. I didn't deliberately slap him in the face.